VeeBhav SS : Lethal Captivation...(Ch 5 & 6 -17)

Areesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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toh phir baar baar page blocked, dont have permission to veiw in Pakistan q?

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

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To be honest ...

I did not like this part...

As I felt it very similar to the

Next episode ...

I am relly sorry if

I hurted u 😭

But I am kind of girl who is direct ...

But u r words were relly eye catching ...

Which attracted Me too read full ...

Precap looks different ...

Will be waiting for the next part

Thanks for PM

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Black_Angel
To be honest ...

I did not like this part...

As I felt it very similar to the

Next episode ...

I am relly sorry if

I hurted u 😭

But I am kind of girl who is direct ...

But u r words were relly eye catching ...

Which attracted Me too read full ...

Precap looks different ...

Will be waiting for the next part

Thanks for PM

Thanks dear... yep... as I said na... till this part I borrowed it from the serial as I was clueless about the base...

After this as u deduced... from the next chapter the story would be running on totally my imagination :)

Thanks once again dear...

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Areesha566
toh phir baar baar page blocked, dont have permission to veiw in Pakistan q?

oh shoot... I really hv no idea :O

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Areesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

hush finally read it

had to use my old browser

update was nic

veer sneeked in ladies loo... ewww

haww hate this veer

precap.

again... Shocking

pheww atleast kabir is with natasha

update soon

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Awwwsssmmm part dear
Loved it
It was Supperbbb...
Precap looks Interesting...
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Armagadon

Thanks dear... yep... as I said na... till this part I borrowed it from the serial as I was clueless about the base...

After this as u deduced... from the next chapter the story would be running on totally my imagination :)

Thanks once again dear...

Will be waiting 😃

Sorry if hurt 😭

Edited by Black_Angel - 11 years ago

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misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i dont watch the show and so i am completely inaware of its track but i trust ur imagination and love it
😉 .. veer is really a strong character and so is vaibhavi... liked the banner and the title ... waiting for more .. contd. soon thnx for pm

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