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Chapter 2: Dreams and Disasters
The lights in the OVT Industries were still on though the surrounding offices had ended their shifts a pretty long while ago. A lone girl was still busy at her desk, her eyes scanning through the documents in her hand. The fluorescent lights on the ceiling had done a good job in hiding how late it already was. There was no ruffling of papers, no chit-chats over a cup of coffee or high voices yelling around shouting orders which made the working place eerily quiet. The only sound interrupting the strange silence was the vigorous scratching of pen on paper and a few quick presses of the keys on the keyboard. Finishing the file she was working on, she extended her hand to pick up another. It was well past 10 pm and the workers had long taken their leaves. A huge heap of files still lay before her and she knew she had to finish them before she could leave for her home. Pressing her head hard, she looked around taking in her surroundings. She had been so engrossed in her work that she had failed to notice the people around her leaving for home one by one...or in groups at times. …She was used to working late and it didn't trouble her. Her work had lately served as a medium for draining her sorrows. What surprised her was that she wasn't the only one working late…a faint light coming from the room marked CEO, OVT Industries told her that she had company.
A week had gone by since she had joined her new office…She didn't know if it was right to call it new! It had been her home for the past four years. She could tell every little detail of her workplace with her eyes tightly shut. There were no visible changes in the last month which was the only time she hadn't come to that place regularly. She had joined the office as a mere clerk and had slowly worked her way up to the CEO before leaving for complicated reasons. This time she had joined as the Marketing manager, the post which she occupied before getting engaged to the owner of the company, Arjun Kirloskar. The place was extremely special to her as it was here she had found her soul-mate only to be separated from him.
Her soul-mate was now married to her half-sister and she had taken an active part in bringing the change. He was set to be married to her and it was her change-in-decision-last-minute act which had complicated the situation. Her impulsive decision had changed three lives forever…and she doubted if it was for better. But she did what seemed right at that moment. Her aai had waited for her family since last eighteen years and she deserved to have them back in her life. She had hopelessly tried to stop the divorce proceedings of her parents only to fail. When Ovi had placed the offer in front of her, she had found her silver lining. She had hesitated as accepting the offer meant giving up the love of her life but not for long as she made her decision.
The letters were a blur as her mind wandered into a distant world. What if everything had gone according to the way it was planned! She would have been happily married to Arjun and would have been living the life they had dreamt of. He had promised to give her all the happiness she deserved and she had sacrificed it for her mother's sake. Their love story had been meant to remain incomplete…or so she thought.
The wedding night had been a hell for her. Convincing Arjun had been a hard task and watching the marriage going on had been harder. After telling the truth to her aai and aaji, she had locked up herself in her room and had cried her heart out. Later, she had called Ovi to remind her of the deal and her response had forced her to reconsider her decision. Luckily the things had gone the way she had wanted them to. Ovi had fulfilled her part of the deal and her aai was reunited with her family…She could see the happiness in her mother's eyes, Ovi-Teju had their mother and her baba had accepted her aai back into his life with a whole heart. The love and affection which had been bottled up for past eighteen years had now found their way…As she buried her face in the files once again…a recent memory found its way into her mind.
I will make sure that you don't enjoy your stay here! It had been his welcome words to her. She had joined her office only to find out that she was working for Kirloskars. His eyes had been cold…and distant. She knew he was hurt by what she had done but what worried her was if it was beyond repair! Time would set everything alright, she had kept telling herself. What she didn't know was that some wounds were too deep to be healed.
She had immediately signed her resignation letter only to realize that there was no way out and she herself had closed all the routes. "Aaji…I have got a new job," she had happily informed her aaji in the morning. She had been shocked when she was asked to sign a contract for three years. It's our company's policy, the person had told her. She had been in need of a job badly and had signed it without giving a second thought. She had decided to begin afresh…the new job being the stepping stone but little had she known then that her destiny was dragging her back to her past… A past which had awaited her return for too long, a past to which she belonged to!
She had cried herself to sleep on that night. She didn't know how she would face the person everyday that she had betrayed badly. He was her sister's husband and she needed to maintain her distance from him. She thought of running away but she knew that it wasn't an option. She could run away from situation but the reality she wanted to escape from would haunt her forever.
She had never known fairy-tales could exist, neither had she known that they could end in disasters. Her life had been turned upside-down by a magical whirlwind…and she had herself been the cause of it. She had always lived her life believing that she wasn't entitled to love. She was a middle-class girl and she was supposed to get married before she felt butterflies in the pit of her stomach…That's what she had heard and that's what she had believed in. But he had changed it all. He was the last person on earth she would have fallen for…he was rude, arrogant and full of himself. But when destiny plays the threads, human beings serve as mere puppets.
What they had shared had been magical….It had all started as a fight and had ended in tears. Everything that lay in between mattered and she had clutched onto those memories because she knew if she lost them she would lose herself. She missed his laughs, his cute little talks, his fake anger, his pouting faces, his soft touches and every other small thing related to him. He had taught her to love but what she had given him in return…a curse of never being able to place his trust in love again.
He had just talked to her once since she had joined the office. She was in a hurry for a meeting and had collided with him on the way landing up on the floor. The files had fallen down from her hand, scattering the papers in it. He had extended out his hand for her support but she had chosen a nearby desk over it.
"Watch it miss!" he had said, withdrawing his hand.
"Sorry Arjun…Actually I was…" he hadn't let her complete her sentence. "Sir…" he had said, she must have taken a little too long to respond which made him say, "Call me sir!"
He had then headed straight towards the meeting room without sparing a glance at her. She had slowly collected the papers, rearranged them in files, said a 'thank you' to a few people who had helped her and had followed him where she had to give the presentation.
The meeting had gone smooth. An effective speech…a deal signed…a few pats on her back and it was over. As she turned to leave, she heard a familiar voice.
"Nice presentation…Good job!" and he was gone.
"Thank you sir" she had responded in vain.
She wanted to tell him how she felt…Her life was no less a nightmare when compared to his…They were facing the same storm and she was as hurt as he was, only difference being she didn't had anyone to blame. She knew that he blamed her of what she had done to them and their future. She wanted to hug him and tell him how much he mattered in her life. She could feel his pain and she blamed herself for inflicting it on him. How she wished she could turn back the time! She had wasted a forever she could have spent with him.
And then the face of her family flashed in front of her eyes. How would her aai feel if she ruined Ovi's happiness for her own! Her baba! He had given her all the rights of a daughter and she couldn't break his trust…And Ovi…Arjun was her husband! How could she snatch someone else's life for her own! She had promised Ovi that she wouldn't come between her and Arjun and she knew that she had to stand up to that, no matter what! She had already made her choice and she just couldn't back out…
"I will move on," she decided in her mind, "I have to!"
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
*edited*
👏👏👏, really a superb update...I can never tell what I loved the most. A job well doe Sheena, loved this update a lot.
Arjun seemed like he back with his old AK mode. Purvi's feeling/pain was beautifully described.
Just can't wait for the next update. Please do update soon and please do PM me the next update...

