Zindegi ke Safar mein-(tera mera sath rahe)Pg 20

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Zindegi ke Safar mein ArMan

Love Possible- Part-1

Before writing episodes for this series, I must say the episodes may not necessarily be sequels like "ArMan in Switzerland". Somewhere I will try to write discrete episodes, which will have much resemblance to the present situation in the original serial. Nowadays, everybody wants ArMan reunion or at least Manav not being so harsh to Archu. Here is the story on how Archana wins back Manav.

(Manav is completely at sea seeing Archu at their house. However he does not speak to her and goes to the bedroom and lies down on the bed. Archana comes in.)

Archana- muh haath dho ke kapde to badal lete! Phir main khana laga dungi

Manav- Aai khana laga degi mere liye. Tumhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin.

Archana- nahin mujhe to aapke sath khana hai aur ek thaali mein

Manav- ab wo din nahin raha..ab hum dono ke raaste alag hain

Archana- nahin !! kisne keh diya yeh aap ko. Raaste alag nahin na ki manzil alag hai.

Manav- tumhe achhi tarah pata hai Archana..mujhe ab koi shauk nahin raha yeh sab baatein sunne keliye

Archana- par mere liye to yeh zindegi hai Manav'.aap bhale hi mujhe na suno par mere paas aap ko kehne keliye na jane kitni baatein hain

Manav- court ke orders hain'tum 3 mahine yahan theher sakti ho..aur haan uske baad main fir court jaunga tumse divorce lene keliye..waise tum alag kamre mein sone jao

Archana- aap yehi pe so jao..mujhe aapko sote hue dekhna hai'in 3 mahino mein mujhe bas aapko dekhna hai..uske baad aap agar mujhe bahar nikal doge to yahan se meri laash hi bahar jayegi

Manav- mere paas yeh bakwaas sunnne keliye waqt nahin hai..main hi bahar chala jata hun..tum so jao idhar

(Manav kamre se bahar nikalne lagta hai Archu darwaja band karke udhar khadi rehti hai)

Archana- nahin aapko meri baat aaj sunni padegi'chahe aap meri jaan le lo..lekin aaj mujhe jo kehna hai woh main kehke rahungi. Aap ko agar kabhi maine ek second keliye bhi sachha pyar kiya ho to usi pyar ka wasta hai aapko

(Manav aake bed pe baith jata hai)

Manav- kaho kya kehna hai?

Archana- Aise khali pet thodi na baat ki jati hai..pehle aap keliye idhar khana leke aati hun

(khana leke aati hai. Manav khane lagta hai. Do roti khane ke baad use yaad aata hai ke Archana ne bhi khana nahin khaya hoga)

Manav- tumne khana khaya nahin hoga

Archana- aap ke aane se pehle main kabhi khati hun kya?

Manav- bekaar ki baat mat karo..hum dono mein ab aisa kuch nahin raha jo tum mere liye khane pe intezaar karo..kahan thi tum tab jab main tumhe yeh kehne ki koshish kar raha tha main bekasoor hun (aage nahin bolta)

Archana- bolo Manav..mujhe pata hai wo meri galati thi..maine aap se jyada gairon pe yakin kiya..aaj aap ko jo kehna hai main sunungi..prayschit karne hi to aayi hun yahan

Manav- rehne do woh sab bateein..jao apne liye khana le aao

Archana- nahin main aap ke sath hi khaungi

Manav- aisa nahin ho sakta Archana..samajhne ki koshish karo

Archana- aisa ho sakta hai..(Manav ke plate se khane lagti hai)

( Manav gusse se plate chhodke uthke chala jata hai. Archana aur kha nahi pati aur rone lagti hai. Manav 5 min tak khidki ke paas khada rehne ke baad use ehsaas hota hai ki Archu ke sath woh kuch jyada sakthi se pesh aa raha hai)

Manav- khana kha lo Archana

Archana- mar nahi jaungi main ek din khana nahin khaungi to

Manav- ab aisi baat mat karo..khana khao

Arcana- aap ko mere sath khana padega

Manav- yeh kaisi zid hai Archana

Archana ' (chup rehti hai aur khana nahin khati)

(Manav aake fir thali ke paas baithta hai aur khane laga hai.)

