Zalak OS~ Because I Really Like You~ part 3(Last) page 17 - Page 5

Originally posted by: BlackStar.

oh my goodness, this was so brilliant, please please please you have to continue this and make it into an SS, I love Zaroon and Falak and this is just perfect 😳

Originally posted by: .Farah.

Res! Will reply tonight!

Unres

You're back again! I missed your writings so much! 😭

Loved this very much Suri! ❤️

I haven't heard or seen these places before, but they look beautiful!

Loved the ZaLak moments... She should stop calling him Bhai.. ASAP 😆

Pls continue soon! I want to know what happens.. Pls pls! 😳

And thank you for the pm!

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

res...😉😃

unres

hey suri
wow i am surprised and happy at the same time to have something on them.. although character names r different thn khisher, but still they r my fav couple... i love thm and i knw i will love ur story too
they are family friends but she is so yyounger to him
u may have planned something different like always 😳
i loved this update
it ws writen beautifully
awsum 👏
continue soon ⭐️

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

This was really cute ... :)

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Yes I do have something to say. How do u manage to generate such intriguing ideas for ur fictions?Your creativity just astounds me.

You of all the people should be knowing that Sam... i read stuff and it gets suck in my mind and then i web it in my fics😆 no big karnama from me actually.

And let me tell u, after reading ur OS I am feeling a strong urge to visit ur city. The way u described the scenes and places of Islamabad and the pictures are making me want to see those places so badly. Why Suri, why did u have to generate these feelings in me? 😭 I don't even know if I will ever get a chance to visit Islamabad, let alone see those places But now they have been added to my wish list so may be someday I might get lucky 😛

i can always help you imagine its beauty and who knows your wish actually comes to be true someday...you could be married to a man who belongs to ISb or perhaps his sister or brother lives here and one day you come her to visit them with you hubby and two year old baby and get a chance to see these amazing places Islamabad holds in its womb...no?😆

I loved the story and it's concept and how you showed Falak as young teenager and Zaroon in his early 20s. It's so nice to see Zaroon's care for Falak.

Wonder what will happen next. Continue soon! 😊

Am glad you liked it.. wasnt planning anything particular...just wrote what came in my mind😆

P.s. btw are u planning to turn this OS into SS. Would be great if u do 😃

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome os...
Beautifully written. ..
Loved it..
Pics are amazing ...loved it...
Waiting for next part.
Continue soon

P.s I m glad that aroo suggested this os to me...I really loved it

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

fabulous...

amazing...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

i seriously have no idea... for now two more parts coming our way.😳

and i am happy you came here for me...😳

🤗

I wud go anywhere to read ur piece of writing. I have been ur ardent reader for some time now 😉