Exploring the bond,within FF *part 11* COMPLETEDpage 19

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey y'all!So I am back, the exams going to be over tom and I will yet watch the whole kaawad yaatra thing tom, anyways after I watched today's ep; I thought why not to write something on it...and here I go...

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PROLOGUE

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As she started walking, with heavy heart and swollen eyes, a lot of unasked questions still remained unanswered to her; questions she knew no one would probably could have answers of, not even she herself.Passing by the lanes she reminsced days pre-wedding, college days,school days...the days when she wore smile as if it was the most essential jewel, when she would laugh her heart out even on the silliest joke; and as she came back to reality she sighed on how her life had turned in this three months.She yet turned back as they were about to turn in the right direction towards her mami's house...she saw Shiva's distant figure walking in opposite direction & Dhara standing at the door.She realised how much she used to admire being a bahu in Pandya niwas, the only dream her eyes dreamt.

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Amidst of the beginning,

It all seemed as if it was the ending,

But then why there was no acceptance and only the disgrace

And thus a doubtfulness,

A question still lingering on everyone's heads;

The story which was so profound was this its end?

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He was just walking, unable to meet his own eyes, he knew he cannot run away like this and would've to probably answer all questions...more specifically 'allegations' put on him; but for time being he wanted to be aloof; away in the solitude to get himself composed, he didn't knew what he did was right or wrong...and more importantly was it really what he wanted to do or was that his rage doing all this...he had no answer to this.The one thing which had lingered him all the lane as he walked towards the highway road is that when he was asked to leave as a punishment and everyone had stopped him but he was reluctant not to pay attention to it, but when she told him with the firmness and fire she had within her, he stopped at the door itself,subconciously though but...why did he?He asked himself, who was at the odds, he himself or her?He also had no answers to the questions...he climbed the tree and sat there on the stiff branch of neem tree...maybe the bitterness inside him or the bitterness in their relation would compete the bitterness of neem, he let out a sigh as he mocked on irony of their lives.





Hope you guys like this one!Honest reviews are always welcomed...also, this whole ts/ss will be more focused on a subconcious baseline story, minimal dialogues but portrayal of real feelings and thoughts, trying something new this time...Enjoy reading!!!



~With love,

Janki.


INDEX

Prologue - Page 1

Part 1-Page 2

Part 2-Page 4

Part 3-Page 5

Part 4-Page 7


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yaaarrrr eik toh show ne itna dil todaa huwa hai upar se tu aur torture kar le 😭🥺


This got me in the feels like .. someone reaching into my heart and just nichod diya usse but I'm also reading and re reading it again and again cuz no one bothered to give us such a detailed look inside Shiva Pandya's head .. and so beautifully at that. Please write more .. I can't wait to read more of this 🤗

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Rulayegii kyaa jaanu🥺🥺😭
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Loveddd it janudii❤️

Phastampast update karo ab🤣

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Was waiting for stories on running track .m different writers exploring what we actually would love to see on screen.loved it

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First, let me tell you how beautifully you've penned this. ❤️ It was amazing.

I felt Shivi's pain. 😭 It was heartwrenching.

The way you portrayed their feelings... 👍🏼❤️

Do continue soon dear.

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Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Yaaarrrr eik toh show ne itna dil todaa huwa hai upar se tu aur torture kar le 😭🥺


This got me in the feels like .. someone reaching into my heart and just nichod diya usse but I'm also reading and re reading it again and again cuz no one bothered to give us such a detailed look inside Shiva Pandya's head .. and so beautifully at that. Please write more .. I can't wait to read more of this 🤗

Barkha, I love you loads!!!!Also, thank you so much and keep the tissues readyyy!!!❤️

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Originally posted by: Aas01

Rulayegii kyaa jaanu🥺🥺😭

Haha yes Aastha

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Originally posted by: S_Verma

Loveddd it janudii❤️

Phastampast update karo ab🤣

Chotiiiiiiiiiiiiiii updating soon

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Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

First, let me tell you how beautifully you've penned this. ❤️ It was amazing.

I felt Shivi's pain. 😭 It was heartwrenching.

The way you portrayed their feelings... 👍🏼❤️

Do continue soon dear.

Omg!!!Thankyouuu!!!I will definetly try to update soonn

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