PS:
"She had wasted a forever she could have spent with him."
"It had all started as a fight and had ended in tears."
I have no idea why, but i just love these lines a lot.

*edited again*
Realized it now...I' FIRST to comment ur update 😃...
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
outstanding update...👏👏👏
u have potrayed purvi's feelings so beautifully...😊
tears filled my eyes when arjun said purvi to call him sir, the way she missed him, when she wanted to hug him and say her feelings and many more things.. they just filled tears in my eyes..
loved ur update from the core.. thank u so much for a lovely update.. thanks for pm and do pm me again.. pls update soon.. very eager to read what happens next...
Edited by rithika2012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Sheena...marvellous,fabulous,outstanding chapter...!
gal u outdid yourself...this chapter was super awesome..
after arj ovi wedding i really wanted to know purvi's feelings...but we never got to see that..!
but after reading this chapter m convinced..not only convinced m happy..uhh very happy...😛
and that arjun's "Call me sir" was superb😆

here are some of your lines which i liked very much..
What she didn't know was that
some wounds were too deep to be healed.



A past which had awaited her
return for too long, a past to which she
belonged to!



She could run away from
situation but the reality she wanted to
escape from would haunt her forever.



She had never known fairy-tales
could exist, neither had she known that
they could end in disasters.



she was
supposed to get married before she felt
butterflies in the pit of her stomach…



He was the last person on earth she
would have fallen for…he was rude,
arrogant and full of himself. But when
destiny plays the threads, human beings
serve as mere puppets.



.It had all started as a fight and
had ended in tears



she had clutched
onto those memories because she knew if
she lost them she would lose herself.



She wanted to hug him
and tell him how much he mattered in
her life



She had wasted a forever she could have spent with him.

u have written this chapter so beautifully that i dont think CV's would have done justicse wid purvi's feelings..actually no one would have expressed purvi's feeling so beautifully than you...so after this i came to a conclusion that you are a fab writer partner...!
so proud of u*sulo style* 😆😆
do update soon...🤗
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Superb update..👏Loved it to the bits..Loved how u have depicted PURVI's inner turmoil,loved how u have portrayed ARJUN's indifference towards her,loved everything about the chapter...👏Thanks for the superb chapter and the PM as well..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
great. in love with this FF. update ASAP please.
Edited by sweetone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Thanks for the lovely update. Beautifully written and it was a treat to read.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Sheena!

