Aww what a cute fairy tale ending you gave to this story Suri!! It was Awesome!! 👍🏼
I had been thinking since reading the second part about the possibilities to end this story. And my idea was that you would make them realise their feelings for each other and may be make them confess but what I didn't think is that instead of confession you would make them get married to each other. What I was thinking was too typical but you brought a nice different twist to it.
You depicted Falak's shyness, hesitation, nervousness, sheer joy really well...all the emotions that a bride goes through while being married to a guy she has affinity with. I am trying to imagine how cute Falak must have looked at a young age of 18 while dressed in a bridal's wear 😳
Aww Zaroon's care and concern for Falak and his commitment towards her education was really touching. You rightly expressed it through Falak, how many men are actually willing to sacrifice their comfort of a family life to such an extent for the sake of their wife's wishes. This just made me fall in love with Zaroon's character all over again
The night scene where Zaroon asks her to go out with him was too cute. Typical husband wife banter! 😆 And the ending couldn't have been more perfect 😳
Let me tell you, after the last update when you said there will be only one more part, I was worried that the story will be too rushed. But you dealt with it superbly. You took the story forward very smoothly, subtly and consistently 👏 And even though I wish it was longer, some part of me liked the fact that you kept it short and sweet rather than dragging the story too much 😳
Needless to say I LOVED it...every bit of it. Thanks for this wonderful OS and most of all thanks for bringing me to this pakistani forum. In OS's ke bahane mujhe at least is forum main to aane ka moka mila. From now on I will try to be somewhat active in this forum 😃
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
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