Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Angelfreak_96

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👏👏👏, really a superb update...I can never tell what I loved the most. A job well doe Sheena, loved this update a lot.

Arjun seemed like he back with his old AK mode. Purvi's feeling/pain was beautifully described.

Just can't wait for the next update. Please do update soon and please do PM me the next update...

PS:

"She had wasted a forever she could have spent with him."

"It had all started as a fight and had ended in tears."

I have no idea why, but i just love these lines a lot.

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Realized it now...I' FIRST to comment ur update 😃...

Originally posted by: rithika2012

outstanding update...👏👏👏
u have potrayed purvi's feelings so beautifully...😊
tears filled my eyes when arjun said purvi to call him sir, the way she missed him, when she wanted to hug him and say her feelings and many more things.. they just filled tears in my eyes..
loved ur update from the core.. thank u so much for a lovely update.. thanks for pm and do pm me again.. pls update soon.. very eager to read what happens next...

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

Sheena...marvellous,fabulous,outstanding chapter...!
gal u outdid yourself...this chapter was super awesome..
after arj ovi wedding i really wanted to know purvi's feelings...but we never got to see that..!
but after reading this chapter m convinced..not only convinced m happy..uhh very happy...😛
and that arjun's "Call me sir" was superb😆

here are some of your lines which i liked very much..
What she didn't know was that some wounds were too deep to be healed.

A past which had awaited her return for too long, a past to which she belonged to!

She could run away from situation but the reality she wanted to escape from would haunt her forever.

She had never known fairy-tales could exist, neither had she known that they could end in disasters.

she was supposed to get married before she felt butterflies in the pit of her stomach'

He was the last person on earth she would have fallen for'he was rude,arrogant and full of himself. But when destiny plays the threads, human beings serve as mere puppets.

.It had all started as a fight and had ended in tears

she had clutched onto those memories because she knew if she lost them she would lose herself.

She wanted to hug him and tell him how much he mattered in her life

She had wasted a forever she could have spent with him.

u have written this chapter so beautifully that i dont think CV's would have done justicse wid purvi's feelings..actually no one would have expressed purvi's feeling so beautifully than you...so after this i came to a conclusion that you are a fab writer partner...!
so proud of u*sulo style* 😆😆
do update soon...🤗

Originally posted by: bonibright

Superb update..👏Loved it to the bits..Loved how u have depicted PURVI's inner turmoil,loved how u have portrayed ARJUN's indifference towards her,loved everything about the chapter...👏Thanks for the superb chapter and the PM as well..😊

Originally posted by: ameilia

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Originally posted by: crazygal_vpb

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