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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear awesome updates for a change I loved Purvi new avatar as modern and arrogant stubborn girl.Arjun and purvi first meeting was beautifully written purvi still thinks arjun as friend thats nice .i hope Arjun will make her realize the value of family love and respect.Interesting dear pls update soon and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part dear😳 read both the parts😊 loved it..plz do continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update debu.plzz put more arvi scenes in the next update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 6: Fresh Face of the Year goes to..

Next day is Sunday, normal holiday for all of us, much awaited for many and disliked by few. Arjun is one of them and the reason is Purvi, though he can get to see Purvi any day any time, still he already has started enjoying Purvi in classes.
A message blinks in Arjun's mobile and the number is indicating from Purvi's cell phone.
"please come to the Chruch Gate around 9am. I will be waiting for you, it's urgent so can't tell over phone, from your friend Purvi"
The message is small, but there is a word called "urgent" which has made Arjun little worried. He reaches the venue before time. Now, old Church Gate is not so famous for everyone, as this place is not commonly used by public. This was the place where little Purvi and Arjun used to come during childhood days for playing their stupid games. Purvi comes little later.
"Is that everything alright, Purvi? why have you sent me that urgent message which you can't say over phone. please tell me, I am dying, I am so worried for you" says Arjun
"arre chill chill, that's not so big urgent, actually I need a small help from you" Purvi is trying to make Arjun calm.
Arjun: help!!!what type of help?
Purvi: Arjun, I know, every year our college organises Fresh Face of the year and the last date for submitting the entry is tomorrow and I want to register my name there.
Arjun: But this is for the first year student nah, and you are in second year. If you joined last year, this could apply for you..
Purvi: yea yea i know it, but last year I was not a student of your college nah? I just took admission this year, so I am the fresher one.
Arjun:but Purvi, college has to maintain some rules, how can it break it??
Purvi: I am not saying to break it, if there is rule, there must be any loopholes nah? and here, I need your help. You go and convince Principal sir, he loves you, he will surely agree with you..please Arjun, you have to do it for me..please Arjun, bas itna sa help kar do..
Arjun..but..hummm..achha okay, I will try, if he agrees I will submit your form too, but what about Manav uncle? have you taken permission from him too?
Purvi: I have asked that Arjun will be there in that event and he will take care myself too and I said papa that you specially want me to participate here..you know nah he loves and trust you so much, so he has given the permission.
Arjun: now I am feeling sad Purvi, you have lied to your papa..I was even not aware about it
Purvi: what lies Arjun...kuch achhe ke liye agar thoda sa jhoot bol na pare toh jhoot achhe hay and I am not harming anybody, I just want to fulfill my dream in career Arjun, you know I was doing small modelling in Australia too, one day I will be counted as top super model in India..don't your help your friend to fulfill her dream??
Arjun: okay Purvi..I will try..I can do anything for you ..
Purvi: Thanks Arjun, you are my sweetheart. I will give you a big treat, pakka wala promise.
and she hugs him. Purvi knows that only Arjun can do it and eventually, Arjun manages everything. First he has helped Purvi to register her name for the contest by convincing Principal sir, after that he also has a good talk with Manav. Everything is going so smooth for Purvi. In college she has now good gang of friends like Sachin, Tejas and Arjun too.
On the other hand, Vinay is noticing everything about Purvi. He really likes people with loads of attitude, so he becomes so eager to make Purvi her friend. By this time, the D day means the final day of that contest comes.
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"I am please to announce the Fresh Face of the Year, she is good looking,beautiful, gorgeous and intelligent at the same time, she is new here but she has already win our heart by her charming behavior..She is none other than Ms Purvi Deshmukh" announces Principal sir and asks Purvi on stage. He gives her the bunch of flower and the crown. This is the proud moment for Purvi, everyone is standing there in the auditorium clapping for her, she feels so happy and satisfied.

Apke Didar Ko Nikalte H Tare,
Apki Khushbu Se Chalti H Bahare.

Apke Pass Ha Aise Nazare,
Ki Chup-Chup K Chand B Apko Nihare

Vinay says the above sayari while Purvi is coming down from the stage. "congratulation!!!" Vinay says and extend his hands." thank you so much and BTW nice sayari" says Purvi with a wide smile on face while leaving the place.

