Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 7

Originally posted by: rithika2012

outstanding update sheena...👏👏👏 loved it alot.. no words to describe the way u wrote about arjun's feelings..
loved the way he said"who said i can't.. i won't"
And the last dialogues with purvi were awesome...
It was very clever of arjun to make purvi sign a contract for 3 years so that she cant leave the office...
AK is back in ur ff.. love to see what will he do get his love back...
update soon...
Thanks for pm and do pm me...

Originally posted by: ameilia

Sheena my Darling🤗.U actually gave me goosebumps while reading this update.
Thank you Amy...🤗

My oh my this is the real AK or even a better one than in PR.I must say 'dark passion,intensity,determination and confidence have all be magnified in ur well written update.

One thing Purvi will learn is never mess with Arjun Kirloskar...if only the real AK in PR was like that...i m left to wonder what mite really happen.Luckily we have u and ur FF for that.

I don't know if he is better than the one in PR but he is more consistent for sure...😉...I get hooked to grey characters, I don't know why! Purvi will learn to value him and never let go him ever. She knows she has lost something valuable but she still has to pay for playing with someone else's life! How I miss the real AK...😭

The last dialogues

'' He advanced towards her making sure his eyes didn't give away his inner turmoil. "Welcome to the OVT industries once again Ms. Deshmukh," he said, his cold eyes reflecting nothing but dark passion, "And I will make sure that you DON'T enjoy your stay here."

Wow u have left me on a cliff hanger.

You will have another cliff-hanger on the next update...*runs away before she gets hit by something*

Sheena u have to update the next part.I am eagerly waiting for it😃.

Updating in a moment...:P

Dont start the FF and leave it.

I hope u are motivated to write more...if u are facing any problems just rewatch old AK and Purvi scenes i am sure u will get the motivation.

No...Am not going to leave this one...ArVi scenes never get be demotivated..😉

U get ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ gold stars and i hope this will motivate u too to write more.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

.Thanks for the PM too.😛

en Gold stars...Am on cloud 9...Thank you again for such a long comment...😳

Originally posted by: Angelfreak_96

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Darn I'm late...Anways..YAY YAY YAY...You decided to continue...yay...I should say, its really a great news...Anyways coming back to the update...LOVED IT A LOT...REALLY AND TRULY A SUPERB UPDATE...😃

Yup...Under a lot of pressure, I decided to continue it...😆...Thank you so much...😳

"A month to what dad! Thousands of broken promises, lies and betrayals!!" he replied.

But he hated her. He hated her aloofness, he hated her attitude, he hated her indifference but above all he hated her for what she had done to herself and her life

I thought nobody would notice those line...But thank goodness you did..:P

I loved every bit of it, really...The last dialogue was a shock for me but interesting...Looking forward for ur next update, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO PM ME...Please...

I will surely PM...Even if you say lesser number of please...😆

*edited again*

You made my day and 👏s for you for writing such a beautiful story...You should write stories like this more often...😃

Thank you once again...You should have known how lazy I am by now...😆
Btw...Loved your long comment...😳

Originally posted by: shreya2094

i ve literally fallen short of words to describe hw beautifully u ve written this...the way u portray arjun and his feelings is completely out of the world...hw i wish arjun was as determined as this on the show as well!!i really like the fact tht he is being indifferent to ovi here coz she truly doesnt deserve to be treated well after all tht she had done!!in short all i wud like to say is tht this one was indeed a very good update n i absolutely luved it!😃👏

Originally posted by: princessjojo

Awesome story line!!!

I'm an absolute die hard fan of the brooding dark hero full of angst (though Wulthering Heights itself wasn't particularly my cup of tea). GREAT JOB and I can't wait to read more. I, in fact, was thinking of starting such a ff myself but wouldn't have done the same justice as you. Please post at shorter intervals!!! I hope Arjun does not cross the line with either Purvi or Ovi- both in terms of physical boundaries and any form of emotional abuse. Eager for part 2.

Originally posted by: NadaCinta

Awesome😃

Thank you so much...😳

A heart warming convo between the father and son. It was actually nice to see how DK could sense Arjun's depression unlike in PR. At least Arjun has a shoulder to cry on for the mistake he has committed knowingly or unknowingly.
Am missing a heart-to-heart convo of DK-Arjun badly in PR! It's odd how he can't sense his sadness!

Her love and protection made his life worth living but he hated her. He hated her aloofness, her attitude, her indifference and above all what she had done to herself and her life.
He is in a complicated state of mind right now...Something like..."I love you like I hate you".

He made sure that no other Cos offer Purvi Deshmukh as he wants her to come back to OVT Industries since that was the only way he could be with the love of his life.
He knows she wouldn't join it on her wish...

His heart and mind is full of her thoughts that he can't even remember his appointment schedules.

I had a hard time typing the schedules...😆

i) you were a super model whereas Purvi is perfectly qualified for the job;

ii) I won't let you ruin it...like the many other things in my life as this Co. was his father's gift for him;

iii) who said I can't...I won't work on this marriage; and

iv) he knew he would get a divorce no matter at what cost.

