OURS IS DIFFERENT (SEASON-2) Ch 22-25 on pg 25 - Page 6

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Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Finally Nisha and Kabir met! Lovely updates! 👏👏
Mazaa aa gaya clash k pehle hi! 😉honestly speaking dono k dono badle nazar naa aate mujhe if you hadn't written about the changes bcz dono ladte abhi bhi ek number hai!😆
Nisha Kabir aaju baaju me hai
Kya advice thi 'why don't you exchange your rooms'🤣🤣
Exchange k baad bhi to same hi rahegi situation 🤣

I like the name 'Target locked'...sounds cool😎
Since it's a competition (or war as per title) one team has to win and for that other has definitely to lose! And which team will make it Nisha's or Kabir's? And neither could anyone deliberately lose as some fiction show bcz it's not the matter of an individual win rather the whole team! Team which has worked hard nights and days with just a goal in their mind. Let's see whose dedication bear fruits of celebrations
But abhi to first round hi hua hai and zor ka jhatka coming up😲
Although NiBir are separated but still I'm enjoying their fights (don't take it otherwise I just can't help enjoying their nok jhoks😳)
Yeah you said that right mere ek bhi question ka answer nai mila and aur questions develop ho gaye hai
To aapne poora man banaa liya hai naa raaz ko raaz hi rakhne ka
Pata nai kya hua hai aakhir aisa?
Dono ek saal! poora ek saal! baad dekhe ek dusre ko and I still wonder how they restricted themselves (Their fight is understandable as they are born to fight it seems🤣) how one can withhold feelings especially for the person for whom your life once relied upon hmm apprehensive of some serious bad incident 😒
Coming back to the update, You described the dancing scenes really well 👍🏼 actually mai thodi dheeli hu dancing me😆 to I don't know major terms about dancing like Arial or urban or country dance and all. I know only salsa, locking,popping as I saw some dance reality show and got to know ki accha ye isko ye kehte hai oh😆. But I rock wid baarati dance 🤣no one can beat me in baarati dance 😃😆
Aur ha Nisha looking classy!! (wink)
I enjoyed both the chapters all the conversation ( indirect taunting rather😆) of Nisha&Kabir!😳
waiting for next chapter's jhatke !😃


thanks Neeru, glad to know u liked it. I know, it is their fights that brought them close earlier. 😉Nisha Kabir aaju baaju mein honge tabhi toh dil bhi unke aaju baaju honge.😉

Yup u actually got my point. I got them here in a team because i wanted to tell that love has great power but it does not have the rights to ruin others' hardwork.

But abhi to first round hi hua hai and zor ka jhatka coming up😲
U know my story na, always different. 😆
The fights are supposed to be enjoyed. Pay karna hai tum logon for jheling the pain. 😆 I surely wont mind.

Yeah you said that right mere ek bhi question ka answer nai mila and aur questions develop ho gaye hai
To aapne poora man banaa liya hai naa raaz ko raaz hi rakhne ka
Pata nai kya hua hai aakhir aisa?
you are right. Abhi toh aur bahut se questions develop ho jayenge. 😉 Fir jab tumhara dimaag questions se bhar jayega and you would be on the verge of having a brain burst then i will tell you the truth.😉😆 Different always!😆
From Kabir's side it was pain by Nisha and from Nisha's side the vice versa. So according to the them the main reason for their pain is their loved one so therefore they could not cover up their hatred with their love.

Actually mai thodi dheeli hu dancing me😆
🤣 Sahi mein yr! I am quite well versed with dances and meri bhi specialty Baraati dance hai. 😆
Nisha pe line mat maar warna Kabir tujhe maar dega, she is single but reserved. 😆
Glad u liked it. thanks again. Will post very soon.
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Chapter-3

Chapter-4

Zor Ka Jhatka Haaye Zoro Se Laga!

The other academies were shown their way back and the left over academies were asked to come for a meeting for the next round.

IN THE HALL

Laura- Before we begin, we would like to congratulate you all for the bravo performances you gave and for making it to the next round.

All of them smiled.

Andrew- Now the question is that what is the second round? Well it is a bit complicated, you see. You have to compete with the others' talents!

Laura- Okay! This was a brief description. Now, let me tell you the whole matter. We have got some chits. (Hanah got a bowl full of chits to the stage) In these chits we have the names of all the top 10 academies in the competition. We will call you here and ask you to pick up a chit.

