OURS IS DIFFERENT (SEASON-2) Ch 22-25 on pg 25 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Hmm interesting!
😆actually I had already told you this that the plot is interesting but reading it make me actually act out this dialogue as the villian usually does 😆
I'm not any villian btw 😆

It was sad update and the song mai dhoondne ko zamaane me intensifies it...that song lyrics are really heart melting for me😭
I really don't know but somehow you make me laugh even on sad updates and you know where I did? At the precap !!
Fan of your 1 liners!👏
It rung me in ears and I was like 🤣
Accha vese since Kabir was portrayed as dancer in NAUC and his academy is fine to be thought about. And so I've also contemplated of watching a professional clash between them could be a delight. And it is coming true in your ff and I LIKE IT 😉(Saxena style if you watch it or else simply I like it 😃)

Regarding the chapter, I was waiting for the suspense to disperse and it has begun well👏
Nisha Viraj-Kaira k saath hai but nobody knows it hmm
Mb MPJKR DKB out of the world 😆
So different! And you really bring out different and new versions kaafi kuch hai tumhaare dimaag me hehe
MPJKR waala to I would love to try on my sis😳 please don't mind and credit tumhe hi dungi 😆
For the second season, It was out and out a great start!
Jab Viraj bola naa ki he acts to be happy but I've seen him broken,touched yaar
Magar Kabir ne jaane dia Nisha ko?? Roka nai?? Use pata nai hai ki Nisha kaha hai kaisi hai And he's not trying to find her? 😕
I totally understand that they both hate each other now but love each other but still these questions are there in my mind. I believe my questions would be answered as the story progresses.😊
Moreover what has happened that separated them is still isn't clear. I just got a few points :Kabir ka gussa;Magar vo dikhaava tha;Kirti -Kartik k liye kiya gaya tha; Kabir k liye Nisha ki nafrat
But ye points jud nai ho paa rahe and suspense kaayam hai😲
Are haa mai bhul hi gayi thi Austin ki baato se mujhe bhi laga tha ki he's her boss 🤣🤣
Waiting for next update hope they meet in your different way as well


hi Neeru, First of all thanks for the extra large reply. I get the first line of ur comment very easily. trust me i am one line you. 😆
Glad to know you liked the song choice. laughing even in the sad updates🤣. I love my one liners because of which you people are not completely depressed withe updates.
Even I love Professional clashes and Nibir ka toh was my dream. isiliye khud hi ki dream poori kar rahi thi but i helped urs as well glad to know. And i watch I LIKE IT! 😆 Daily!
Glad to know that the suspense made it to the mark.
Haan haan do use them. Main bhi try karti hoon kabhi kabhi its just my sister is elder to me so i never tell her the full form of it. 😉 😆
Sab aage khul jayega. I know u have too many questions but BABA Pikachu par charosa rakho putri. the future has lot more in its treasure. Abhi toh sirf shuruwat hai.
Jo points tumhe milein hain usmein aur add hote jayenge but i think woh koi kadi nahi bana payenge even after that because that is what my different is all about. 😆
And yeah Austin waali line made me feel my empoitions at first but then actually i turned him the PA otherwise he was the boss. 😉😆
Updating in a moment and giving answers to some of ur questions. (waise i dont think abhi mil bhi payenge.)😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: mkjr

So exciting nice plot too thrilling excited to know the suspense plz post soon loved it


Thanks mate. Glad u liked it. posting it now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Nice one ... and I m more confused now😆 but really liked the update ... both unknowingly participating for same competition waiting for the aamna saamna😉... update soon 😊


Thanks Porrnima. Abhi aur sonfuse hogi in the future parts. 😉 Aamna Saamna in the upcoming part. Updating in a moment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sirat711

Awesome yarr
Soo interesting
Update soon


Thanks mate. Glad u liked it. updating in some moments.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Eagerly waiting for your next update


Thanks mate. updating soon.
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Chapter-1

Chapter-2

Ye Bandhan Toh Pyar Ka Bandhan Hai!😉

IN LONDON

All the Londoners had to reach the venue a day before and get their rooms since the investors decided that even if the academy is of London they would have to stay in the hotel rooms. Nisha and the other members and obviously Kj reached the venue. They got a room and came to know that one more academy is coming from India but they didn't know which one. The day went by.

