Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 7

Hi Jiggly, COOL-COOLEST.Please ma, make this a feel good serial. I'm kind of a little past the 'falling for' stage. But still you story brings back the young me.
Make it a Johnson and Johnson's serial - No more tears!!!!
Hats of to you - -You are one good Creative head (Or u have one good Creative head:))

It's a cute story Leena, even if u have wrote it on a short time... 😳

Leena, its a lovely story 😊 i'm liking it!!!! 😉

Next chapter please..................can't wait 😳

Originally posted by: Wingy

Hi Jiggly, COOL-COOLEST.Please ma, make this a feel good serial. I'm kind of a little past the 'falling for' stage. But still you story brings back the young me.
Make it a Johnson and Johnson's serial - No more tears!!!!
Hats of to you - -You are one good Creative head (Or u have one good Creative head:))

lols! thanks a lot! ur entire post was very cute & encouraging!😃

thankoo to the rest of you pple who always make it a point to comment on my fanfic. u rock!👏👏

here is my latest chapter for all those pple who like my fanfic!

CHAPTER 13

"do u want to dance?" deepa came over to where kailash was standing. kailash just stared at her for a moment, trying to sink in what she had just said. "did you just ask me to dance?" he asked her totally surprised. "yes, you are such a great friend. I think I owe you a dance." she replied & put forth her hand. kailash took it with a huge grin & led her to the dance floor. the dance beat quickly changed into a slow number. kailash drew deepa closer to him & she rested her head on his shoulder.

he felt his heart race so quickly that he feared it might jump out of his ribcage. kailash felt so light-headed as he felt deepa rest her head on his shoulders. they both were so close together that if kailash just reached out a little he could brush his lips against deepa's forehead. the moment came to an end abruptly when deepa's heel gave way. one minute she was in kailash's arm, the next she was on the floor. "oh my god deepa! are you alright?" panicked kailash worriedly. deepa was half laughing half blushing as he helped her up.

as kailash fussed over deepa, ajay came over looking just as worried as kailash. "deepa? are you alright? I hope you are not hurt." he questioned, worry evident in his eyes. kailash just rolled his eyes. this guy must be kidding if he thought deepa was buying that. "uh-oh. deepa IS buying it." he realised as he saw deepa looking at ajay dreamily. "it's going to be a long night!" kailash sighed dejectedly resigning himself to whatever fate had in store for him.

still the party scenes. bear with me while i think up of a nice way to end the night.😆😆 comments & suggestions welcome!

~ leena 😃

wow.....thais is good one......
You can make her dream of V. day....since it is february month after all.......ha ha ha

Coming Soon

Hi all,

Soon we are ( Myself, Patraj and Rojapoo) as a team going to open a new thread for any hilarious things happening around here in our Tamil pages...or in Tamil movies etc.

All the things we post here will be our original creations. Strictly original.....either from one of us or from all of us ( except the pictures...which.. ofcourse will be taken from the serials and movies)

We are looking for a good title for this thread. Anyone thinking of good title please pm to one of us .... That will be of great help for us. You can also post under this thread your hilarious thingies......but make sure it revolves around us and serials and movies......and short and crisp.....no one has time to read a full or half page of jokes taken from some other sites.

Thanks buddies........see you all with new ideas to make you all get stomachcramps........😭 😭 😉 😉

Ungal...........atina, rojapoo & patraj

Deepa is slowly falling for our hero 😳

Can't wait to next chapter...
You are a wonderful storywriter Leena 😉

How romantic and funny at the same time, keep it up leena.

Leena, I wish we can make this story into a serial!!!! 👏