Manav- ab to khao..bas 2 roti bachi hai..

(Archana aankhon mein aansoo liye khane lagti hai. Aur manav ka gussa thoda kam hone lagta hai. Archana ke aansoo us se dekhe nahin jate)

Manav- kitna roogi Archana? Keh to raha hun ab pichhli baton ko yaad kar ke fayada nahin hai. Behtar yehi hoga tum ab apne bare mein socho aur main apne bare mein

Archana ' aapke alawa mera koi aur makshad nahin hai zindegi ka..sab kuch aap se shuru aur aap pe khatam hota hai

Manav- mujhe tumhari baaton pe bharosha nahin hai archana..

Archana- mujhe pata hai'kabhi aap par maine bharosha na karke jo galati ki thi usi ki saza aaj mujhe mil rahi hai.

Manav- ab kaisi saza'.tum jab chaho khud azad ho jao aur mujhe azad kar do

Archana- mujhe aisi azadi nahin chahiye manav..jo mujhe aap se alag kar de

Manav- ( khamosh rehta hai)

Archana- main janti hun aap ke dil mein mere liye sirf nafrat hai ..par mujhe wo nafrat bhi manzoor hai..aur aapke nafrat ke sath jee sakti hun'lekin aap ke bina nahin'

Manav- ab kuch nahin ho sakta Archana..ab bas mujhe jeene do. Waise raat kaafi ho gayi hai. Tum yahan so jao main bahar hall mein so jaungaa.

Archana- phir wohi zid manav..aap ko meri kasam

Manav- thik hai mujhe aur jhagda nahin karna tumhare saath

(Archu kuch der ke baad khud keliye niche bistar banati hai aur manav bed ke upar so jata hai)

I do not know if you guys will like this kind of story from me, but it is my sincere attempt to showcase the ArMan love which is missing now and to explore the way Archana can get her Manav back. Love possible story will have one or two more parts. Then we will have those enjoyable stories, like what happens just after Arman come from Switzerland. Again telling, these stories are not sequels or interlinked. I am waiting for your reviews.

SD

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow SD....an emotional one from you.You are good at these things too.👏. I loved it equally.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks SD, something refreshing amid all megativities around this Forum..
Why not we like this?? Definitely... Very nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great! your are really a wonderful writer,you can make your career in bollywood as well as a scripit writer !
I mean there is always something new in your posts your are just like Amir khan Of If.
Also i am sorry for my last poll namely funny but unique poll,i have already opened a thread seeking sorry from all Pr fans in the thread Sorry guptill Sd And other pr fans.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Are bhai Sonu, main kitni baar bolun ki you need not be sorry.. Go check out that topic which you have opened saying sorry..

Yeah, SD bhai is nice writer..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonu_272

Great! your are really a wonderful writer,you can make your career in bollywood as well as a scripit writer !

I mean there is always something new in your posts your are just like Amir khan Of If.
Also i am sorry for my last poll namely funny but unique poll,i have already opened a thread seeking sorry from all Pr fans in the thread Sorry guptill Sd And other pr fans.

@Sonu..I don't know how to thank you when you are comparing me with Aamir, one of my all time favourite actors. To be honest, you people love ArMan and thatswhy you love my SS.
Aur baki rahi woh poll ki baat. i didn't see it before and I would have of course voted for it had it not been closed . There is nothing to be sorry about that.
@Ali and Devu thanks a lot.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks SD And Guptill.You are really good writers and good persons as well !👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@sonu:
Are yaar, itni taarif kyun kar raha hai?? Hum utne bhi sharif nahin hain, posts padh k samjh to aata hi hoga..😆
@SD:
Welcome.. This was one of the bests according to me as there were lot more emotions in this..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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U know wat.. I like this method of ur writing more than all ur other one... Seems more realistic... I loved it... Do keep writing...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@mitts
all my previous stories were based on imagination be it Switzerland Episodes or some stories like making of majusha or satish matrimonial services interviews. even the latest story of manav's swayamvar was an out and out imaginative concept. ultimate aim is to make the story enjoyable
Love possible was based on the actual situation in PR. the creatives may write such scenes for Arman reunion. thanks for liking this one. hope i can write similar relaistic ones for you.

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