Kabir reached the next day and went to the hotel. They were going to their rooms. Nancy (Nisha's crew member) was moving on the corridor with a glass of cold drink in her hand when she got hit by Hardik.

Na- (Winced) Oww... What are you? (angrily glares at Hardik, everyone looked at them) Can't you see someone walking in front of you? Are you blind?

Hardik was about to say something when Priyal cut him off.

Pr- (annoyed) Are you blind? Can't you see a whole team moving? Come on you are really tiny for someone to be seen but we were tall enough! Little Scavenger!

Kabir wanted to interrupt but he was enjoying the fight. He giggled at Priyal's last line.

Na- (Angry) Excuse me! You should have been apologizing to me and here you are shouting at me! What are you people? (looks at their attire) and who are you his lawyer or his girlfriend? Wait, or some cheap mistress?

Before anyone could say anything they heard a thud sound and Nancy felt a burning sensation on her cheeks. They were all shocked, especially Kabir to see his Nisha back with a damn new avatar. The Nisha who never really liked wearing a dress was wearing a shirt with a skirt and that too which was a bit above her knee length. She was in the total boss style with that coat. Nisha didn't see Kabir as he was behind the whole crew.

Ni- (angrily) How dare you Nancy?! How dare you say anything like that about some girl? These are not the ways of talking to someone. Better you apologise. (Nancy murmured a sorry) Better! I hope not to see such a big mistake from your side ever. It would be better if you mind your own business and look after your practice and next time if I see you talking to someone like this I will make sure to punish you in a better way.

Nancy cried and ran from there. Nisha turned and got the biggest shock of her life.

Teri meri baaki hai kahaani

Teri meri aadhi hai kahaani

Aa gayi wo mod par

Tu gaya jo chhod kar

Kya mil gaya

Mere dil ko tod kar kya mil gaya

Paas ho toh bura door ho toh bura

Aisa mere Khuda kyun hai

Tu hi tu har jagah aaj kal kyun hai

Tu hi tu har jagah aaj kal kyun hai

Raaste har dafa sirf tera pata

Mujhse poochhe bhala kyun hai

Ek pal pyaar ka zindagi se bada

Aisa mere Khuda kyun hai

Nisha stared at him and so did he. He always had a smile on his face but that smile wasn't the same anymore. It was forced as if. Nisha could feel it. Kabir saw Nisha after a complete year. She was much leaner now as if she had not been eating since days. She was not the same. She was just totally different. No smiles, nothing. Just a blank face.

Pr- (breaking their trance) Hello ma'am! Thank you for this!

Ni- (coming out of her trance, smiled) No, it was a fault from my member's side. I am really sorry for that. She shouldn't have said like that. It was really rude.

She turned for a second and wiped a tear that dared to come out of her eyes.

Ka- (cuts in between, stern voice) Excuse me Miss, next time onwards please make sure that the cage for such animals is properly locked.

Ni- (stern voice, angry) I am sorry Mr. but I think that mistakes are done by humans, animals are rather more perfect. And I have apologised on her behalf and she did the same as well, so there is no need to make a mountain out of a molehill.

Ka- This is not mole hill miss. (face to face)

Ni- Oh I am sure! But exaggerating won't help either.

Ka- Oh please! This would to the least make you realize you mistake because some people never realize their mistakes.

Ni- I am sure about that (taunting back) And moreover I was not wrong anywhere. My team member was and we are sorry for that.

Ka- The way you are fighting it doesn't seem so.

Ni- Then what should I do? Beg for forgiveness in front of you?

Ka- (looked the other way) I won't mind!

Ni- (points his finger at him, angrily) Listen Mr. you better be in your limits because if I forget mine you would regret it!

Ka- (put his finger against hers, glared at her) Are you warning me?

Ni- Take it anyway!

Ka- Better you mind it!

They gave death glares to each other.

