ShiVi OS: Of Bangles and New Beginnings - Page 5

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Aaliya you write so well!!! Omg I'm going to read again and comment in detail later 😘😘

Thank you, Min! ❤️ I will be waiting for your comment 🤗

Originally posted by: mpks1

Aaliya🤗 this is so beautiful! A completely different treatment to the kangan kaand! Here again Raavi got him the kangans but like you always wanted Mami did not get the new kangans😆

All we want is Shiva-Raavi to be together always! ❤️

Thank you Prema! ❤️

Yup, I made sure Maami did not get new kangans here 😆

Originally posted by: aashkairaan

Aaliya, this was so beautiful! I loved it a lot

I really really wish things had happened this way in the show, you wrote the characters of Shiva and Raavi so well here ❤️

Thoroughly enjoyed.. and can't wait for more from you!👏

Thank you so much! ❤️ I'm so glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This wass so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Shiva's concern, his pain, his guilt is soo beautifully described.

His concern for raavi😍.loved how protective he is about her.❤️ The way he bashed those gossip aunties.👏👏

He made raavi wear the Kangans🥺.

I wish the show handled the issue half as beautifully as you have done in this story.😔

Plzz write more ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much! ❤️

Will surely write more 🤗

Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

i know it is an os

but i really like ur story and would love it if u add a bonus update

Thank you! ❤️ Let me see if I can 😆

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Amazing story 😍😍😍😍

Beautiful ❤

Thank you for a long chapter 👌👌👌👌🤗🤗🤗🤗

Main to isse bhi lamba padh skti hu 😜😜😜😜🤣🤣

Haha.. thank you so much! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: nafees5

I totally loved this❤️

Beautifully written dialogues👏❤️

Iss OS mein sab kuch mil gaya jo show mein nahi mila.

Shiva's repentance, raavi's turmoil and ShiVi's progression, everything was amazing.

Love you for this aloo❤️

Keep writing!

Nairaaa 🤗

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you loved reading this ❤️

Jo humein chahiye tha par mila nahi, woh sab daal diya maine ismein 😆

Originally posted by: aahirs

This was very Beautiful! I Enjoyed it a lot! Especially the dialogues were excellent. Please continue this if possible, and Please Do keep writing 👏👏

thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Beautiful 💕

Will be on my reading list for a long time

Gives warm fuzzy feeling in each read 🙂

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Aaliya...I am so happy you are back to writing and what an amazing come back❤️

I read this yesterday morning... really wanted some Shivi dose as I had a hectic Sunday work schedule...so glad you posted this yesterday...❤️

I was unable to comment yesterday due to work😵

To begin with thank you so much for this long post...this was so so beautiful

I am so happy you wrote this... Shiva's sincere apology...it was heart touching...the way he made sure she had food..this boy and his concern for Raavi❤️

I am so happy Raavi didn't accept his apology and took her time to reflect on her feelings and finally decided to give the relationship a second chance...

The suicide drama Raavi did and Shiva's reaction to that was perfect...he reprimanded her properly❤️

And my favourite part and a relief reading this was MAMI DIDN'T GET ANY KANGAN🥳

true MSM squad member feeling...best best best🥳

Thanks Aaliya for this amazing OS...loved it so much🤗

Thank you so much, Priya for your detailed comment! 🤗 I'm really happy you liked this ❤️

I tried to fit in as much as we wanted to see on screen but didn't get in this one 😆

Yup, as an MSM squad member, Maagin won't get a single penny from me, let alone gold kangans 😈 That was my favorite part too😆