Pehla Nasha- a short story on ArMan - Page 2

Originally posted by: tuh1

thxxx a lottt niki u made my sunday😊😊😊nd u knw what i m not feeling well 2day having fever bt dis acted like a medicine i m feeling far better now thnxxx DOC for ur prescribed medicine😊😊

Originally posted by: bonnefille

Niki, I LOVE YOU...you know that right! Will read and write a detailed love letter to you. 😆

Originally posted by: dhoomdhadaka

Ur amazing niki blessed writer
Btw did u sushi perf at gr8 awards held at dubai ashu has posted link would want a detailed analysis on tat too

Originally posted by: sipokobusak

You should be a novelist!!
Absolutely awesome. Keep it up. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: vijaya13

nikita u r good writer !!! itz awesome 😍

Originally posted by: poas

niki a big hug for u first i m quoting which lines i like most
She remembered those big, strong arms around her, shielding her from the male crowd on the train. She didn't know what attracted her most to him- the romantic ideas behind their first meeting, the fact that he seemed to be a helpful, decent guy, his eyes, his smile, his good looks, or something else..😳
She shied away at first, then tried to explain that she didn't know how to dance, but he cajoled her to trust him, his eyes and calm smile working their magic on her yet again, and she agreed, following which they danced all around the smoke (or whatever it was) with the romantic track, 'O re Piya' in the background, both of them lost in each other. In the end, he bent down on one knee again and kissed her hand tenderly, and she couldn't do anything except sigh and blush.. and then..😳😍
Poppy nodded excitedly. "You are lovely, he is sexy!" Archana went red😆👏
"You can ask for a treat now as well!" He blurted out, then looked away, embarrassed at what he had just said. Archana stared at him, eyes wide open. He hurriedly started giving explanations. "I mean, I would be happy to.. you see.. we met each other when I used to make these trips to arrange for my job. Somewhere, you have been lucky for me."how sweet😍

"I will miss seeing you every day." She said softly. "Earlier when I had started travelling alone, I used to look for you. It made me feel there was a friend in the train. I had got used to saying hello everyday."

"Me too." He said, his expressive eyes filled with emotions. Oh how she would miss him!- she thought. She looked away from his eyes.😍

She didn't know why she had tears in her eyes as she reflected on everything. Why was she crying? It was not like he was her husband or lover. It was not like they had committed to each other in any way. He was just another passenger on the train! He was a mechanic! Hadn't she known long back that there was no romantic potential in the whole story anyway, that she needed to be realistic? She didn't even trust him enough to go out alone with him. Then why was she feeling sad?so cute archana❤️
He tried to convince himself by saying that it did not matter, she would have refused him anyway, she seemed quite well off after all, that he was anyway not in 'lovvve' with her, but there was a nagging doubt that refused to go, that made him feel his approach was wrong.


"She seemed pretty confident that it won't be that way." Said Poppy dejectedly. "These two like to disappoint us."😆😆
its so nice niki i want to hug u 100 times🤗😆please dont let manav go to dubai pls keep him in mumbai with archu.niki waiting for next part😃

I'm soo glad you liked all those scenes, and the lines spoken by your character. 😆 I tried to make it sound like you only.

Originally posted by: palakprincess60

wowww i m so happy nikku u made it yr u should turn to be a writer awsum yr it took me half an hour to read but awsum yr