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Awesome chapter once again!! First of all let me say I was so lost while reading this chapter that I didn't realise when the chapter ended, which rarely happens with me. That in itself says so much abt how interesting this chapter I found. Even though the story is very simple and the events taking place in ur story very closely relates to anyone's day to day life, but the way u write makes it a very interesting read. I cud almost imagine myself in falak's place (walking alongside zaroon ) šš
Haha...I loved the shareef bachcha line. That was cute. And omg Fawad's pic on billboard! Ironic šš When I laid my eyes on his pic that u posted, I stopped dead in my tracks. In this case I was scrolling down the page and my hands froze on that point with this expression š² and then later Lol..I couldn't help drooling over him. He looks WOW!! āŗļø So I can totally imagine ur state when u saw his pic on the billboard. Wow!!
Ok coming back to ur story. I liked that u skipped ahead two years and made Zaroon and Falak older. And Falak stopped calling him bhai. Good Haha...even Zaroon wanted her to call him by his name minus the bhai ššš
I liked their bonding. Loved the way u showed subtle development in their relationship and their feelings for each other. They clearly admire each other with a hint of slight attraction.
The last part is the clear indication that they are falling for each other. But most of all I loved ur last line that some of her gloom was his and some of his gloom was hers. This line is so deep and meaningful. U nailed it perfectly āļø
Now u r making me want to see Karachi too š³
Only one more chapter left? Main samjhi thode aur chapters honge. Why don't u make it an SS?
P.s. U know I can cross seven seas to read ur stuff...Fawad ka to sirf ek bahana hai š Ok thoda zyada hi filmi ho gaya na.. š³š
P.s.s. Omg look at the length of it š² Why can't I keep my comments short and sweet *bangs head on the wall in frustration*
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