Musqurte He To Bijliya Gira Dete He
Bat Krte He To Dewana Bna Dete He
Husan Walo Ki Nazar Kam Nahi Kyamat Se
Aag Pani Ma Vo Nazaro Se Laga Dete He.

Vinay: this is nothing in front of you, the world's most beautiful girl
Purvi: Not world's, but Loyal's college only..she smiles
Vinay: But, this college is my world only, so for mine you are the most beautiful girl in this world
Purvi: You talk good and those sayari's are also good, but I would be more impressed if I could hare something original from you.
Vinay:

the rose is red and the sky is blue
oh my beautiful girl, I really like you

This is purely made by me..trust me and I know this only. I wanted to impress you, so I memorised those two sayaries for you only.
Purvi: but how do you know that I am going to win this contest?
Vinay: I knew it on that day when I first met you and you were right, I am the first person standing here to wish you..can we be friends?

Purvi thinks for a while after that shakes hand with the smiling face,"Friends"

While Purvi is busy in making new friends, Arjun is standing at the corner of the same auditorium awaiting for Purvi.

Sachin: You are here Arjun, I am looking for you here and there..chalo let's have some cold drink, by the way, where is Purvi? I want to congratulate her

Arjun: She is there Sachin, she is the new star, so she is mobbed..

Sachin: have you wished her? now wait for her special treat which she has promised you

Arjun: not, not yet, will wish her on the way, she is busy now, aise bhi everyday i drop her home in my scooter, so why hurry, she should now mingle with everyone in this college..

While Arjun is talking about Purvi, Tejas has heard this and comes to Arjun

Tejas: don't you think that Purvi kuch zada hi busy hai in making new friends?

Arjun: no Tejas, give her sometimes, she will be alright.

Tejas: firbhi, did she thanks ever to you?after all you have given..

Arjun:.achha guys, I will catch you later, I must thank to Princi once..

Arjun goes from the place without arguing much with Tejas. That night after the party was over, Arjun is looking for Purvi when Sachin comes to Arjun..

Arjun: Have you seen Purvi here?

Sachin: Purvi? she has already left with Vinay..didn't she tell you?

Arjun: she has left with Vinay..oohhh..yea yea, she has told me once, I forgot..poor memory..Arjun tries to smile

Sachin:hummm..chalo drop me home, I have helped Tejas to get a cab, now you drop me home Arjun.

That is the night when two of them are not sleeping..that is the night when everything seems so perfect still something is missing, that is the night after that some lives will be changed..


Note: the sayaris are taken from popular site

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yippe perhaps i am d 1st 1 to cmnt here..Btw luv d updt bt also feeling vry bad 4 arjun.Arjun is ignoring all purvis fault..Luv d shairi..I hpe purvi understands her mistake vry soon b4 its too late..Thnx debu 4 d updt.Updt d nxt part soon.Love meghna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 7: Party at retro Pub

That night is memorable for Purvi Deshmukh for many reason. One of these are, she is now new Diva of Loyal College and everyone has started admiring her beauty, her intelligence. Second, she has made a new friend today who can give value to her.
A message blinks in Purvi's mobile. She takes the phone and sees,
"may I have the pleasure to take out the most beautiful girl with me in dinner and the treat is from my side, after all she has won the crown"
"ohh, this is from Vinay" Purvi becomes excited, she thinks "so, he is basically asking me for a date..but what's so hurry??" she smiles and send a message to the four cell phone number at a time
"tomorrow is a holiday and we will spend together at Retro Pub, sharp at 6pm, dinner from my side..see you there then - meet with you at the venue - Tejas, Sachin, Arjun and Vinay with me, the host"
After sometimes reply comes.
Sachin: waoo, great place to freak out
Tejas: thanks for the invitation, I am in
Arjun: I will be there sharp..my treat, i guess
Vinay: I am hurt, let's see when I can meet my princess, can I pick you up from your house then? now, if you don't agree, I will not go any where..
Purvi replies: okay then, I will be ready at 5-30pm near the crossover pool. please don't come to my place. c ya..
That night Arjun arrives home sadly. Ashna becomes surprised as he has never seen his happy go lucky son in such a sad mood, moreover he should enjoy that Purvi has won the crown. Ashna becomes worried but doesn't ask anything to Arjun as she prefers to give mental space to her son. So, when he sees Purvi's message, he starts feeling better, but he is not liking the fact that Vinay will be going there too.
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At 6pm Gate of Retro Pub

