Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Sheena,
I m giving u the award of Best Writer in this forum,I mean your 1st chapter has taking me back to memories of Arvi and made my Cry..
Sheena u r just awesum..
Hats off to u n God bless.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Superb update,Sheena..👏..Loved it to the bits..I just loved the line,''WHO SAID,I CAN'T?..I WON'T...''..Thats our AK,whom we loved so much,the new ARJUN of PRland seems to be an unknown species these days.😭..Thank God,that ARJUN in ur FF didn't mellow down to the point of beyond recognition..Thanks for giving our AK back..Thank u so much for the PM...Plz update soon..
Edited by bonibright - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
heyy sheena.. 🤗
was going to sleep then saw that u have updated and was so elated to read your update..
this part was superb..

ohh i loved these lines in bold
"Who said I can't...I won't."

"Welcome to the OVT industries once
again Ms. Deshmukh," he said, his cold
eyes reflecting nothing but dark passion,
"And I will make sure that you DON'T
enjoy your stay here."


well i like your OS very much..coz atleast here we are able to see or read about our real Khadoos AK..whom i love to the core..
i would love to read how he will make ovi's and purvi's life miserable..
U are damn good writer my dear friend..love ya.. 😛
Thankyou for giving us such a amazing part.. 🤗 🤗 double hugs for that..
do update soon..😃
good night
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
it was a simply awesome update sheena... i loved it... do continue dear...:) thanx a ton for the PM...:):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
That was awesome Sheena! Your update made my day!! The AK has returned!! Especially loved the last line!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
outstanding update sheena...👏👏👏 loved it alot.. no words to describe the way u wrote about arjun's feelings..
loved the way he said"who said i can't.. i won't"
And the last dialogues with purvi were awesome...
It was very clever of arjun to make purvi sign a contract for 3 years so that she cant leave the office...
AK is back in ur ff.. love to see what will he do get his love back...
update soon...
Thanks for pm and do pm me...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Sheena my Darling🤗.U actually gave me goosebumps while reading this update.
My oh my this is the real AK or even a better one than in PR.I must say 'dark passion,intensity,determination and confidence have all be magnified in ur well written update.
One thing Purvi will learn is never mess with Arjun Kirloskar...if only the real AK in PR was like that...i m left to wonder what mite really happen.Luckily we have u and ur FF for that.The last dialogues
'' He advanced towards her making sure his eyes didn't give away his inner turmoil. "Welcome to the OVT industries once again Ms. Deshmukh," he said, his cold eyes reflecting nothing but dark passion, "And I will make sure that you DON'T enjoy your stay here."
Wow u have left me on a cliff hanger.
Sheena u have to update the next part.I am eagerly waiting for it😃.
Dont start the FF and leave it.
I hope u are motivated to write more...if u are facing any problems just rewatch old AK and Purvi scenes i am sure u will get the motivation.
U get ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ gold stars and i hope this will motivate u too to write more.
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
.Thanks for the PM too.😛
Edited by ameilia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
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Darn I'm late...Anways..YAY YAY YAY...You decided to continue...yay...I should say, its really a great news...Anyways coming back to the update...LOVED IT A LOT...REALLY AND TRULY A SUPERB UPDATE...😃

"A month to what dad! Thousands of broken promises, lies and betrayals!!" he replied.

But he hated her. He hated her aloofness, he hated her attitude, he hated her indifference but above all he hated her for what she had done to herself and her life

I loved every bit of it, really...The last dialogue was a shock for me but interesting...Looking forward for ur next update, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO PM ME...Please...

*edited again*
You made my day and 👏s for you for writing such a beautiful story...You should write stories like this more often...😃
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
i ve literally fallen short of words to describe hw beautifully u ve written this...the way u portray arjun and his feelings is completely out of the world...hw i wish arjun was as determined as this on the show as well!!i really like the fact tht he is being indifferent to ovi here coz she truly doesnt deserve to be treated well after all tht she had done!!in short all i wud like to say is tht this one was indeed a very good update n i absolutely luved it!😃👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Awesome story line!!!

I'm an absolute die hard fan of the brooding dark hero full of angst (though Wulthering Heights itself wasn't particularly my cup of tea). GREAT JOB and I can't wait to read more. I, in fact, was thinking of starting such a ff myself but wouldn't have done the same justice as you. Please post at shorter intervals!!! I hope Arjun does not cross the line with either Purvi or Ovi- both in terms of physical boundaries and any form of emotional abuse. Eager for part 2.

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