Andrew- Whatever academy's name is there in the chit you will have to perform the talent that they do. For eg- If you get an academy specialized for singing then you will have to train your students and sing in the competition's next round.

Laura- But there is a twist! You have to add your special taste to the academy's special talent. Like if you are for dancing and have got singing then you have to add the singing as well as the dancing elements to the performance.

Laura- And after the next round we will only have 8 academies.

Andrew- That means 2 of the academies will leave us then and there itself.

Laura- Some details are still left which we will tell you after the academy owners pick up the chits.

Andrew- We can begin with the top one.

They started coming one by one. Nisha and Kabir were really tensed. It was Nisha's turn now. Nisha went on the stage.

She took up the chit and gave it to Laura.

Laura- It is The Dancing Ambassadors" UK!

Nisha was shocked. Dance was never her cup of tea except for the classical one but teaching classical this soon was real tough. What will she do now!?

Nisha went down with a frustrated face. It was Kabir's turn now. Laura seemed to have a crush on Kabir. He was damn handsome so anybody could have had it. Kabir went on the stage, took a chit and gave it to Andrew.

Andrew- It is the Shooting Stars- China!

Kabir was just numb. Shooting! He even did not know how to hold a gun. What would he teach to his students? He went down with a frustrated face. Soon everyone got their academies' names. Although Nisha and Kabir were upset with the academies they got but they were also happy that the opposite as academies had got the same as theirs, i.e. China got Kabir's and UK got Nisha's. (EVIL GRIN)

Laura- Now the big twist, you have got only a week to prepare for it. (Everyone Shocked, Laura & Andrew rocked)

Ka- (monologue) Hum logon ko maarne ke liye bulaya hai idhar! What do they think of themselves! I even don't know how to hold a gun, what will I teach my students? Mix both the elements, my foot! I am surely gonna die. Nisha ko toh classical aata hai she can teach her students a bit of it but what about me!? hamara toh patta kat gaya! Hey wait! (realized) Why am I thinking about her? Even if she dies I should not really care!

Ni- (monologue) Bas yehi dekhna bacha tha zindagi mein! Literally dancing! Mujhe sirf classical aata hai but I cannot teach them this thing in this short span. Oh god! why don't you kill me at once! And Kabir, usse toh guns ke baare mein kuch bhi nahi pata hai, how would he teach shooting? Hey wait! (realized) Why am I thinking about him? Woh jiye ya mare I should not really care!

Andrew- And also you cannot call any professional from outside. Yes, you can take help from each other but no new members to the competition.

Laura- Now you all can disperse and rest. From tomorrow onwards your one week starts. And rehearsal halls will be allotted to you according to your requirements, you just have to inform Hanah about it.

They all started moving back. The owners had to sit together away from the academy members. Kabir and Nisha's academy members were sitting together.

AMONG THE ACADEMY MEMBERS

Nancy- What are we gonna do? I mean literally, only some of our members know B-Boying. We can't do the same thing again.

Priyal- Same here Nancy! Just the thing is among us none of us know even a tad bit of shooting. How are we gonna do it?

Just then Nisha and Kabir came. They were already angry and moreover this! Their academy members were sitting together! They cannot tell the members the reason for not sitting together.

Ka- Guys, get back to your rooms. We will meet tomorrow as I have some details to fill. And Hardik please come with me.

Ni- Austin, send them back and after that come to the reception.

Nisha and Kabir left in other directions though their destinations was the same! They reached the reception and gave Hanah their academy details so that she could arrange a rehearsal hall for them. Nisha completed first and left. Kabir also left soon but from a different path.

ON THE WAY BACK (Nisha)

Au- Nisha, I have an idea!

Ni- Hmm...

ON THE WAY BACK (Kabir)

Ha- Sir, we have got the same talent to show as of Nisha madam's academy.

ON THE WAY BACK (Nisha)

Au- So why not we take their help? I mean Kabir sir can teach us dancing and we...

ON THE WAY BACK (Kabir)

Ha- And we in return can teach them dancing. Because they were telling that they do not really know how to dance. Only some boys are professional with B-Boying only.

ON THE WAY BACK (Nisha)

Ni- Your idea is good Austin but Austin I don't want to take their help!

Au- but why Nisha?

