Oh NIkita,🤗
What a dear you are to us deprived Sushita fans, and what a talent!👏
Loved, loved, loved it.
Never doubt your instincts regarding your writing skills.
Firstly, let me say, the parts that included us, some of your forum friends...hilarious!🤣🤣🤣
You were spot on with your portrayal of us and you had me 🤣 like crazy.
I took so long to read your story because I kept laughing and laughing with the sections where we were included.
You have read us perfectly Nikita.
I especially loved the "translation please part"😆, and that you remembered that Divya was my translator.😆
We were interwoven in the story so expertly and naturally, as if we were a part of the source of your inspiration for this OS...PR.🤗
From the moment you mentioned "him" at the beginning of the story in relation to why Archana was so determined to catch that specific train everyday, I knew it was because of Manav.😊
Loved that you introduced Manav with that memorable train scene reminiscent of the early PR.
Loved how you described Manav, just after the first flashback.
Loved Archana's introspection re her feelings for Manav here.
The "O re Piya" part...awww. 😍
I could clearly see them performing at the Ganpati Ustav function.
Brought back great memories.
Arman's conversation in the cafe was so cute and real, in terms of how a couple would be on their first date.
I also found it so sweet that you included the Trini word "liming" in your story.😊
Made me feel proud.
Loved how Archana's friends "supported" her throughout the story.😆
The end was beautiful, intriguing, and different. in that you left it open as you said.
We can imagine whatever we want in terms of the ending.
This is stuff that great writers are made of...you keep us intrigued and guessing, wanting more.
I would love a continuation of this story, of Arman as younger people with different dreams and hopes than they have in either PR or your FF.👍🏼
Great job again Nikita and God bless you and your talent.🤗
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