Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3

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Chandni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Loved the update 👍🏼

please update soon

thanks for the pm 😃

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NadaCinta

@NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

You have nailed the coffin Sheena 👏.

Each and every word and lines only shows his pain and the struggle he's going through just because of his love for Purvi which is said aptly that how could he hate her when he love her so much😳😳.

I love all the emotions shown by him i.e. sternness, anger, love, hurt and pain to both Purvi and Ovi and enjoyed the part when he told Ovi 'either you don't realize or don't want to realize that he don't and have never loved her'.👏👏

The AK whom we once loved as the khadoos boss is lost in PR but thanks to you as he has been resurrected again by only you in Standing in the Dark😛.

Well said that 'forever doesn't depend on past, present or future and that they shared their love for forever and not for a passing moment and that its going to last for eternity'⭐️⭐️⭐️

You have this extraordinary and outstanding skill in you and thats the reason why you manage to bring it out so well and get it connected to us👏. Its simply magnificent!!!

I have nothing more to say as I have became speechless after reading your FF.😊

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bonibright

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Brilliant update,Sheena..Loved it to the bits..

U have woven magic with words,just loved the way u depicted Arjun's pain,Arjun's struggle to cope up with the situation he is in..Just awesome Sheena..👏

Plz do update soon,

Thanks for the PM..😛

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Azaad_Panchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

omg partner u updated n maine yeh miss kaise kiya...abhi ke liye*res*...will un-res asap...

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

brilliant work sheena!!😃i love hw u describe each and evry detail in the story...it was heart-touching for me...i mean the way arjun was desperate to help her but was helpless and hw he had to remain firm on her tho he dint want to...m a little confused wid ovis behavior😕...looking fwd to reading the next part...plz do update soon😳😃

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logambika

@.logs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

nice update yaar... pls continue...

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