I simply loved all of the above👏

Thank you...I love them too...:P

Purvi is not aware of the reason why she has not been able to secure any job and was hoping to at least secure this one.

Quick and sharp thinking as he made sure that Purvi signs a 3 year contract with OVT Industries. At least he can be rest assured that he will be seeing her daily although he hated doing it and he also knew it wasn't long she would be back in his life.

When the real AK is there...nothing to fear...😆

DK was not able to decipher Arjun's happiness.

He knew he was happy but he missed the reason!

Her eyes had lost its spark but his eyes reflects dark passion.

The best of all - I will make sure you DON'T enjoy your stay here. This words was from his mouth but his heart yearned only for her as she belongs only to him and so does he to her!

'When you fall in love with someone, expect the pain it will bring.'

So true!

Waiting for your next update eagerly.

Updating in a short while! Thank you once again for the long comment...I love reading them...😳

Originally posted by: peachesnplums

Sheena, another lovely chapter! Thanks a lot for it as well as the PM 😊

Thank you so much peaches...🤗

I'm going to sound like I'm rehashing quite a few comments already posted, but here's my feedback...sorry for the delay -

No problem till I keep getting long comments like this...😆

DK's conversation with Arjun was touching, unlike in the show where he's missing or quiet or indifferent these days to the way Arjun feels.
I can't understand this aspect of DK in the show...!

He often wished he hadn't met her. But then the thoughts of his blissful moments which he had spent with her, the moments which were his prized possession valued above everything else in his life would flood his mind making it difficult for him to hate her. But he hated her. He hated her aloofness, he hated her attitude, he hated her indifference but above all he hated her for what she had done to herself and her life. She had not only changed him but had also made his life worth living, filling the hollow which the early demise of his mother had created, with her love and protection. He knew he could face every storm with her standing by him, but alone, he was not sure. But somewhere deep in his heart he knew that he had to walk those few miles alone which lay between her useless sacrifice and her self-realization.

You've beautifully captured Arjun's turmoil here, this paragraph is golden! For the lines in bold, I'm reminded of this quote by Fyodor Dostoyevsky - "with love one can live even without happiness. Even in sorrow life is sweet; life is sweet, however one lives."
@bold..So true!

I really want to see how you plan to bring about Purvi's realization. One request, no strong-arming please. It's something I liked about Arjun even when he was mean to Purvi at work, he never used physical force on her (like quite a few other male leads on TV shows do - holding arms/wrists tightly and what not to display their masculinity, and it gets a big thumbs down from me!). Hope no domestic abuse with Ovi either, though I know AK is too much of a man to stoop to that level.
He won't use any sort of physical or mental abuse with any of the girls..! I myself am strictly against all this! Purvi's realization...hmmm!!

What a dig about Ovi's qualification - unlike PR where everyone is adept at doing everything!
Exactly!!!!!

I won't let you ruin it!"...like the many other things in my life.

Who said I can't...I won't."

Waiting for the day AK will say something like this to her in the show (on CVs mercy and all that)
Have given up on the CV's!

Her eyes had lost the spark which brightened up his whole life but her indifference still lingered and he was going to change that. He advanced towards her making sure his eyes didn't give away his inner turmoil.

These two understand each other well without even saying a word, so AK will have to tread carefully here. One eyelock could give it all away, but then again, will Purvi ever look at him intensely given how hung up she's on mahaanta
The question is can Purvi always help it! There are times when brain fails to exercise it's control over the heart!

I have to do this Purvi, not for me but for you, for us.

"And I will make sure that you DON'T enjoy your stay here."

He said that to her out loud! Wow! Cannot wait to see what you've got in store for us.

He is turning into something grey with a heart of gold...Wait and watch!

Thanks again and a very happy Diwali to you 😊

Originally posted by: crazygal_vpb

sheena meri partner ,beautiful part once again...

Arjun n Purvi n same office...yipee 3 years contract...achhi baat hai warna join hone se pehle hi resign karke chali jaati...w8ing for Arjun-Purvi office scenes...

p.s. now i think Ekta must hire you...kamaal ki show hogi...

w8ing eagerly for the next part...jaldi update karo...

Originally posted by: ARluv16

Briliantly Written!...Love the way you portrayed Arjun's emotions and feelings...This company has been gifted to be my dad and I won't let you ruin it!"...like the many other things in my life.

Love The solid Answer he Gave!...Meaning that Arjun Kirloskar is back!...This is the way Ovi should be treated, After what she did!...

After a lot of inner conflicts, he had decided to opt for a mutual divorce which seemed highly impossible with the way things were going but he knew he would get it no matter at what price!

She was same yet different. Her eyes had lost the spark which brightened up his whole life but her indifference still lingered and he was going to change that. He advanced towards her making sure his eyes didn't give away his inner turmoil.

Love his determination here!... Please Continue writing!...I would love to know how u will make purvi and ovi realize the mistake they made,by sacrifising, and by coming in between two lovers... and hhow both (arjun-Purvi) are going to fix this...Please Continue..👍🏼