ON THE WAY BACK (Kabir)

Ka- Hardik, didn't you see their arrogance. I mean how could that girl call Priyal come thing like that! And moreover when you all asked for an autograph, didn't you see the arrogance of their owner!

ON THE WAY BACK (Nisha)

Au- But just because of arrogance you cannot let our academy down!

ON THE WAY BACK (Kabir)

Ha- please sir!

ON THE WAY BACK (Nisha & Kabir)

Ni & Ka- Okay! Fine! Call her/him right now so that we can discuss the matter.

They were just in front of their room when they said the lines.

Au & ha- actually I wanted to...

They stopped for the other to say but then continued together again- I mean we...

They laughed whereas Nisha and Kabir were busy in their own world of hatred, ignorance, attitude, anger but above all LOVE which was hidden deep inside!

Au- Okay! I will say! (to Kabir) Sir, actually I wanted to ask you for a deal. But that should be cracked between the owners, so can you both have a meeting right now?

Kabir agreed. They went by the pool side and only Nisha and Kabir sat. Both were giving each other the arrogant looks.

Ka- So what is up in your mind?

Ni- What is up in your mind!

Ka- Say it clearly!

Ni- You can also start because I know that you want the same.

Ka- So are you ready for it?

Ni- Okay!

Ka- From tomorrow in the morning 7 to 3, shooting.

Ni- And 4 to 11 dancing practice.

Ka- Okay!

Ni- Shooting would take some exercises as well. So your students will have to wake up at 6, do those exercises and then I will come and teach them.

Ka- Same here! Dancing would also take some warm ups. Tell your students to have food by 2:30 and then get ready with the warm ups from 3 to 4.

Ni- Then its done! Send someone so that I can tell him the exercises to be done.

Ka- Do the same! (looks at Hardik) Hardik you can go with her!

Ni- Austin send Nancy!

Ka- (gets up angrily) No not her! (tensed)

Ni- (trying to suppress her laughter) What happened Mr. Kumar? (gets up)

Ka- I just said that send someone intelligent.

Ni- First of all you never said that and second of all did you take my permission for sending anyone or my reviews? Then why should I? And yes, better not comment about any of my students. (angrily)

Ka- Look, let's not make a fuss out of it. Please just send someone else.

Nisha wanted to laugh but stopped.

Ni- Okay! Fine! Austin send Aria.

They went to the places allotted to them and then a bit of warm ups just for showing. Then they went to sleep. Kj was in his rooms that day as he was really tired and not even feeling well.

Next day Nisha woke up by 6 and went to do the exercises in her room's balcony. Kj was sleeping with her only. After she did her exercises she went to Kj who was still sleeping.

Ni- Kj! Wake up!

Kj woke at once. He just stood and hugged Nisha. Nisha was baffled but she understood a bit. She broke the hug and made him stand on the bed and herself stood on the ground.

Ni- Mamma ki yaad Aa rahi hai?

Kj nodded in a no.

Ni- India?

He again nodded in a no.

Ni- Then what is the matter Kj?

Kj- Mb yesterday I heard Austin uncle say that someone was fighting with you and then you were crying also when you came back. I could hear you. (upset)

Nisha was touched. That was relation she shared with Kj. He was so small but he could still understand her situation. She immediately hugged him.

Ni- No Kj, nothing like that. I was remembering your papa and mamma. Nothing else! And about anyone fighting with me, how can they when they know you are my niece!

Kj smiled and so did she.

Ni- Now I will give you a bath and then later we will go down together. We will have fun. (she giggled)

Kj also started jumping. A bundle of cuteness he was! He gave her feels of Kabir. The way he was.

*FB*

Nisha came into the room. Kabir was sitting on the bed and doing some work on the laptop. Nisha came and sat beside him. She did not say anything and kept sitting beside him looking down. Kabir understood it.

Ka- (still looking at the laptop screen) Kya hua Nisha?

Nisha didn't say anything. He closed the laptop and kept it aside. He took his hands in hers assuring her he was with her.

Ka- (concerned) What is the matter?

Ni- (hesitantly) Kabir wo... ummm...

Ka- (concerned tone) Nisha, you know you can tell me!

Ni- (monologue) Gadhe mujhe pata hai! Off course I will tell this to you first.

Ka- Nisha!

Ni- (in one go) Kabir I am pregnant!

Ka- Ha Nisha so I am... (realized what she said) What!!!

