Zalak OS~ Because I Really Like You~ part 3(Last) page 17 - Page 15

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

It stinks? It was so beautiful when i was there and i used to drag my family there early in the morning because i was then sea shell crazy and i would bring bags of shells in my house only to find slugy snails dripping out of them...🤢😆 i used to live near Lalazaar.😳

Oh you are a brger bacha as in with the tera acent?😳😆

I have the MA Jinnah wala accent... thanks to militery school.😃

Thank You for reading!

ohhh that was a twist!!
thats y i hate girls getting married b4 graduation..
well in my family every girl gets engaged till 21 max..
and thats too bad! i find it!
well coming to the update.. it was brilliant!
zaroon was soo supportive..
falak and zaroon make a perfect pair..
and they had a girl.. like in aquafina add.. hahahha..
the whole storyy was great!
write more and pm me..




-fuii-

I've edited my comment on page 17 😳😃

i was wondering saray super lazy readers res kar k kaha bhag gaye.

@sam am going for my national id... me bari ho gai hun =(
a k reply karti hun.

on my i simply love this!!! 👍🏼

WHAT😲Did it end here😡SO NOT DONE HMPHHH

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Omg.. res 😆

Lemme read this wonderful update again and settle down. Cant control my happinesss. 😛

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What makes you so happy?😆

This was such an outstanding update. Karachi walon ka dil khush kar diya. Itni tareef tou hum bhi apnay beach ki nahi kartay 😆 Wese it isn't that neat and clean at night 😛 I think it's been months and i haven't been to beach because it remains so dirty.. yuck -,- ! though i live defence phase six, it's not too far from my place! But Suri you changed the whole beach.😉

Par gai na thand Karachi walon ko! Bus tum log ho hi nashukrey... and besides the beach is all bad because you guys dont take good care f it😔 well when i was there it wasnt half as bad as you are saying😆 i shouldnt have left karachi for its sake.😆

I wrote about the one it was 7 years back😆

LMAAO! Zaroon on diet 😛

ROFL! Water in dowryy 🤣

Yeap yeap! I noticed she didn't call him Zaroon Bhai 😉

Little jests i though necessary to include.😳

The last paragraph was so beautifully written ❤️

I know everyone said that😉

Suri, this was an amazing update. ⭐️ I didn't know i'd enjoy reading it so much. You pen down everything so beautifully 👏 WOW! Arey ek kya, 2-3 aur parts karlo, no problem 😉😛

Really surprised you read it so many times...my bacha👏

That billboard scene.. omg! that happens with me! once I was in my car with my family and there i saw Pyarey Afzal's board. I told my dad to stop the car , so that i could look at it properly and he was like... 'Hermain I'm not going to stop the car for your Hamzas and Fawads' 🤣

That's hilarious... and your dad's reply...🤣 My dad would have sad something similar only if he knew how big a crush i have on Fawad and Hamza...and😆 we have the same crushes.

Uhmm. yes Burger Bachas. My school is filled with these burger bachas 😛 But i ain't one 😆😉Convent school ke saray bachay are like this 😛

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

not in the morning..
it stinks in the evening..
cox wenever i go to my second home dolmen 😆 i pass that road and it stinks cox of the horses and camels..
i live in DHA phase 5 soo its reallyy near.. and yess i am a burger bacha... 😆

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

You're from Islamabad?? Cool! Me too 😃

Coming to the OS, I loved it!! I loved the description and the best part was that I have been to almost every place mentioned so I could imagine it so well 😳

Hope you continue soon!

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Unreserved on page 12 😳

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