Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 5

Dear Sheena,
I m giving u the award of Best Writer in this forum,I mean your 1st chapter has taking me back to memories of Arvi and made my Cry..
Sheena u r just awesum..
Hats off to u n God bless.

Superb update,Sheena..👏..Loved it to the bits..I just loved the line,''WHO SAID,I CAN'T?..I WON'T...''..Thats our AK,whom we loved so much,the new ARJUN of PRland seems to be an unknown species these days.😭..Thank God,that ARJUN in ur FF didn't mellow down to the point of beyond recognition..Thanks for giving our AK back..Thank u so much for the PM...Plz update soon..

heyy sheena.. 🤗
was going to sleep then saw that u have updated and was so elated to read your update..
this part was superb..

ohh i loved these lines in bold
"Who said I can't...I won't."

"Welcome to the OVT industries once
again Ms. Deshmukh," he said, his cold
eyes reflecting nothing but dark passion,
"And I will make sure that you DON'T
enjoy your stay here."

well i like your OS very much..coz atleast here we are able to see or read about our real Khadoos AK..whom i love to the core..
i would love to read how he will make ovi's and purvi's life miserable..
U are damn good writer my dear friend..love ya.. 😛
Thankyou for giving us such a amazing part.. 🤗 🤗 double hugs for that..
do update soon..😃
good night

it was a simply awesome update sheena... i loved it... do continue dear...:) thanx a ton for the PM...:):):)

That was awesome Sheena! Your update made my day!! The AK has returned!! Especially loved the last line!!

Sheena my Darling🤗.U actually gave me goosebumps while reading this update.

i ve literally fallen short of words to describe hw beautifully u ve written this...the way u portray arjun and his feelings is completely out of the world...hw i wish arjun was as determined as this on the show as well!!i really like the fact tht he is being indifferent to ovi here coz she truly doesnt deserve to be treated well after all tht she had done!!in short all i wud like to say is tht this one was indeed a very good update n i absolutely luved it!😃👏

Awesome story line!!!

I'm an absolute die hard fan of the brooding dark hero full of angst (though Wulthering Heights itself wasn't particularly my cup of tea). GREAT JOB and I can't wait to read more. I, in fact, was thinking of starting such a ff myself but wouldn't have done the same justice as you. Please post at shorter intervals!!! I hope Arjun does not cross the line with either Purvi or Ovi- both in terms of physical boundaries and any form of emotional abuse. Eager for part 2.