Nisha just nodded and blushed. Kabir picked her up in his arms and twirled her.

Ka- (excited) Nisha, I am so happy today! I can't just explain. (puts her down) Nisha, I mean really I can't believe it! I am going to be a father!

Kabir was dancing and jumping and Nisha was giggling seeing him.

Ni- (monologue) Khud hi baccha hai bache ko kya sambhalega!

She laughed at her own thought.

*FB ENDS*


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Chapter-5

NiBir Is Back! (not back wala back)😉😆

Just then she got remembered of her dreadful past, that accident that took away the biggest happiness of their life. A lone tear came out of her eyes. She immediately wiped it. Kj was already in the bathroom playing with water. Nisha went there to bathe him. Once he got ready she sent him out and got ready hurriedly. They went down together. It was 7:05.

Austin was already there along with the students and so was Kabir. Kj was coming behind. Nisha turned to see if Kj was there. They were in the garden because Nisha said that the first training session should be in the garden as it gives positive energy for a new beginning.

Ni- (turned, shouted) KJ!!!!

Ka- (Monologue, bit angry) Abbe kaun hai ye Kj? Itni tension leti hai uss KJ ki! (realized) Kabir!

Kabir mentally scolded himself for getting jealous again because of her. but she was looking really good like fresh. Kj came running to her and hugged her. Kabir was shocked to see him.

Ka- (monologue, shocked) Kj is Kairaj!!!

Kj and Nisha walked to Austin. They went in the center where everyone was standing. Kj saw Kabir. He left Nisha's hand and hugged him. Kabir was already on his knees to hug him.

Kj- Mamu!!!

Everyone except Nisha was shocked.

Ka- How is my Kairaj?

Kj- Kairaj is good!

Nisha smiled seeing their bond. The duo broke the hug.

Kj- Mb, mamu is here!

Nisha just nodded. Austin gave a confused look to Nisha. Nisha blinked her eyes and Austin understood that she will tell her later.

Ni- Kj, you will be with Austin till I teach them. After that we will have breakfast together.

Priyal spoke up then.

Pr- Ma'am sorry if we are intruding but can you please introduce this young guy to us? (puppy face)

Nisha was about to speak something when Kj went in front.

Kj- (child like tone)I am Kairaj Singh Rathore. I am in LKG. I am from XYZ School. My father is Viraj Singh Rathore and my mother is Kaira Singh Rathore. I love my Mb a lot as well as my mamu.

Everyone giggled at his cute introduction.

Ni- (stern tone) Okay now we should begin with the practice. In this practice we will come to know each other. And remember I remember only two people nicely who are either too great with their work or those who are not at all good with their work. And those who fall in the second category can never get up in my eyes, so try not to disappoint me.

Kabir never knew this Nisha. She was as if someone else. Wearing professional dresses, having determined look, way too much dominant and not to forget hatred and love both in her eyes for him. They started doing the practice. She told them some technical things about the gun. She taught them how to hold the guns. Kabir was also having a gun. He was also learning for future. Kismat jab kharaab hoti hai toh sona bhi patthar ban jaisa ho jata hai so be prepared always and that was what Kabir was doing.

Since the rifle was real heavy it was becoming difficult for them to hold it in the proper way. Nisha was helping them personally. Kabir was almost creating a mess within himself for holding the gun. IDIOT! Nisha went near him. She just held his hand and then made it straight. They had an eyelock. Austin came to them and broke their eyelock.

Au- Nisha! Look over there! (he pointed at Kairaj)

Kairaj was holding a toy gun which was exactly like the real one just ess heavier and without bullets. He was holding it very nicely as if he was holding an actual rifle. Nisha and Kabir giggled. Nisha went near him and stood on her knees to reach his height.

Ni- Mr. Future Shooter, let me help you with it.

Kj nodded. Nisha helped him to hold the gun easily. Basically that gun was for showing the things in a gun and explain about a gun. Everyone was now getting better with holding their guns. Time flew in the air they felt. It was 10 already.

Ni- Now let us take a break! It is breakfast time. So now all of you can go wherever you want to, have your breakfast but be back in half-an-hour.

Everyone started dispersing. Nisha was also about to leave with Kairaj when he turned and saw Kabir.

Kj- Mamu join us na!

