Zalak OS~ Because I Really Like You~ part 3(Last) page 17 - Page 17

Originally posted by: MahamRana

Hey thats amazing !
You shud definately write on Zashaf :)

Originally posted by: Zehra.

u updated last part as well 😲
let me read both of them and will then comment 😉

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: khisher

KILLER PART YAAR!!!!!!!
JUST LOVED IT...TRULY AMAZING...U R AN INCREDIBLE WRITER👏

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Aww what a cute fairy tale ending you gave to this story Suri!! It was Awesome!! 👍🏼

Suri can only come up with fairy tale endings🤣

I had been thinking since reading the second part about the possibilities to end this story. And my idea was that you would make them realise their feelings for each other and may be make them confess but what I didn't think is that instead of confession you would make them get married to each other. What I was thinking was too typical but you brought a nice different twist to it.

I really dtest the confession part in stories so damn difficult to pen down...for me at least!😆

it was better i got them married without any confession...besides in my opinion confessions arent always necessary in a relationships sometimes you know it😆

You depicted Falak's shyness, hesitation, nervousness, sheer joy really well...all the emotions that a bride goes through while being married to a guy she has affinity with. I am trying to imagine how cute Falak must have looked at a young age of 18 while dressed in a bridal's wear 😳

Because i recently saw my cousin do all that in her wedding i was glued to her all the time and i was teasing her by making such notes in her cell phone...her tension her glee her excitement and the nervousness and all... she was super annoyed by me😆 She was eighteen too and i was scaring her about her future studies and stuff that now its all over..you would soon be a moma and bye bye studies forever😆 Bechari...

Aww Zaroon's care and concern for Falak and his commitment towards her education was really touching. You rightly expressed it through Falak, how many men are actually willing to sacrifice their comfort of a family life to such an extent for the sake of their wife's wishes. This just made me fall in love with Zaroon's character all over again

Zaroon is my hero and he is the only perfect guy living🤣 I love him more ACHA!😆

The night scene where Zaroon asks her to go out with him was too cute. Typical husband wife banter! 😆 And the ending couldn't have been more perfect 😳

Muah!😳

Let me tell you, after the last update when you said there will be only one more part, I was worried that the story will be too rushed. But you dealt with it superbly. You took the story forward very smoothly, subtly and consistently 👏 And even though I wish it was longer, some part of me liked the fact that you kept it short and sweet rather than dragging the story too much 😳

Seriously? i have never rushed any of my stories to such an extent...it was fun in the end everything completed leaving a relaxed you behind😆

Needless to say I LOVED it...every bit of it. Thanks for this wonderful OS and most of all thanks for bringing me to this pakistani forum. In OS's ke bahane mujhe at least is forum main to aane ka moka mila. From now on I will try to be somewhat active in this forum 😃

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

I am so in love with the two... let me bug Fiaa for more😆

Thank you for the tareef.. i do not know if i deserve!😆 Mai awein kisi ki tareef nahi karti, it was good that's why i praised it 😃😉

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

well... you need ideas to write on... but since Fawad does really make your Roza shaky🤣 lets plan to do somehting fter Ramzaan.

Thank you if it werent for you i would never have come across such a cute lil couple😳

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

😆 Such emphasis hun?...thank you so much...and yeah you also continue writing your stories

Originally posted by: Gilrin

Tou yaar iftari k baad likh lia karo. Or Fawad ki pictures dekhne say parheez karo 😆 Ok i am in for planning, I love planning. 😛 You managed to make them a couple, I managed to come up with the idea only and an absolutely ridiculous OS.