Exploring the bond,within FF *part 11* COMPLETEDpage 19 - Page 11

thankyouuuu kaagaz babeeeeeee❤️

I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU SARAAAAAAAAA

"Tu...tu dhyan rakhna apna aur tere yeh mattar size ke dimag ko aaram dena pata chala mattar jese pichak gaya...toh mera..."

This part shows what a brilliant writer you are. 2 lines mein you have managed to incorporate humour, angst, longing, care and ofcourse unconditional love... my emotions be like 🥺😒☺️😆🤣

And those 39 minutes of them thinking about each other. . If the other person had eaten, taken their medicine or not. . That is exactly how Shiva and Raavi would behave if they ever got separated .. no matter how much physical distance they'd put between them, their hearts would always stay connected and you always always include scenes like this in your stories which breaks my heart into a million pieces 🥺yet fills me with joy knowing they're never truly separated ❤

And the ending? "Ghar chalegi?" MY GOD JAANU SO SO BEAUTIFULLY DONE. Its so simple yet so profound, so Shiva. Shiva doesn't do mellifluous poetry or grand declarations ... he is a simple man and woh apni jaan haatheli pe rakh deta hai bass ... and that's exactly why your stories are my absolute favourite because you manage to keep Shiva and Raavi exactly the way they are ... kabhi unko 'improve' nahin karti, fancy nahin banaati .. woh jaise hai waise hi dikhaati hai, ekdam true to the character.

^ I had imagined you ending this a million different ways but the saadgi in Shiva's "Ghar chalegi?" ... never saw that coming in a million years. Simply BEAUTIFUL 🥺

Before when you showed me the drafts I didn't read the entire thing .. and even throughout the week I just skim read it ... because I wanted to save this for my weekend chai kachori breakfast jab sab so rahe honge ghar pe and mai aram se balcony mai mein baith ke chaai ki chuskiyaan lete huye isse padungi and gadhedi ki tarha smile karungi .. so no matter how angry you get at me .. your stories will always be saved for the weekends for me because they deserve my 100% attention ☺️🤗

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

"Tu...tu dhyan rakhna apna aur tere yeh mattar size ke dimag ko aaram dena pata chala mattar jese pichak gaya...toh mera..."

This part shows what a brilliant writer you are. 2 lines mein you have managed to incorporate humour, angst, longing, care and ofcourse unconditional love... my emotions be like 🥺😒☺️😆🤣

And those 39 minutes of them thinking about each other. . If the other person had eaten, taken their medicine or not. . That is exactly how Shiva and Raavi would behave if they ever got separated .. no matter how much physical distance they'd put between them, their hearts would always stay connected and you always always include scenes like this in your stories which breaks my heart into a million pieces 🥺yet fills me with joy knowing they're never truly separated ❤

And the ending? "Ghar chalegi?" MY GOD JAANU SO SO ❤️BEAUTIFULLY DONE. Its so simple yet so profound, so Shiva. Shiva doesn't do mellifluous poetry or grand declarations ... he is a simple man and woh apni jaan haatheli pe rakh deta hai bass ... and that's exactly why your stories are my absolute favourite because you manage to keep Shiva and Raavi exactly the way they are ... kabhi unko 'improve' nahin karti, fancy nahin banaati .. woh jaise hai waise hi dikhaati hai, ekdam true to the character.

^ I had imagined you ending this a million different ways but the saadgi in Shiva's "Ghar chalegi?" ... never saw that coming in a million years. Simply BEAUTIFUL 🥺

Before when you showed me the drafts I didn't read the entire thing .. and even throughout the week I just skim read it ... because I wanted to save this for my weekend chai kachori breakfast jab sab so rahe honge ghar pe and mai aram se balcony mai mein baith ke chaai ki chuskiyaan lete huye isse padungi and gadhedi ki tarha smile karungi .. so no matter how angry you get at me .. your stories will always be saved for the weekends for me because they deserve my 100% attention ☺️🤗

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG BARKHAAAAAAAAAA INNNAAAAAAAAAAAA PYAARAAAAAA COMMENT WHICH MADE MY DAYYYY....I'M NOT AT ALL NAARAZ, THIS MADE ME SO SO SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYY, I LOVEE YOU WITH ALL MY HEARTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT❤️❤️

Read all chapter in one go

I can't go through with heartbreak that's why I have to put hold until you finished😭

Wonderful story loved each and every chapter❤️❤️

The thought process and her accident scene after that Shiva's grief you portrayed so well that my heart ache for the pain both kept inside🤗

Finally the last chapter it's not apology scene rather a subtle step of understanding that's how I always imagined Shivi and I am glad to read it in your words😳

I will love to read your future works keep writing👍🏼

It's really my pleasure that you liked the FF...even I would be happy if you read other pieces of mine...Thank you for your beautiful words,means a lot to me❤️

Also, rn im writing...yeh pyaar nahi toh kya hai...pre wedding based TS.do read!!