Kabir looked at Nisha as if taking permission. She did not say anything but her eyes gave permission. Kabir nodded. He went near Kairaj and stood beside him. Kairaj held his hand and Nisha's as well. Austin understood things better now. Austin left to meet the team members as they decided to have breakfast together.

Austin was about to leave but Nisha called for him.

Ni- Austin! (Austin turned) Send all the members of our group and ask them to be ready in an hour and join the practice. They also need practice.

Austin nodded and left and so did the trio. They went to the restaurant of the hotel and took a table for 3. The waiter came and gave them the menu card. After some time the waiter came back for the order.

Ni- I would like to have a special diet salad.

Kabir was literally shocked. The Nisha who ate samosas for her breakfast was asking for salad! The waiter asked Kabir.

Ka- Some breakfast in the Indian cuisine except for salad.

Waiter- Sir, would you like to have Indian fried samosas?

Kabir nodded. To his surprise Nisha did not even change hers after hearing SAMOSA, Nisha's favorite. Kj was going to have his breakfast from his Mb's. The food came. Nisha was having her food without even feeling envy of Kabir's. She feeded Kj with love.

Ni- (monologue, looking at Kabir's samosa angrily) Jaan bhujh ke laaya hai samosa! Jaanta hai I love them. Isske saamne doosri Nisha type banne ke chakkar mein I have to miss my samosas. Ek baar main jo kuch bhi pehle hua uske liye isse maaf kar sakti hoon but not for this torture. (sulks in mind) Dekho kaise maze se kha raha hai! Bhagvaan mujhi se saari dushmani nikalni zaroori hai kya! K kahinka! K bhi nahi K2. Jitni bhi gaaliyan hain sab raise to the power 2 karke dena chahti hoon iss Naamakool Bandar ko!

Ka- (monologue) Ye Nisha ko kya ho gaya! Aaj samose ko dekh kar bhi kuch nahi bol rahi! Itna kaise change ho gayi hai ye?!

They had their breakfast. 10 minutes were still there. Austin came.

Au- Nisha, can we please take Kj with us? Actually everyone wants to meet him properly. The cute young guy, this is what they call our KJ. Please!

Nisha couldn't deny. Kj left with Austin. Now only Nisha and Kabir were there. They didn't know what to talk and silence was not their virtue. So Kabir initiated the conversation.

Ka- The food was good?

Ni- (monologue) Haan! Han! Tujhe toh accha laga hi hoga, samose jo the! Bearish ka mendhak!

Ni- (fake smile) Yes it was. After all I love to have salad.

Ka- (monologue) Salad? LOVE?! Sahi mein she is changed. I mean even when she was ill she would deny having salad and now she is saying she LOVES it! This is a drastic change. But I think she is lying. Let's find out (smirks).

Ka- (causally) But mine were samosas. Though a bit unhealthy but they tasted marvelous. The filing of potatoes was so spicy and tasty as if some Indian chef, no some Indian Thelawala would have made it. and the crisp...

Ni- (angry) Shut up!

Kabir gave a shocked look.

Ni- (covering up) I mean there is no need to tell how the breakfast was if I have not asked you. (stern)

Ka- (low tone) J hui hai ye! Let's have some more fun.

Ni- What did you say?

Ka- nothing!

Ni- (low tone) Geedadh bagga!

Ka- I heard it!

Ni- I wanted you to.

Ka- Chinese chipkali!

Ni- What???

Ka- Chinese chipkali jo sirf thodi der hi chipke fir bhool jaaye kaun hai hum!

Ni- Hypocrite!

Ka- Idiot!

Ni- Duffer!

Ka- Useless!

Ni- Bore!

Ka- Lethargic!

Ni- Pomegranate!

Ka- Where did that come from?

Ni- My life, my wish!

Ka- Selfish!

Ni- A****le

Ka- Nuisantic!

Ni- Allergic!

Ka- Bunch of idiocy!

Ni- Bunch of stupidity!

Ka- Not at all talk worthy!

Ni- Col blooded!

Ka- What I said was the end of the conversation.

Ni- You don't have the right to.

Ka & ni- Arghh!

Austin came back. They did not know that 10 minutes had already passed.

Ni- Where is Kj?

Au- Already in the shooting range with the others.

Ni- Okay! Let's go! Hmmm... (looked the other side angrily, Kabir se gussa hai woh so)

Kabir also did the same. They left with Kabir to the shooting range. Austin was laughing inside but dare he show it. It would just be like getting a plan to get himself murdered or rather getting suicidal.

