ShiVi OS: Of Bangles and New Beginnings - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

This was so beautiful ❤️

Shiva apologized, but still gave her time to decide what she wants.

He was watching her like a guardian angel

The Ending was superb...

Raavi really is a Nautankii, but the Cutest❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

I love this!

Shiva realising his mistakes and then taking time to get back to each other finally after realising how much they matter to each other🥺

So so beautiful ❤️

PS- Love that the kangan went to Raavi and not mami😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Absolutely loved this!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

It was awesome. Love it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You know to be honest when I read the description ai thought phir se kangan ki kahani😔 (please don't mind )

But jab main age badi😃 I read 6k words😲


Or jab maine padna shuru kara🙈 I didn't wanted this to end any time soon😍

I loved this OS. Especially the fact that this was a complete OS. I know confession was not there but for me this was complete.



I loved every bit of this piece, your described everything so beautifully and uniquely. Haye. Yeh 12k words ki bhi hoti toh main khushi se padti😆 see we are atleast I am a bukhad of good Shivi stories. And this was damn good.

Loved it🤗

Keep writing❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Aaliya you write so well!!! Omg I'm going to read again and comment in detail later 😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Aaliya🤗 this is so beautiful! A completely different treatment to the kangan kaand! Here again Raavi got him the kangans but like you always wanted Mami did not get the new kangans😆

All we want is Shiva-Raavi to be together always! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Aaliya, this was so beautiful! I loved it a lot

I really really wish things had happened this way in the show, you wrote the characters of Shiva and Raavi so well here ❤️

Thoroughly enjoyed.. and can't wait for more from you!👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Omg this was so good 🤩

Really loved it a lot. Please write more! 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

This wass so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Shiva's concern, his pain, his guilt is soo beautifully described.

His concern for raavi😍.loved how protective he is about her.❤️ The way he bashed those gossip aunties.👏👏

He made raavi wear the Kangans🥺.

I wish the show handled the issue half as beautifully as you have done in this story.😔

Plzz write more ❤️❤️❤️

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