Pr- (interrupted, realizes) Ma'am are you Ms. Nisha Gangwal?

Ni- Yes!

Pr- Ma'am I am sorry we couldn't recognize you. (excited) Actually we were so busy in talking and all. Ma'am you are the great shooter from India right? (surprised) Can I please get an autograph of yours?

Ni- We are here only for some days. Don't worry, I will get a photograph with you but right now I have to leave because I have got a real important work. so take care. We will meet soon. (about to leave)

Nisha giggled at her excitement. Nisha's team members were moving from there and saw Kabir.

Au- Are you Mr. Kabir Kumar sir, the great dancer from India?

Ka- Yes! (smiles)

Aria- (Nisha's team member) Sir I am a huge fan of yours. Sir would you please give me an autograph of yours?

Ka- (looks at Nisha and smirks) Sure why not? I love to entertain my fans, not like some who... never mind.

Nisha understood that he meant to taunt her. Nancy came from behind. Priyal glared at her.

Na- (guilty) I am sorry Ms. (looks at Priyal) I have never meant to hurt you in anyway. It was all my fault. I am really really sorry. I promise to never repeat the same mistake. Please forgive me.

Ha- It is okay mate. Never mind.

Na- (looks at Priyal) Won't you forgive me? Last chance?

Kabir looked at Priyal asking her to forgive Nancy.

Pr- Okay! But last chance.

Na- Thank you mate. Well I am Nancy. (forwards her hand)

Pr- (shakes her hand) Priyal Sharma!

Na- Nice to meet you Priyal!

Nancy looked at Hardik.

Na- And you are?

Har- Hardik!

Na- (forwards her hand) Nice to meet you Hardik. (Hand shake)

Ni- Austin!

Austin goes near her.

Au- Yes Nisha!

Ni- Austin, all the owners of different teams have been called so I am leaving. Please take care of the crew and help them with everything. And Kj is in his room.

Saying so she left. Kabir was thinking about Kj because he didn't know that Nisha called Kairaj KJ. Kabir called Austin.

Ka- (monologue) Ab ye Kj kaun hai? Wait why am I thinking about it? it is her life, let her go to hell. I won't mind.

Kabir also left for the same meeting as he was always given a message.

IN A HALL

Kabir was given a seat beside Nisha.

Investor 1- (announcement) Hello everyone! First of all welcome to London for the non-Londoner. I am Laura Williams!

Investor 2- And I am Andrew James!

Laura- So we wanted to tell you all about the competition.

Andrew- Before getting enrolled there would have come a window popping out with some rules and you all have signed them and that is why you are here. So I hope that I won't have to remind any of you about the rules.

Laura- And on the website we said that there were 3 rounds out of which you all know only the first one which is postponed. It is tomorrow so that all those who have travelled can rest properly and give their best tomorrow. The round as you all know will have you all showing your talents.

Andrew- And about the other rounds, they are surprise rounds which will be disclosed after the first round in front of everyone.

Laura- If there is any problems regarding the rooms or other things you all can meet our manager, Ms. Hanah Thomas!

Andrew- So we can wind up for now. We will all meet tomorrow directly. All the food will be served to your rooms. And any academy wanting to see London you can inform Hanah she will make the arrangements any moment.

Laura- Any doubt?

No hands were raised.

Andrew- Okay so see you all later then.

They were quite polite. Nisha and Kabir went back to their rooms without even looking at each other. The owners had different rooms whereas the team members had to share. And this is what is destiny! Nisha and Kabir got the neighboring rooms. Nisha went to talk to Hanah, the manager. She saw Kabir already there.

Ni- Excuse me! (they saw her) Actually I wanted to get my room changed.

Ha- Sure ma'am. This gentleman (points at Kabir) also wants a change in his room. Why don't you exchange your rooms!

Ni and Ka (together shouts)- No!

Hanah was shocked at their behavior.

Ka- Actually I wanted a room on some different floor. This floor doesn't seem proper for me (taunts Nisha indirectly).

Ni- Actually I don't like the people on the floor (taunts Kabir indirectly).

