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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Salrina_Ashvik
Chp8 aww arjun knws how to make purvi smile..His shayeri part was amazing...Dat khatara fight is so cute..Omg arvi in shiv mandir alone nd also rain is thr nw i cant wait 4 nxt chptr luv it debu..Thnx 4 pm nd updt soon plz

ArVi in Shiv Mandir☺️, want to write some good ArVi scene this time

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arvifan1

@arvifan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Thank You for your liking and comment, I wanna make some major twists here,😉 let's see, lagta hai everybody is getting bored

no debu i am sure that no one is getting bored 😳...ur ff is just awesome and interesting 😳 plz update soon...

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Piper Mclean

@Never_alone1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Uff... Finally i'm done with reading all the previous parts today :-D and sorry for not commenting before :-( Dedu 🤗 ur simply amazing gal **tani bow downs to debu** realy loved ur FF alot its damn interseting :) lol 🤣 arjun sehayri hahaha.. Loved their frndship but realy feeling bad for Ak :'( if purvi contiunes to filrt with vinay than i want a new girl for my Ak as i cant bear seeing him down here its enough in the show :'( hope purvi changes her attiudte and i advise you to post this FF in our Arvi family group i'm sure u vil get more likes and comments there too :-)) thank u so much and love you <3 !

Edited by bravearvians - 12 years ago

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: bravearvians
Uff... Finally i'm done with reading all the previous parts today :-D and sorry for not commenting before :-( Dedu 🤗 ur simply amazing gal **tani bow downs to debu** realy loved ur FF alot its damn interseting :) lol 🤣 arjun sehayri hahaha.. Loved their frndship but realy feeling bad for Ak :'( if purvi contiunes to filrt with vinay than i want a new girl for my Ak as i cant bear seeing him down here its enough in the show :'( hope purvi changes her attiudte and i advise you to post this FF in our Arvi family group i'm sure u vil get more likes and comments there too :-)) thank u so much and love you <3 !

OMG..this is something so so beautiful and many thanks for those beautiful words, it means a lot to me🤗
trust me Tanya, it means a lot to me😳..thanks so much for all of your love, support and appreciation

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jkhusi

@jkhusi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Awesome update dedu,plz update soon

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

First of all, sorry for this super late update😳 and many thanks for Bharu who have constantly encouraged me to write it🤗. This part is dedicated to you my sweetheart.

This chapter is bit a passionate one. So, people under matured age group, please read it at your own risk😉😆

Chapter 9: The passionate ArVi

"It's so raining heavily outside nah Arjun, and this seems as been mausam ka baarish, aaj zaroor kuch achha hone wala hai" Purvi says and smile while looking at Arjun. She is standing at the nearest pillar an one hand distance from Arjun. Purvi continues "You know Arjun, whenever I get hurt, you always make me smile, whenever I feel alone, you always support me. But look at Vinay, he is so rude to me, he is such a.." Purvi can't complete her words and her voice choked. Her unspoken sorrow now wants to come out in the form of tears.

"Can we please leave Vinay alone, You are now with you friend Arjun and please don't cry Purvi" Arjun comes closer to wipe out her tears.

Both of them are completely drenched by the time when they could manage to go to that Shiv temple. Arjun can see the each and every curves of Purvi's feminine body perfectly and he can not resist himself. So he feels embarrassed for a moment.

Purvi can not control herself and her emotion comes out heavily when Arjun comes near to her. She holds Arjun tightly and starts crying. It seems like Purvi is competing with nature, who can pour more water.

Now Arjun can feel Purvi extra ordinary soft body. Her soft naval touches his rough abdomen and the light sound of Purvi's bangles is making some tune within his head. The aroma of her body and hair has just perfectly blended with the artificial fragrance of perfume which spreads a beautiful heavenly smell that makes Arjun more mesmerized.

Arjun brings his lips to the check of Purvi where tear drops just left its sign. He tries to suck it. This is unexpected for Purvi too, but she was so depressed by his boyfriend's behavior, she needs a secured nest. She has already closed her eyes, now Arjun's lips has made her shivered. A thunder strikes outside to let everyone know that this rain has something more with it. Purvi keeps her both hands into Arjun's hairs, she wants to give herself now and Arjun's strong hands hold Purvi's thin waistline, he is the secured place where he can protect Purvi from any trouble.

Purvi's lip become a bit wide and Arjun's lips touche this pink,soft lips for the first time. He can actually feels the softness of her tongue, lips and face. For Arjun, the taste of first kiss of his life was so different, something more sweeter than any sweets, he can feel the choco and strawberry flavor of her lipstick. This is so peaceful and blissful for Purvi too - a satisfying realisation of feeling, there is hardly any lust in it. They can not realise how long it has taken.

Suddenly Purvi opens her eyes and starts staring at him. She steps back and arranges her cloth. Arjun feels uneasy now. Both of them know it, both of them can feel it, both of them can't maintain the eye contact. They are feeling guilty, don't know why, but they becomes unrest with each other.

"Let's go now, otherwise we will be late" says Purvi "Rain has stopped already"
Arjun and Purvi starts walking with their damaged scooter, but both behaves like a stranger.

Note- sorry again for this short update, I will be back soon with the bigger one. I was bit nervous as I was writing this type of passionate scene for the first time of my life, don't know if you liked it or not.

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ParinConnects

@ParinConnects

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Oh ghosh debu is that really you who wrote this...omg i didnt knew that u are so so romantic dear...but u know i am very angry why did to ended the scene i wanted it to continue.😳 😳 😳 ...see how dirty mind m i 😆 ...and why did u updated so late ...and that too so smalll...please debu please update fast...i want to know what happens next and also want more scenes like this 😆 😉 ☺️ ☺️...see m still blushing...please update soon debu...luv u...good work once again ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

and yay i am the first one 😆 😉

Edited by pkarvi - 12 years ago

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Awww debu,thats so sweet of you to dedicate this update for me...love you debu and yes im always there to boost you up whenever you need it❤️...coming to the update...that was sooo romantic,you've done an amazing job..the way how you describe arjun feeling at that time was fantastic...arjun is really a true friend to purvi...i really love their friendship in your ff...which soon is gonna be love😳😳LOVE YOU DEBU AND YOUR FF and yes waiting eagerly for the next update...jaldi jaldi update kar😳

Edited by kikia - 12 years ago

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arvifan1

@arvifan1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Debu...it was an AWESOME update...ahh loved it so much...😳

plz i want a longer update next time...wowww the update is making me ☺️☺️

plz update soon... cant wait at all fr the next chapter😊

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

OMG..how can I miss this one..?
LOVED it...!!
ArVi's first kiss..masha allah..
was awesome..!!
loved the way u described it debu di..*blushing*
Fab update..!!
Update soon and do PM me...!!

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