ShiVi OS: Of Bangles and New Beginnings - Page 4

Originally posted by: Transference

I can't express how beautiful this is!

I loved every emotion, dialogue and the progress between them ❤️❤️

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

I loved this ❤️ Shiva realizing his mistake, apologizing and repenting for it. Raavi definitely not giving in without being properly convinced of Shiva’s sincerity. Shiva not resorting to mocking suicide and correctly reprimanding Raavi for again trying to pull a suicide stunt. 👍🏼

But most importantly,

Maami not getting any kangan 😈

*me happy crying:

Thank you so much! ❤️

My distaste for Maami is well known, so it is no surprise that my favorite part was Maami not getting the kangan too 😆

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This is amazing

There is proper apology and redemption for Shiva. Shiva talked to Raavi, explained his side to her but did not justify it. Raavi took her time to make a decision.

And Raavi hearing taunts about her upbringing and character was enough for Shiva to fly into a rage. He stood up her and silenced them. I loved that. I would really want makers to show this sometime in the show. Raavi was humiliated and she does have her insecurities that everyone would be laughing at her. Considering the setting of the story and Maami's character, it seems plausible enough. And Shiva standing up for her publicly might be needed for her to let go of the shame that she thinks follows her( I don't think she should be ashamed of anything but as shown in her and Dhara convo she seems to be)

And finally I love the anger shiva showed when he came to know that Raavi had put the chaaku to her neck again. I do think shiva was too affected by her suicide attempt at the time of marriage to let her even speak of dying let alone another suicide attempt without being worried to death himself

Maami should not have got new kangan. Shiva giving it to Raavi not Dhara was a beautiful touch too.

Okay this has become too long but in short I loved your take ❤️

Thank you so much for your detailed comment! 🤗

I'm really happy you liked this ❤️

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

I loved...loved.....loved....this. ❤️🤗❤️

This OS made my Sunday. I was yearning to read something on Shivi and bumped into this OS. The way you handled the kangan kaand was amazing. On top of that, your portrayal of Shivi's evolution stole my heart straightaway. The dialogues.... kaise bayaan karoon main .... they were so natural and Shivi's essence was oozing out of them.... I was reading the dialogues out loud.... Enjoyed it thoroughly.

After reading this beautiful piece on Shivi, I couldn't help but roll my eyes at CVs for their execution of kangan kaand.

Thank you so much for writing this OS. I loved every bit of it. ❤️

Waiting to read another amazing story by you. 🤗

Jeera kaand bhi toh hai na. 😆

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! You made my day 🤗

I'm so happy you liked this one ❤️

Let me see if I can come up with something for the Jeera kaand 😆

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This was soooo amazing…

Glad that you have writen an other ShiVi os….

This was mind blowing….

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

No pair of eyes would commit the grave mistake of falling asleep in the middle of such a lovely piece ! Rather I'm sure everyone was hooked on to it just like me

What do I say, this piece is just like our Shiva and his bangles, khara Sona

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

cheesu, meri jaan - this made my heart so happy 🤗

this was such a beautifully penned down one shot

every word, every detail was so well-written and I could picture the conversation

loved it so so much!

you write very little meri jaan, please write more

Thank you so much Ashu! 🤗 I'm happy you liked this ❤️

I will try to write more, I get too busy with work during the week and then with chatting on the EDT, so I only get little time during the weekends to write 😆

Originally posted by: Foxii

This was so beautiful ❤️

Shiva apologized, but still gave her time to decide what she wants.

He was watching her like a guardian angel

The Ending was superb...

Raavi really is a Nautankii, but the Cutest❤️

Thank you so much! ❤️

As you said, Shiva is truly Raavi's guardian angel ❤️

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

I love this!

Shiva realising his mistakes and then taking time to get back to each other finally after realising how much they matter to each other🥺

So so beautiful ❤️

PS- Love that the kangan went to Raavi and not mami😆

Thank you so much! ❤️

I hate Maami too much, so I would never make the kangans go to her 😈😆

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

You know to be honest when I read the description ai thought phir se kangan ki kahani😔 (please don't mind )

But jab main age badi😃 I read 6k words😲

Or jab maine padna shuru kara🙈 I didn't wanted this to end any time soon😍

I loved this OS. Especially the fact that this was a complete OS. I know confession was not there but for me this was complete.

I loved every bit of this piece, your described everything so beautifully and uniquely. Haye. Yeh 12k words ki bhi hoti toh main khushi se padti😆 see we are atleast I am a bukhad of good Shivi stories. And this was damn good.

Loved it🤗

Keep writing❤️

Haha, no I don't mind.. kangan pe bohot logon ne likha forum par 😆

I got carried away while writing, toh bohot lamba ho gaya 😆

Thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it 🤗