Ah.... Hello dear. I know this is super late, but this has been on my reading list for a while and I just finished it... Read the whole thing from the start again and wow.... You've resolved all of their issues beautifully. I in particular liked that Raavi chose to go back to Maami's house and only decided to return after Shiva had explained himself... Love your other works too dear...❤️ Keep writing..

ashu's spot

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Part 1:

I really like how you described all of the emotions Raavi is feeling and how she is doubting herself - at some point of time, after so many rejections, she is bound to feel this way and the way you have penned it down is so heart wrenching but meaningful

I think during this whole track, it's harder to understand Shiva because he masks most of his emotions with his anger but you have understood him so perfectly and written it the same as well

It's so painful to read these two beautiful should hurting but at the same time they need to get past this hurt to get to the good times.

Part 2:

"was he even shiva" - this line really hit home because during this track there have been so many times when we all have wondered if this is the same shiva that we had been introduced to

ahhh the emotions you describe, are so so perfect

I wonder if Shiva actually ran behind her, if she is hallucinating it.

Part 3:

I love the little trip down memory lane that you provided us and I like how you're giving both of them so much time to themselves, to think about their past and to think about what they want - this is so so so important and something they lacked in the show

Oh no, I hope Raavi is okay :( and if she isn't, I hope Shiva nurses her back to health and they have all the conversations that they need to have

Part 4:

meri raavi 😭 even in so much pain, she feels the need to justify herself ahhhh the angst

I found shiva's reaction to the accident so apt, it was so shiva <3

"he would change but he could never lose her" ahhh, the biggest part of this whole track 😭 when will he realize that he's enough just the way he is

Part 5:

softie shiva pandya and the way you describe him, is absolute bliss

raavi please wake up soon and pull your shiva out his sea of turmoil

my poor baby is drowning in his misplaced guilt and insecurities 😭

Part 6:

despite having gone through such a harrowing incident herself, her first thought was if shiva is okay 😭 these two pure souls only deserve each other, no one else could ever compare ❤️

it's true, no one can read raavi like shiva can

stupid nurse 😳 I wanted shiva to give full sponge bath to raavi 😭

Part 7:

the subtle nuisances that you in your writing are just so incredible, for example the slight yet meaningful difference between 'humara' and 'tera' is so heart-wrenching 😭

their inner turmoil I love how you take the time to analyze both of their emotions and thoughts - it's so insightful and that much more interesting to read

the way they care for each other ❤️

Part 8:

I hate how is insecurity is always projected as anger towards her but I also understand that the more he vocalizes it, the more Raavi can help him understand that he's disillusioned right now

the awkward silence LOL, it's so easy to talk about having conversations but it's so hard to actually have those conversations

shiva teasing her about the mangalsutra was a breath of fresh air, because even in these emotional times they manage to have a few lighthearted moments

kisssssssyyyyy raavi rock, shiva shock 🥳 bold raavi is the BEST raavi

Part 9:

ahhh these vulnerable moments 😭 them wanting to be with each other but also acknowledging that they have so much to talk about

the small kiss was so heartbreaking to me because it was so tender, so slight, so not shivi but so them as well 😭 how do you manage to make us feel so many emotions jaanu

Part 10:

if there is one thing I don't like about shiva during this track, it's how mute he has been :( why doesn't he vocalize his feelings like he used to before 😭

raavi wants to go back too but she stopped him from taking her back to pandya niwas, ahhhh confusion confusion confusion - ab I want patch up 😭

Part 11:

raavi is the only one who can understand him

awwww raavi was reading their old messages 😭 she is way too cute and shiva checking up on her is even cuter

finally patch up 😭😭 this was so so cute ahhhhhh

finally read all 11 chapters

this was such an emotional rollercoaster, loved every second of it jaanu 🤗

this was such an amazing story ❤️🤗