VeeBhav SS : Lethal Captivation...(Ch 5 & 6 -17) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Areesha566

hush finally read it

had to use my old browser

update was nic

veer sneeked in ladies loo... ewww

haww hate this veer

precap.

again... Shocking

pheww atleast kabir is with natasha

update soon

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome start n cs

loved it

veer..interesting character

natasha is pregnant..oh..

Vaibhavi-natasha share good bonding!

the mystry queen..twist ke bina tumhari story to imagine kar hi nahi sakti! hehe!

I was having some glimpses of enigma here! silly me!

precap is interesting!

do continu soon

pm me the update!

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

i dont watch the show and so i am completely inaware of its track but i trust ur imagination and love it
😉 .. veer is really a strong character and so is vaibhavi... liked the banner and the title ... waiting for more .. contd. soon thnx for pm

Nice part..
Same as shown in the show BUT with different words..that was good..👍🏼
Precap seems interesting..
What to say..I just love ur writing..
Thanks for pm and cont soon.

Too goood 😆
Omg twist ? Iam waiting 😛 😛
Please continue...and update fast 😃 👏

Love it wah kya andaz hai veer ka "after u my lady" muahh
Waiting for more
Take care

thanks for update but have'nt followed the story 😊

Originally posted by: Swara85

Nice part..
Same as shown in the show BUT with different words..that was good..👍🏼
Precap seems interesting..
What to say..I just love ur writing..
Thanks for pm and cont soon.

Originally posted by: tani.m

AWESOME
first part of the story quite similar like show... but i love it ...

precap is really interesting...please update soon.. waiting eagerly ...thanks for the pm 😊