Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great work Leena, waiting for ur next chapter dear.Supera kalekiringe paaaa. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wowz great leena I juzt can't wait for the next chapterz....I agree with Kasthuri hope this story will be a serial soonz.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u guys are too sweet!😳😳 thanks again for liking my fanfic!😳😳

here's my latest add on.

CHAPTER 14

"let me give you guys a ride back home. " ajay volunteered smilingly. to his surprise, kailash saw deepa deny that invitation. "it's okay ajay. kailash will take me home. we live quite near to each other." she explained politely. hearing that rejection, ajay looked like a wounded puppy. though kailash felt sorry for ajay, the bigger part of him was ecstatic that deepa had chose to go home with him instead of with ajay.

ajay followed them till the outer gate of the hotel. he waved good-bye to deepa & kailash almost sadly. "shall I hail a cab?" kailash turned to deepa expectantly. "no, let's walk back home. it's such a beautiful breezy night." she smiled up at him. agreeing almost instantly, kailash started walking beside her. he glanced at her every few seconds. "kailash, am I a plain jane?" deepa suddenly asked him. "no! no, deepa. you are beautiful. why do you suddenly ask me that?" kailash asked her concerned. "no, it's just that I feel that I am not pretty or classy enough for ajay. you should see the people looking at me so disdainfully." she sounded really sad.

kailash caught hold of deepa's hand, he turned her towards him & made sure she was looking at him before he continued. "deepa. look at me. I swear upon myself that you are pretty. in fact, you're a really gorgeous girl. it's just that some people see it, some don't. you are perfect. any guy is lucky to get you as his girlfriend." he kindly comforted her. deepa had tears streaming down her cheeks, she was looking really distraught. "but.. but.." she faltered. "ssshh.. don't say another word. you are perfect. ajay is lucky to have you love him so much." kailash insisted strongly. "you are a great guy kailash. you made me feel better in such a short time. the girl who gets you is really lucky." deepa softly told him & gave him a hug. "if only you knew who that girl was…" he sighed wistfully as he returned the hug.

end of chapter. hope u all liked it! comments & suggestions as always.😛

~ leena 😃

Edited by jigglypuff726 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
Leena beautiful chapter how romantic. Hope Deepa and Kalalish get together and Ajay becomes a wonded puppy.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😉 keep it up

Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, How sweet! ❤️ I simply loved it. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Super dooper Chapter Leenzzz
sucha a sweet romantic moments!!!
Good work
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks a lot everybody for supporting & commenting on my fanfic. u guys are great!😳😳

latest installment from my camp! lols!😆😆

CHAPTER 15

kailash walked deepa back home happily. after kailash had comforted her, deepa turned bubbly & cheerful again. he heaved a sigh of relief because deepa was smiling again. they both chatted about almost everything that happened that day. "kailash, guess what day it is three days from now?" deepa asked him with a naughty smile. "what?" he returned the question. "it's my birthday fool! so will you celebrate it with me? my mama & papa are not in town so I am all alone for my birthday." she became upset again. "don't worry deepa. we will both celebrate your birthday wonderfully okay?" kailash said with a smile & deepa brightened visibly.

he sent her home & made his way back to his house. on the way, kailash was in deep thought as to how he was going to celebrate deepa's birthday. "what gift should I get her?" he wondered seriously. then a great idea struck him & kailash realised that deepa was going to love this birthday. "I might even get the courage to tell her that I love her!" his grin grew even wider.

deepa was sitting on her bed reading her favourite novel. her mind went back to all the fun moments she had spent with kailash. he was so nice & sweet. "his girl is one lucky woman!" deepa thought yet again. then she realised that she was supposed to be dreaming about ajay instead now she was thinking of kailash. "what are you doing deepa??" she scolded herself & turned off the light. she had enough for that night.

there she was. looking as beautiful as a fairy in her maroon saree. her hair was let down& it was swaying in the air as if performing a dance of it's own. and she was his. yes, deepa was finally his. kailash reached out & touched her. she turned & broke into a huge smile upon seeing him. kailash reached out & touched her cheek. "I love you deepa." he whispered huskily. " I love you too kailash. I am yours forever." deepa hugged him tightly. he lifted her chin up & drew closer to her lips when… "RINGGGGG!!!!" the alarm clock blared in his ear. kailash awoke with a start & realised that he was having a dream & he had also been hugging his pillow. laughing at himself, kailash got ready for a brand new day.😆😆

i hope i ended the night properly.😛 please comment & suggest! love you all! next update will be tmr! till then!

~ leena 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Getting more romantic and interesting - way to go Leena. Await eagerly for the next chapter. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very romantic. Its been long time i read these romantic stories, and thanks Leena for this story. 👏 👏

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