Zalak OS~ Because I Really Like You~ part 3(Last) page 17 - Page 16

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

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firstly... thanks for updating soon 😃

and what an update... 👏 lol truly m not a fawad fan at all... i m always a khisher fan and zashaf too 😳

but still he is an amazing actor 😳

and i am liking ths falak 😃

ara she stopped calling him bhai 😲 🥳

ahh they r missing each other ❤️

and yes that shareef bacha and burger bacha 🤣
i m a shareef bacha u knw 😳 😆

lol... update soon

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

Are you in the same School as Fuiii? cuz she is in phase 6 or 4 and goes to a convent school too😛 good you arent a burger bacha...I dont have much taste for them😆 Who's fuii? *lemme check*... ahh! I don't know her.. 😉 I am in Saint Patrick's .. 😃 Hahaha, even i don't like burger bachas, just showing off their dad's post and money 😛

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

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Me first.. wohoo!

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Firstly, congratulate me for being the first one to comment! You don't how sad it is to know that you lost the first place 😆 Thankfully, i got it this time 😃

CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING THE FIRST ONE! you got it for the second time here... others should also get a chance no?😆

This was so amazingg! I never knew Zaroon & Falak could make such a nice couple 😛 Ye uncle aunties ko buhat jaldi hoti hai shaadiyan karanay ki. At least parha tou liya karein 😆 Bachon ko shadi ki itni jaldi nahi hoti, jitni parents ko hoti ahi! 😛

Now you do that they make such a fine couple!😆 Well in my family they dont do that... at least my parents think i should first graduate😆

A beautiful ending ❤️! You should write more on these two , Suri 😉 This whole OS was so brilliantly penned down ⭐️ Amazingg 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Gilrin

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Last part already? 😃

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While reading the final part I could easily relate what trauma Falak was going through. Every thought, every emotion is penned down beautifully. But she is lucky that she got Zaroon 😆.

You could? i am glad... i thought it lacked somewhere...the feelings and all but if you say so😆

Loved that night scene, it portrayed their relation very well 😳

That part where you showed Zaroon's concern for Falak's further education, for her well being was wonderful. Falak may not have adjusted in this new life if he was not there for her. The ending lines were so cute it made me fall for this OS all over again. Yaar you made them feel like they always belonged to each other.☺️

Well this was a wholly one shot but since i dragged it more and managed to drag it further more to three parts this came a little late...was the main plot only. Simple yet touchy..no?😆

Write on Gal! Yaar rozay mein tou humain gunah gar na banao 😆 Fawad ki pics baar baar dekh k bhi dil nahi bharta 😳

Nos Vemos!

Originally posted by: .Farah.

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Loved loved loved it very much! Both the parts were the bomb! ❤️

I loved how you expressed Falak's emotions... Beautiful..

One little little doubt... I'm not aware of all Mahira's serials... Which one does she play Falak in? 😳

Anyway, awesome OS... Thank you for the pm! 🤗