Each and every line carries a lot of weight as your creative mind has executed the story so beautifully. So much of thought and care has been put in this story. Arjun and Purvi's agony has been clearly depicted. Without me realising, there were tears in my eyes. I could feel it to the core.

Sorry to repeat some of the lines from your story but just love them:

i) she joined the office only to find out that she was working for the Kirloskars;
ii) his eyes has been cold and ...distant;
iii) she knew he was hurt because of her but what worried her was if it was beyond repair;
iv) he was the last person on earth she would fall for as he was rude, arrogant and full of himself; and
v) when destiny plays the threads, human beings serve as mere puppet.

The thing here is not just time would set everything but how hurt he is ONLY he knows and only time will be able to heal him (that is the period of Purvi being with him).

Smart AK, as he knows Purvi in his fingertip👏. Reason being, if he would not have made her sign the contract, she would have tender in her resignation.

So our Ms Purvi did realize how badly she had betrayed Arjun (how I wish and hope that this will happen in PR, hmmm). The worst thing a person should do is betrayal of trust as that is the basic requirement in a relationship.

She had gripped to those memories as that was the only thing that belongs to her and no one can take it away from her not now nor ever. 'Sometimes you will never know the true value of A MOMENT until it becomes A MEMORY.'

I felt that from the way he had asked her to call him Sir was not because he wants to but he had to as it was to make her realize the distance she had created. I'm sure by seeing her getting hurt he will be a millions times more hurt than her.

Finally, at least we get to see here that she could feel his pain and blames herself for inflicting it on him. Her heart was beating faster than she ever knew on how much she yearns to hug him and tell him how much he means to her.

Although, she has decided to move on but that's not going to be an easy task for her especially when she will be seeing him day in day out. This will be her biggest test!


