Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Leena,

As usual very good chapter. I enjoy every single line.

Wish you and Your Family A Very Happy Pongal!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Friends,

Wish You All And Your Family Very Happy Pongal!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Deepa has feelings for Kailash and the jealous factor will help her. Gret story, Leena.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good work Leena. You are always good at editing...and pictures and siggies. After all you are my guru.....ha?

But I saw in anjali page ...some one is trying to teach you to edit...??????ha ha ha ha
Hope you are enjoying pongal festival there in SIngapore.

Do you go for indian food to Sarangoon STreet? or High Street?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: atina

Good work Leena. You are always good at editing...and pictures and siggies. After all you are my guru.....ha?

But I saw in anjali page ...some one is trying to teach you to edit...??????ha ha ha ha
Hope you are enjoying pongal festival there in SIngapore.

Do you go for indian food to Sarangoon STreet? or High Street?

atina, tt person in the anjali thread was taking things so seriously. we should just humour pple like them. it's okay atina i don't mind pple advicing me.😊 pongal here is good, a little quiet. btw, i think my fanfic update might be a little delayed.😭😭😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96

here is my latest chapter. hope u all enjoy it. sorry for the delay yaar.😊

CHAPTER 18

deepa woke up in the middle of the night, disturbed by her thoughts about kailash. she realised something very suddenly. the fact that she might be falling in love with kailash. isn't that why she was so jealous & insecure of his relationship with preethi. "I can't be. I love ajay. I still do love him. then why am I feeling such strong feelings towards kailash?" thinking of that, deepa stayed awake the entire night. her heart was confused so was her mind.

for two days deepa avoided kailash. her feelings towards him scared her very much. she was afraid she might just run into kailash's arms if she saw him. "why don't you just answer the phone?" deepa's friend asked her curiously. "I don't know what to say to him anymore. I am afraid." deepa answered tiredly. deepa had spent two very sleepless nights pondering about whom she loved but still she couldn't find the answer. "well.. you don't have to think too much because I think kailash is just in front of you." her friend smiled to someone behind deepa. deepa spun around to find kailash standing there with a smile.

"you called him here? you betrayer!" deepa hissed angrily at her friend. "well I had to do what I had to do. now you sought this out with him." with that her friend left. kailash came over & took a seat in front of her. "where have you been? you never took my calls! it's your birthday today, do you know that I have prepared so much for you?" he asked her angrily. "I am sorry kailash. I just.." deepa searched for the right words. "ssshhh.. don't say anything more. just follow me to a place." he silenced her & got her out of the restaurant. he placed a cloth over her eyes & drove her to the secret place.

comments & suggestions are welcome! next update will be tmr.😊

~ leena

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Leena,
I think You can go to HCennai and start shooting a serial .....I mean direct a serial...that will work out much better than any of these present serials.... 😉
good work buddy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great job Leena. Atina, you are right, Leena should be directing serials.
Edited by patraj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Leena,
Where is the next chapter?
When are you and Atina join hands to direct a serial? 😉 i am very confident that it will be better than all the serials.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice chapter...Cant wait to know khailash gift for Deepa on next chapter 😳

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