Zindegi ke Safar mein-(tera mera sath rahe)Pg 20 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Very good SD . This has more potential . So they land up ina 300 years old haveli ...😆

Archu is such a nag . I feel sorry for Manav .😆 😆

Why did you bold Preshan....😆

Edited by Tanyaz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Archu pronounces Pareshan as Preshan. I think Piya was the one who pointed this out in a post and I felt the same also.
Thanks for liking this nagging Archana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very good SD bhai..... It was total fun reading it...
Archu was realling nagging in this story....🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

🤣Very hilarious one purani haveli....😍

In b/w i felt like Manav carrying Archu was like vikram aur betaal.
Edited by Akashspartan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Akashspartan

🤣Very hilarious one purani haveli....😍

In b/w i felt like Manav carrying Archu was like vikram aur betaal.

Hi aakash
in fact Raja Vikram carried Betaal on his back, but Manav carried Archana on his arms..just remember how the heroes take the heroines to bedrooms...this way of carrying the girl also allows intimate kisses and smooches to happen..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hilarious SD🤣

I dont remember Archu pronouncing preshan[:S]

But i was expecting a song... "Gazab ka hai din dekho zara..".. KOi nai next part me aa jayega LOL

Continue soon SD...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hilarious SD ! 🤣
like everyone, I also liked this nagging Archu !! My poor Manu 😳😆 ..
continue soon !! loved it !!man, u r so creative nd imaginative !!
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8
m luved wen archu said she followed d back ground BT song idhar chal main udhar chala n thus both walked haphazardly n 4got their way 🤣
waitin 2 see wat is in store 4 Arman inside the purani haveli
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Posted: 15 years ago
As usually it was fun reading ur post 😃
even i did not know Archu pronounces preshan
bechara Manav 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi SD,
Your story has moments of real humour. You handle dialogue with some skill.
Well done!
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