Sachin: Hi Arjun..when did you come here? and what about Purvi? Did not see come here with you?
Arjun: do you see her with me? nahi na..then why are you asking me??
Sachin: okay okay chill yaar, both of you live at the same place, so I think you will come together.
Arjun:I am sorry Sachin, I didn't want to hurt you, I want to keep myself cool but I am loosing my control, you know she is coming with Vinay, otherwise Vinay wont come..she has never asked me if I am coming or not
Sachin: Why don't you tell her?
Arjun: what?? what I suppose to say??
Sachin: that you love her..
Arjun: I love her..are you crazy? she is my childhood friend and I just care for her. Vinay is not good for her, I know her from childhood and I know her better than anyone knows..
Sachin:You were waiting for her since ten long years, you were counting each and every day of your life when she will be coming, you have lied your Manav uncle for her, you have convinced Princi for her too and now you are feeling jealous that she is coming with Vinay..how many examples you want Arjun to understand that you love her? and after all of these, you will say that she is just your friend, I will agree it..please..I am your best buddy yaar..
Arjun: you are done mere Love Guru..you toh can't say this to Tejas that you love her, you are telling me..
Tejas comes to the spot where both of the friend are waiting for Purvi..
Tejas: hey guys, you are here, why didn't you go inside? waiting for me ha ha??sorry yaar, I am late, I was busy with the make and didn't notice that I am already running short..by the way, where is our host of the evening?
Arjun: she is on her way my Miss India..
At the same time, a big white Honda City stop there. Purvi in a red short gown with open long here comes out from the car. Vinay on the other hand goes to park the car at the right place.
Purvi: hey guys, sorry for keep you waiting, that Vinay nah, doesn't know the right way though he stays here from his childhood, he keeps me dragging here and there..
Sachin:can we go inside, my legs are paining..
Purvi: yea sure sure, Vinay has gone for parking, he will join us inside..come Tejas, come Arjun..

That evening seems normal to everyone. Sachin and Tejas go to the bar for taking some drink, they come back and see Arjun is sitting alone in the sofa.
Tejas: what happen? where is Ms Deshmukh?
Arjun: she wanted to dance with me. but you know I am very poor in shaking legs, so she went with Vinay..you go na , join them in the dance floor.
After that Sachin and Tejas had to join Purvi and Vinay on the dance floor..
Tejas: poor Arjun, I am getting angry on Purvi, she is more interested in Vinay, but look at Arjun, still he feels for her. Sometimes we choose wrong person in our life..
Sachin: but, love is that feeling, we can't control ourselves nah..sometimes we know that she is not meant for us, but still we can't stop myself loving from her..
Tejas: But Purvi should not do this to Arjun, she should care for him, Arjun is such a good boy, he deserves someone better than this Purvi Deshmukh..
Sachin: now if Arjun hears that he will feel bad, you like Arjun, so you should be careful so that he is not hurt..
Tejas: yes Sachin, my mistake..Arjun is already so hurt, I will make sure that he will not feel bad more due to my behavior..and thanks for making me realised and it seems that Arjun's company has taught you something serious about love..
Both of them starts laughing, everything is so messy right now. Let's see where these people go with the feeling of love, friendship, expectation, jealousy..


Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Amazing update debu,loved it...loved the way arjun is worried about purvi...Waiting for more great updates like this one from u in the future..once again u've done an amazin job,keep it up n thank you for the pm👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😛😛
Edited by kikia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome updates debu,feel sad for arjun plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey debu sorry for the late comment...as i told you that if you update in the night i will loose my first position 😭

ok let it be now coming to your updates i just just loved it and this Arjun is so caring for Purvi but this Purvi is not at all looking at our dear Arjun...and as sachin said Arjun is in love 😳 😳 ...hope purvi realises this soon...😳 😳...waiting for the next part soon debu..

can i suggest you one thing...like you i used to also update regularly but palak suggested me that i should give my readers some time so that they get anxious to read you updates...so if you dont mind update your ffs but not this much early...give us some time to get eager reading your update...ok...sorry if you felt bad...just my point of view...

and once again both the updates were awesme 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read both the parts dear and i loved them👏 they are awesome😊 i feel bad for arjun..😭 wana c what happens when he realizes his love for purvi😳 plz update soon cant wait for the next chapter😊

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