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Childhood memories play a vital role in our life. Two great friends of childhood separate from each other and again meet after long years. But one of them has already covered miles distance while another still remains in childhood. This is a story of Love, Friendship, Faith, breach of trust, sacrifice and dedication as per destiny's rule.

Hello Haaii Peeps, Friends, Dosto..I am Debu (waise naam toh suna hi hoga😆😆😆)

I gonna write first ArVi FF of my life😛😳 and for that Thanks to my friends who have supported and encouraged me. Now:

1) The character names are taken from this serials, but their characteristics and features are purely imaginary. there is no connection with reality or any other show/writing/creation.

2) Please forgive any faults/mistakes of mine and feel free to criticise as this is necessary for my writing skill improvement

3) My writing is not intended to hurt anyone (neither any fanbase) - please take it as positive spirit.

4) If you feel it a quite boring one, please express your views, I will stop making you bored😉😆

5) I will write it in a small small chapters/fractions so that you all do not loose your patience.

6) Please LIKE thoko, if you really like it - all types of feedback are welcome

PS: For receiving update intimation, pls add me to your buddy list.😳

Thanks for going through this thread..here I go...enjoy reading...😃

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-INDEX-

Page2 : Chapter 1: Ten Years Back from now in the year 2002

Page 4 : Chapter 2: After ten years when they come back and introducing Ms Purvi Deshmukh

Page 6 : Chapter 3: Dinning room conversation (and Promo too)

Page 7: Chapter 4: When boy meets girl

Page 8: Chapter 5: Purvi meets Tejas and Vinay

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Debu

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-IMPORTANT CHARACTERS-

More the story will progress, I will keep adding the names here:

1)Arjun - 18 years college student studying English literature

2) Purvi- 17 years girl interested in fashion world

3) DK and Ashna - parents of Arjun

4) Manav Deshmukh - father of Purvi

5) Sachin Gupta - best friend of Arjun and class mate too

6) Tejaswini aka Tejas - class mate of Arjun and study partner, a happy go lucky girl, but very serious about studies

7)Vinay - he is most handsome, richest boy in the college and center of attraction for all girls. His father is having chains of multiple businesses and one of the trustee of the college.

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ParinConnects

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Posted: 12 years ago

yaayyy the first one to comment 🥳

debu i would really love to read your ff...but please one request like others do not take months and months to update 😕

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arvifan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

waiting forward to read ur ff...update soon😳😊

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PoohLover

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Posted: 12 years ago

Debu i really want to read ur ff,start soon😛😊😊

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Piper Mclean

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Posted: 12 years ago

🤣 mai yaha bi aapna post reserve karne ja rahi thi haha.. Lol .. Debu 🤗 thank u for giving us a ff dear ! Update it soon...!

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SassyMiley

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Posted: 12 years ago

debu cantinue soon dear i'm eagerly waiting:)

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khushikulz19

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey update soon di... im eagerly waiting 2 read it

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 1: Ten Years Back from now in the year 2002

Scene 1

A little Arjun comes to the terrace of little Purvi's house to play with her. This is their daily routine, after finishing schools, they catch each other either at Arjun's place or at Purvi's place. Arjun comes late today, so Purvi is angry on him. Let's see what Purvi is saying to Arjun:

- You are again late Arjun, tum hamesha aisa kyun karte ho? I was waiting for you so long and yesterday, we didn't finish our match, you know I have not eaten properly after coming back from school and papa is scolding me for that, but hamesha ki taarah, you are again late, now I have to give you the punishment of being the thief and I will search you..

- arre listen listen listen Purvi, look what I have bring for you, it's Aam Ka Aachar, you love it na, mom has made this yesterday only and thought to bring this for you

- waaaooo, I really love this Arjun, but you should ask for Ashna maasi's permission once na

- she will not give it Purvi, day after tommrow we are having our exam na?? But, anything for you Purvi, I know you like it, so I bring it for you - this is important for me.. tu kha le pehle

Purvi has already started eating it and a beautiful smile comes on he face. This is her one of the most favorite thing in this world, so she did not hear the last few words of Arjun.

Scene 2

- This is for the last time, I am saving you from Miss Gomez's anger, otherwise she will definitely punish you for not doing her maths homework, says Purvi

- arre, I know, you are always there for me, bass I need to finish this last round of game and I will surely give you the latest issue of World's Fashion magazine in return, pakka promise

- ye lo, I am done with your maths home work and be ready with the magazine and a pizza too

- awww, now pizza comes from where??? we had a talk of magazine only

- pizza is coming because now I want to have it, otherwise I will reveal your secret to uncle and maasi and after that you know what gonna happen with you

- Purvi ki bachhi, don't give me that dhamki, I will see you soon.

These are the small sweet incidents of Arjun-Purvi's childhood. Days are good and nights are even best, all seems right & smooth.

Scene 3: few days later at the evening while coming back from school

- Arjun, you know nah papa has got a new job in Australia and we are going with him in the next month.So, this is my last few days with you in India and in school. Papa has already arranged everything there, I am so excited..says Purvi all of a sudden

- what???what you just said???you are going to relocate in Australia and wo bhi hamesha ka liye..I just cant believe it Purvi.. Arjun is about to cry..

- wait wait, no not for hamesha k liye, but for few days off course

- and you are telling this to me now, how could you Purvi, please don't go nah!!! I will never keep you waiting, I will never hold your hairs and I will bring you the Fashion Magazine for each month, promise you

- arre buddhu, papa has got a new job there and we will be in touched nah, don't worry, I will be your friend forever.

That night Arjun does not sleep, he can not accept the fact that Purvi will go away from him, he can not play with Purvi, no one will be there to do his maths homework, anymore as Purvi is going so far from him.

That night Purvi also does not sleep, she is really excited, she wants to see the new country, she has read about Australia in her geography book, but now she is ready to go there - that big opera house is calling her.

Few days later at International Airport

DK: It's good that you have got the best oppertunity there, I am happy for you, but never forget your root, your motherland Manav. Try to keep in touch always and if you need anything from me, please let me know

Manav: Yes DK and I always do remember your words, You know you were always there for me during my initial struggle days, I was so lucky to get a neighbor like you, you were always there in my every ups and downs - be it personal or professional,so you can understand my efforts to get settled in life, I will miss you my dear friend and Ashna bhabi, yes I and meri beti will miss you cooking so much..

Ashna: I will miss Purvi, Manav bhaiya, she is my heart, now I need some support for me, i guess ...

Manav: nah Bhabi, Purvi will be always with you, we will soon have a video chat with you..where is Purvi??? Purvi..Purvi..come here, don't waste time, already final call was given, we should now proceed.

where Manav hugs DK and takes the final farewell, Purvi and Arjun are standing at the corner, Arjun is crying and Purvi also feels sad.

Purvi: Please don't cry, we will be friend forever, please wait here for me

Arjun: Purvi, please don't go nah, tell your papa that you don't want to go to that unknown country, we will play together..

Ashna, DK & Manav come there..Purvi hugs Ashna, Ashna kisses her forehead,

Ashna: Whenever you need me, just remember me, you maasi is always there for you beti, now be a strong girl and don't cry, Promise me you always look after your papa, he needs you, he is alone, you know na..you are a big girl now!!!

Purvi: thanks aunty..bbye Arjun

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