VeeBhav SS : Lethal Captivation...(Ch 5 & 6 -17) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

me first!!woohoo!!

Yayo! I was waiting for your comment! Sacchi!

Awesome update dear 😃

loved it 🤗

Glad you loved the update dear!

their meet was beautifully written👏 She didn't wanna talk to him.. but he didn't pay heed to her words..

No thanks dear!

Veer is filled with regret n remorse.. his state was beautifully written👏

Vaibhavi met with an accident.. her legs came under tram..😭 Veer came to know about this

Veer is adamant to help her but she's not ready to listen.. but then he's quite stubborn😆

Veer ho ya Arjun, stubbornness toh un dono ka surname hai 😆

loved Vaibhavi-Ram's talks.. she atleast laughs when he's around.. actually he makes her laugh.. his jokes r nice!😆

Ram is like the Lakshman to Veer!

Vee-Bhav 's convo was superb!

she asked him to take her out on saturday.. "one prefers to be with a known enemy than an unknown friend.." 👏 so true..

Yep, Vaibhu got to know ki jo bhi ho for now toh banda theek thaak hi hai...

Vaibhavi didn't want a check up from that doc.. Dr. K Mehra.. is it Kaal again😉?? well then again he mate the same fate😉 Veer saw Dr doing.. ahem.. n he came n saved her

that Dr. was sent to jail😃

Hehe... yeah... aur kisika naam dimaag main nahi aaya, bas Veer ne uska murder nahi kiya... kyunki karta toh Veer bhi jail chala jaata...

Vaibhavi is at Veer's home now..she wants to be independent.. he wants to give her prosthetic feet😃.. n also wanna cancel his Europe tour.. Ram understood that he loves her.. but Veer is still confused😆 well.. he's thinking!😉

Bhai it all matters that he is "thinking" about it... haha

do continu soon

thanks for pm

Firse thanks! 😲

Originally posted by: Devangana

Good that Veer was in time to save Vaibhavi from that leech. The poor girl had to suffer so much and Veer deserves to be guilty. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: _Shivani_

Shreee...mere Yaaarrraaa...kya update dita tussi...iiitttsss aaawwweeesssooommmeee...i lllooovvveee iiittt...
PLS UPDATE SOON...

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Update Dear
Loved it So very much
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Wonderfully Written
Love Veer talking care of Vaibhavi
Ram is so cute loved his n Vaibhavi's friendship
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

thanks 4 updating the story dear..

VeeBhav's meet was sketched well👍🏼..Her getting furious at him, going out of control..he is feeling even more guilty. Ofcourse facing her after knowing her condition, seeing her so shattered will be difficult..But he deserves it.
Her accident was very painful..😭Rather reading about her state was all the more painful..😭
So he was attracted towards her..and still does..?😲
Their convo was good..
When she asked about him abusing her, if given an opportunity..that hurts..I pitied her..😔
Ram..😆what to say..he is very helpful..flirting with Vaibhavi..doing his dramas to make her smile, supporting Veer..
A known enemy is better than an unknown friend..true ya..!
OH sh*t..That doc..🤬😡
She is in his house..and now will have prosthetic feet..glad..!😃
He loves her..😳Wah..! Ram ko pata hai..ise kab realise hoga..
Superb update but was painful to read in between..
Thanks for pm..cont soon.

thank u so much for the update dost...

hmmm...impressive! shaitaan ko sudhar dia!... aur yeh guilt love main badl vi gaya...oho...