Ka- (looks at Nisha) She surely can't go according to your likes and dislikes.

Ni- Can she go according to yours?! (glares at Kabir)

Ka- I have a genuine problem!

Ni- It doesn't seem that genuine.

Ka- It is more than yours.

Ni- What? Are their ghosts on the floor that you fear that they will trouble you?

Ka- I don't know about ghosts but I have seen a witch there (indirectly taunts Nisha)

Ni- What do you mean?! Do I look like a witch to you?

Ka- I never said anyone's name.

Ni- There was no need, I could really sense it.

Kabir was about to say something when Hanah interrupted.

Ha- Sir! Ma'am! (Nibir realized that they were fighting in front of someone) First of all, according to the rules, you cannot fight with any other academy. And second of all, there is no room vacant right now. After the first round some rooms might get vacant. I will see if I can adjust myself but till that time you two will have to adjust with the same rooms.

Nisha and Kabir didn't say anything. They just did Hm!' arrogant wala.

They went to their rooms and retired since they had to practice for the next day after an hour or so. The next day wasn't as far as they thought it was. The next day arrived and it was the first round in no time. The team members were in the green rooms allotted to them.

IN Nisha's ACADEMY's (Target Locked) GREEN ROOM

They were all ready and Nisha went to meet them and motivate them.

Ni- Okay! So guys we will be on the stage within some moments. We all know where we have to make mistakes at in our performances. But this time guys, there is no scope of any mistakes. Remember the name of our academy, Target Locked'. We have to keep up with the name and never let our academy down.

She put her hand forward- Target locked?

Everyone smiled and put their hands on hers" LOCKED!

Just then they heard the academy's name announced. They smiled and ran outside. Nisha went outside to see their performance and motivate them. Then the bold, strong Nisha mode was on. She sat on the chair allotted to her in the ground.

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Chapter-3

This Is A War!

The performance started. The main lead came and the song ANGEL WITH A SHOTGUN started playing in the background.

She is clothed in strength and dignity, and she laughs without the fear of the future.

He spoke the lines very beautifully. Some dancers started dancing in the background and two girls came to the stage with determined look. They turned to the darts and shot on the bull's eye. Everyone applauded.

Then the guy again came in the center.

She is powerful beyond measure and beautiful beyond description but she is the only one having the power to destroy as well as make a person.

Then came 2 guys carrying 2 women on their shoulders. Some more guys came up and they made a formation such that the girls could stand on them and then they shot a small apple kept on a far off table. Everyone applauded.

Then the guy came again.

If she believes she can then she would. She is the strongest being alive on this earth that can bear every pain and not

3 girls were standing on a wall. Some guys came blindfolded and shot above the head of the girls. Everyone applauded.

The guy came again.

She is my mother, your sister, our friend, your wife, our love, our support system but above all she is A WOMAN.

And then come girls came blindfolded and guys were holding a fruit attached to a cushion. They shot it accurately. Their performance ended with a standing ovation even by the judges. But Nisha did not stand up.

Ka- (monologue) Arrogant! (looks at Nisha) apne students ko bhi motivate nahi karegi!

Kabir went to the green room of his academy (The Immaculates)

Ka- Everyone ready?

Together- Yes sir!

Ka- I am not going to give some great good inspiring speeches because I know that my words won't help since you all might be motivating yourself. All I can say is, do whatever you feel is right but just don't stop and trust me I would be there to correct you if you are wrong. (smiled) Now run!

They all smiled and left. Kabir went and sat on his seat with fingers crossed. The performance started. The song INDIA WAALE played in the background.

Ho maane ya koi maane na
Yahaan apni bhi thodi adaa thoda andaaz hai

Hardik came in the center doing flip-flops.
Aise hain chaahe waise hain
Arey jo bhi hain jaise hain
Khud pe humein naaz hai

Another guy came and stood beside Hardik doing flip-flops.

Jaane na humko ye zamaana
another guy came and stood beside them.

Chaaho to humko aazmaana

Same thing.
Hum yaar-baaz hum jaal-saaz
Hum ishq-baaz dilwaale

Priyal came in with two boys standing on their shoulders with the nations medium sized flag. Those two guys were on oxboards. TREMEDOUS BALANCE!