Edited by NadaCinta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

Chapter 2: Dreams and Disasters
The lights in the OVT Industries were still on though the surrounding offices had ended their shifts a pretty long while ago. A lone girl was still busy at her desk, her eyes scanning through the documents in her hand. The fluorescent lights on the ceiling had done a good job in hiding how late it already was. There was no ruffling of papers, no chit-chats over a cup of coffee or high voices yelling around shouting orders which made the working place eerily quiet. The only sound interrupting the strange silence was the vigorous scratching of pen on paper and a few quick presses of the keys on the keyboard. Finishing the file she was working on, she extended her hand to pick up another. It was well past 10 pm and the workers had long taken their leaves. A huge heap of files still lay before her and she knew she had to finish them before she could leave for her home. Pressing her head hard, she looked around taking in her surroundings. She had been so engrossed in her work that she had failed to notice the people around her leaving for home one by one...or in groups at times. 'She was used to working late and it didn't trouble her. Her work had lately served as a medium for draining her sorrows. What surprised her was that she wasn't the only one working late'a faint light coming from the room marked CEO, OVT Industries told her that she had company.
A week had gone by since she had joined her new office'She didn't know if it was right to call it new! It had been her home for the past four years. She could tell every little detail of her workplace with her eyes tightly shut. There were no visible changes in the last month which was the only time she hadn't come to that place regularly. She had joined the office as a mere clerk and had slowly worked her way up to the CEO before leaving for complicated reasons. This time she had joined as the Marketing manager, the post which she occupied before getting engaged to the owner of the company, Arjun Kirloskar. The place was extremely special to her as it was here she had found her soul-mate only to be separated from him.
Her soul-mate was now married to her half-sister and she had taken an active part in bringing the change. He was set to be married to her and it was her change-in-decision-last-minute act which had complicated the situation. Her impulsive decision had changed three lives forever'and she doubted if it was for better. But she did what seemed right at that moment. Her aai had waited for her family since last eighteen years and she deserved to have them back in her life. She had hopelessly tried to stop the divorce proceedings of her parents only to fail. When Ovi had placed the offer in front of her, she had found her silver lining. She had hesitated as accepting the offer meant giving up the love of her life but not for long as she made her decision.
The letters were a blur as her mind wandered into a distant world. What if everything had gone according to the way it was planned! She would have been happily married to Arjun and would have been living the life they had dreamt of. He had promised to give her all the happiness she deserved and she had sacrificed it for her mother's sake. Their love story had been meant to remain incomplete'or so she thought.
The wedding night had been a hell for her. Convincing Arjun had been a hard task and watching the marriage going on had been harder. After telling the truth to her aai and aaji, she had locked up herself in her room and had cried her heart out. Later, she had called Ovi to remind her of the deal and her response had forced her to reconsider her decision. Luckily the things had gone the way she had wanted them to. Ovi had fulfilled her part of the deal and her aai was reunited with her family'She could see the happiness in her mother's eyes, Ovi-Teju had their mother and her baba had accepted her aai back into his life with a whole heart. The love and affection which had been bottled up for past eighteen years had now found their way'As she buried her face in the files once again'a recent memory found its way into her mind.
I will make sure that you don't enjoy your stay here! It had been his welcome words to her. She had joined her office only to find out that she was working for Kirloskars. His eyes had been cold'and distant. She knew he was hurt by what she had done but what worried her was if it was beyond repair! Time would set everything alright, she had kept telling herself. What she didn't know was that some wounds were too deep to be healed.
She had immediately signed her resignation letter only to realize that there was no way out and she herself had closed all the routes. "Aaji'I have got a new job," she had happily informed her aaji in the morning. She had been shocked when she was asked to sign a contract for three years. It's our company's policy, the person had told her. She had been in need of a job badly and had signed it without giving a second thought. She had decided to begin afresh'the new job being the stepping stone but little had she known then that her destiny was dragging her back to her past' A past which had awaited her return for too long, a past to which she belonged to!
She had cried herself to sleep on that night. She didn't know how she would face the person everyday that she had betrayed badly. He was her sister's husband and she needed to maintain her distance from him. She thought of running away but she knew that it wasn't an option. She could run away from situation but the reality she wanted to escape from would haunt her forever.
She had never known fairy-tales could exist, neither had she known that they could end in disasters. Her life had been turned upside-down by a magical whirlwind'and she had herself been the cause of it. She had always lived her life believing that she wasn't entitled to love. She was a middle-class girl and she was supposed to get married before she felt butterflies in the pit of her stomach'That's what she had heard and that's what she had believed in. But he had changed it all. He was the last person on earth she would have fallen for'he was rude, arrogant and full of himself. But when destiny plays the threads, human beings serve as mere puppets.
What they had shared had been magical'.It had all started as a fight and had ended in tears. Everything that lay in between mattered and she had clutched onto those memories because she knew if she lost them she would lose herself. She missed his laughs, his cute little talks, his fake anger, his pouting faces, his soft touches and every other small thing related to him. He had taught her to love but what she had given him in return'a curse of never being able to place his trust in love again.
He had just talked to her once since she had joined the office. She was in a hurry for a meeting and had collided with him on the way landing up on the floor. The files had fallen down from her hand, scattering the papers in it. He had extended out his hand for her support but she had chosen a nearby desk over it.
"Watch it miss!" he had said, withdrawing his hand.
"Sorry Arjun'Actually I was'" he hadn't let her complete her sentence. "Sir'" he had said, she must have taken a little too long to respond which made him say, "Call me sir!"
He had then headed straight towards the meeting room without sparing a glance at her. She had slowly collected the papers, rearranged them in files, said a 'thank you' to a few people who had helped her and had followed him where she had to give the presentation.
The meeting had gone smooth. An effective speech'a deal signed'a few pats on her back and it was over. As she turned to leave, she heard a familiar voice.
"Nice presentation'Good job!" and he was gone.
"Thank you sir" she had responded in vain.
She wanted to tell him how she felt'Her life was no less a nightmare when compared to his'They were facing the same storm and she was as hurt as he was, only difference being she didn't had anyone to blame. She knew that he blamed her of what she had done to them and their future. She wanted to hug him and tell him how much he mattered in her life. She could feel his pain and she blamed herself for inflicting it on him. How she wished she could turn back the time! She had wasted a forever she could have spent with him.
And then the face of her family flashed in front of her eyes. How would her aai feel if she ruined Ovi's happiness for her own! Her baba! He had given her all the rights of a daughter and she couldn't break his trust'And Ovi'Arjun was her husband! How could she snatch someone else's life for her own! She had promised Ovi that she wouldn't come between her and Arjun and she knew that she had to stand up to that, no matter what! She had already made her choice and she just couldn't back out'
"I will move on," she decided in her mind, "I have to!"

Sheena i think u made an drastic FF where people like us would cry on each n every part...
@ Blue lines remind when archana went with ovi-teju-sachin,Purvi was crying so deep that no one was there too regain consicious,that pain was only lover's can get bcoz u have been left him/her forever...
@ Pink line Reminds that human be puppets when they are not in stable condition,they act like a robot which anyi says u do that work...
@ Brown lines reminds that she was loving him but she knowed that he is married to her sister...
Eveything i can say Sheena well done u have done far justice to the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super duper freaking awesome update sheena...! loved it... thanx a ton for the PM..:)

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