I'm going to sound like I'm rehashing quite a few comments already posted, but here's my feedback...sorry for the delay -
DK's conversation with Arjun was touching, unlike in the show where he's missing or quiet or indifferent these days to the way Arjun feels.
He often wished he hadn't met her. But then the thoughts of his blissful moments which he had spent with her, the moments which were his prized possession valued above everything else in his life would flood his mind making it difficult for him to hate her. But he hated her. He hated her aloofness, he hated her attitude, he hated her indifference but above all he hated her for what she had done to herself and her life. She had not only changed him but had also made his life worth living, filling the hollow which the early demise of his mother had created, with her love and protection. He knew he could face every storm with her standing by him, but alone, he was not sure. But somewhere deep in his heart he knew that he had to walk those few miles alone which lay between her useless sacrifice and her self-realization.
You've beautifully captured Arjun's turmoil here, this paragraph is golden! For the lines in bold, I'm reminded of this quote by Fyodor Dostoyevsky - "with love one can live even without happiness. Even in sorrow life is sweet; life is sweet, however one lives."
I really want to see how you plan to bring about Purvi's realization. One request, no strong-arming please. It's something I liked about Arjun even when he was mean to Purvi at work, he never used physical force on her (like quite a few other male leads on TV shows do - holding arms/wrists tightly and what not to display their masculinity, and it gets a big thumbs down from me!). Hope no domestic abuse with Ovi either, though I know AK is too much of a man to stoop to that level.
What a dig about Ovi's qualification - unlike PR where everyone is adept at doing everything!
I won't let you ruin it!"...like the many other things in my life.
Who said I can't...I won't."
Waiting for the day AK will say something like this to her in the show (on CVs mercy and all that)
Her eyes had lost the spark which brightened up his whole life but her indifference still lingered and he was going to change that. He advanced towards her making sure his eyes didn't give away his inner turmoil.
These two understand each other well without even saying a word, so AK will have to tread carefully here. One eyelock could give it all away, but then again, will Purvi ever look at him intensely given how hung up she's on mahaanta
I have to do this Purvi, not for me but for you, for us.
"And I will make sure that you DON'T enjoy your stay here."
He said that to her out loud! Wow! Cannot wait to see what you've got in store for us.
Thanks again and a very happy Diwali to you 😊
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