Pehla Nasha- a short story on ArMan - Page 7

Originally posted by: sushantfan

hey nikita true to ur statement in the FF I'm really late here also niways thanks, really wonderful FF..😆You joined the forum when most of the action was already over, (ArMan were almost over for us) hence that line for you..

Like others must have told u, u write wonderfully I think u should take up to writing on topics u love ul do damn well n it will de stress n relax u too frm ur tiring n hetic schedule.. I try to balance whatever little time I get.. problem is that there is so much to be done...
Coming to the FF u so aptly described the Mum locals.. Archana is so lovely here, Wen I read archana the mental imagery formed is of the cotton salwar hair tied archana, so innocent n radiant..
Js Loved the line lips curved into an adorable smile could only think of sushants smile as manav in 2009 pr those initial days..
she found herself looking into a pair of soft eyes, his big strong hand holding the iron bars, his arm shielding her from any more meandering elbows and hands- so sweet n typical of My mannu..

Ab itna pasand aaya ye sab to lo pic bhi le lo: (courtey Siti)

After the second part my face fell n I was like how on earth could nikita b so cruel to us n end the story like this I didn't realise its 3 parts.. Bt yt I said nikita wudnt do dis espically to manav like this.. The big sushi n manav pankha that she is.. So scrolled down.. N I was like bingo..
U described manv his dilemma js perfectly.. I felt so bad especially wen I read the bit he read the class 10 book so as not to frgt the course material n return to studies one day..
That whole part of him thinking n n then seeing her again n him talkin n thinking was damn good..
All the forum members were so well analysed n written by u true to what we are..Thankyou! Am so glad that all of you liked it!
I'm asking too much frm u.. In addition to pr reloaded once in a way plz keep writing something like this on our arman.. I will... bas I should get some ideas and some time..

@karen thanks f the direct link of the ff saved me torture of visitin the forum..Thanks for advertising the story as well..😆