Kehte hain humko pyar se India waale
Chhu lete dil ke taar se India waale

Then the boys did some B-boying stunts on the beats whereas Priyal placed the flag and joined them later.
Har jeet cheen le haar se Indiawaale
Dushman ke chakke chhuda de hum Indiawale
Dushman ke chakke chhuda de hum Indiawale

Then they did the patent India Waale step.

MUSIC PLAYS

Then one of the guys started shoing his moves of Getto whereas the others showed of their professional style on the same music. Priyal did classical.

Yun toh seedhe bade..
Kabhi chahein to hathon se lete laqeerein chura

Hardik took the main stage and danced in his hip-hop style for the two lines.

O.. humko parwaah nahi
Jo bhi kehta hai, kehne de jag ye bhala ya bura

One guys professional with contemporary came in and did a contemporary style.
Jaisi bhi marzi ho humaari
Karte hain aisi hoshiyaari

One professional with Country dance came up for the above lines lines.
Par dil se yaar jo le pukaar
To jaan nisaar kar dale

Then all kept their hands on each other's with the beats.
Kehte hain humko pyar se India wale
Chhu lete dil ke taar se India wale
Har jeet cheen le haar se Indiawaale
Dushman ke chakke chhuda de hum Indiaawale
Ungli pe sabko nachaa dein hum Indiawaale

They did the main step of the song with some additions like that of popping, locking and urban.

The Arial dancer came and started doing some real great steps with the prop that he had that was ropes.

Aankhon ki aankhon ki chaabi se
Priyal and Hardik took the main stage.

Thoda betaabi se chupke se khole dilon ke taale
they did slow salsa at first where Priyal did a 180 spilt.

Jaan dete, usko jahaan dete
Apna imaan dete jiski bhi baahe gale me dale

Priyal kept her hands behind his neck and Hardik started rotating without even touching her and in a moment she was as if in the air with just one bolt attached.

Duniya se humko kya le jaana

Yaaron ke dil mein ho thikana

They started doing quick steps.

Humein ek baar hota hai pyaar
Ye laakh baar kehla le

They were in the middle whereas the others stood in the same line and the Arial dancer continued with the dance.

Kehte hain humko pyar se India wale
Chhu lete dil ke taar se India wale

Hardik and Priyal did Flemenco now whereas the others did classical around them.

Har jeet cheen le haar se Indiawaale

Then Priyal again left the stage and this time came with a flag again but on different shoulders who were themselves doing tacking while holding her.

Dushman ke chakke chhuda de hum Indiawale..
Dushman ke chakke chhuda de, chhuda de...
Ungli pe sabko nachaa dein...
Dushman ke chakke chhuda de hum Indiawale..

They made a formation in which Priyal was on the top waving our Nation's flag and the Arial dancer was on the top upside down with one leg in a beautiful position (I can't really describe Arial).

As the song ended everyone stood up and gave them a standing ovation. Nisha also stood up and clapped. Kabir was about to jump but he got remembered that he is the owner. They all returned. All the other leftover academies performed and some were really tremendous with their talents. But the awesomest one was that of UK. They were also a dance academy but they were the best it seemed. Kabir really feared them. For shooting China was a big rival for Nisha. They were as if immaculate. The way they projected it was out of the world.

The results were soon out. 10 academies could only make their way to the next round and The Target Locked and The Immaculates were among the top 5 in the list. Everyone was really happy but they were unaware of the bomb ready for them which would surely get them all shocked.

PRECAP- ZOR KA JHATKA HAAYE ZORON SE LAGA!😉

Chapter 4

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Piku🤗
Naya story...superb start...👏
Its full of suspences...curious to read more
Main kahi nhi jaa rhi piku...jab time mile to aaungi IF pe
Phone se type kar rhi hu isliye comments choti hogi😆
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Superb updates...👏
Nibir ka hua aamna saamna
Bas suspense jaldi kholo yaar😆
Comment chotu sa hai...dont mind😆
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Awesome...
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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