Zalak OS~ Because I Really Like You~ part 3(Last) page 17

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BlackStar

@BlackStar.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

oh my goodness, this was so brilliant, please please please you have to continue this and make it into an SS, I love Zaroon and Falak and this is just perfect 😳

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.furrii.

@.furrii.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Res! Will reply tonight!

Unres

You're back again! I missed your writings so much! 😭

Loved this very much Suri! ❤️

I haven't heard or seen these places before, but they look beautiful!

Loved the ZaLak moments... She should stop calling him Bhai.. ASAP 😆

Pls continue soon! I want to know what happens.. Pls pls! 😳

And thank you for the pm!

Edited by .Farah. - 11 years ago

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Res

Unres

Woww...it was awsum..⭐️

Loved it...

Nice concept...smething diffrnt..

Beautifully written👏

These pics r soo beautifull

Thnks aroo u suggested me to read😊

Edited by fifi1297 - 11 years ago

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

This was really cute ... :)

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Samia

@Sam_15

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Yes I do have something to say. How do u manage to generate such intriguing ideas for ur fictions?Your creativity just astounds me.

And let me tell u, after reading ur OS I am feeling a strong urge to visit ur city. The way u described the scenes and places of Islamabad and the pictures are making me want to see those places so badly. Why Suri, why did u have to generate these feelings in me? 😭 I don't even know if I will ever get a chance to visit Islamabad, let alone see those places But now they have been added to my wish list so may be someday I might get lucky 😛

I loved the story and it's concept and how you showed Falak as young teenager and Zaroon in his early 20s. It's so nice to see Zaroon's care for Falak.

Wonder what will happen next. Continue soon! 😊

P.s. btw are u planning to turn this OS into SS. Would be great if u do 😃

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awesome os...
Beautifully written. ..
Loved it..
Pics are amazing ...loved it...
Waiting for next part.
Continue soon

P.s I m glad that aroo suggested this os to me...I really loved it

Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

fabulous...

amazing...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: khisher
First of all lovelyy pictures yaar...u made me fell in love with islamabad and thanks for this lovely OS😛
From beginning rill almost end it was superbbb and i thoroughly enjoyed it but yaar BHAIII...u gave me a shock..but i am expecting a lot more😉
plzz update soon and stop falak from saying bhai to zaroon😆
AWESOME OS👏
🤗🤗

Well it gave a different feeling adding these pictures to the OS😃

Okay since now everyone has a problem with the Bhai thing..i'll do something.

Thank you so much!😳

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ..Zindagi..
Great. Awesome Os. U described the scenes beautifully.
Nd also love the picturer. Mene hawks bay and paradise point dekhe hain.
Again amazing os.

Thank you so much... i know these places are lovely.😳

i really appreciate your reading my OS😃