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Chapter-6

Lakshya!

Nisha and Kabir went to the shooting range. Nisha asked kj to move outside since the shooting range would have lots of noises which will not be good for Kj. At first he was reluctant but later, Aria, one of the members of Nisha's academy convinced him to move out with her so that they can have lots of fun. Nisha trusted Aria so allowed Kj to go with her. Kj being a no-o- tough backbone easily agreed to leave with Aria.

Han yahee rasta hai teraa, tune abb jana hai... (2)
Han yahee sapana hai teraa, tune pehchana hai

Now the main practice started. Nisha started teaching them how to shoot, how to aim and above all how to imagine the target because that was the most important task among all these.

Han yahee rasta hai teraa, tune abb jana hai
Han yahee sapana hai teraa, tune pehchana hai
Tujhe abb yeh dikhana hai

Nisha showed them how to hold the gun firm when shooting since they would see the practical show of Newton's Third Law of Motion. (Every action has an equal and opposite reaction)

Roke tujhko aandhiya, ya jamin aur aasman
Payega jo lakshya hai teraa
Lakshya toh har hal me pana hai

They all were grasping it very soon, this time even Kabir could. Just the thing was Nisha was needed for him to make his shots perfect. They had eyelocks several times though it wasn't a long one since every time the KBHNM (Kabab Mein Haddi Nahi Murga!) disturbed them.

Nisha saw the time it was already 1. Nisha remembered something suddenly and left in a hurry with a O' look covered with her hand which seemed like she ran to vomit. Kabir thought that might be she is unwell, so he went behind her (pyaar abhi bhi zinda hai).

She ran to her room leaving the door ajar. Kabir was about to knock when he heard a familiar voice from the room. He saw her skyping with someone. Kabir felt the voice familiar so he silently peeked inside. He was shocked when he saw the person she was talking to though couldn't see him. It was none other than Kaira!

Ka- (monologue, shocked, confused) Kaira, Nisha ko jaanti thi. I mean she knew where Nisha was. I thought that Viraj was the only one who knew and he might have lied to Kaira about Nisha. But... Why did Kaira lie to me? she knew that I was trying to find Nisha for 6 complete months but hiding it from everyone except her. (stern) I need some answers. If not Nisha, then Viraj would even do.

He went outside without even making any noise. Just then his phone beeped. He saw a message from Priyal and opened it. He gave a grin.

Ka- (to himself) Ab tujhe mujhe sab sach batana padega Viraj.

He immediately called Viraj. Viraj picked up the phone.

Vi- Hi Kabir! How are you? And above all where are you? You knew its fifteenth. We will be here.

Ka- What would I do without my darling Kairaj?! (sarcastically)

Vi- Yes, you are rig... (realized) Wait! How did you know that Kairaj was not here? Did you talk to Suku? Why didn't you talk to me then?

Ka- Because you broke our bonds. (angrily)

Vi- What do you mean Kabir? (scared)

Ka- Where is Kairaj?

Vi- At home! He had some exams. We have our maid with him.

Ka- Oh really! Then what is this! Check your phone right now. I will call you in 2 minutes.

He cut the call and forwarded the message to Viraj along with a snapshot. Viraj was shocked. Kabir called him again.

Vi- Kabir, how did you get it?

Ka- My student, Priyal had sent me as you can see in the snapshot. Please check the date and time as well so that you don't have any excuses left. (angrily)

Vi- Kabir, listen...

Ka- (cuts him, angrily) What is left to be heard Viraj? You knew everything. You and Kaira were the only ones. Not even Suku then why? Why didn't you tell me that you knew where Nisha was? See the picture. It clearly shows that Kairaj, or might be Kj knows where Nisha is then how couldn't you?! Just tell me straight. You knew where Nisha was from the beginning, didn't you?

The message was of Nisha, Kj and Priyal that they clicked today. Priyal had sent it on a group so Kabir also got the same.

Vi- Kabir please...

Ka- Answer me Viraj or this will be our last conversation.

Kabir was damn angry. Why wouldn't he be? His best friend had not told him something which could have stopped his suffering. His best friend made him suffer. But Kabir wanted the whole reason. Why would Viraj and not to forget the mention of Kaira, not tell him that they knew where Nisha was? The day Viraj saw Kabir broken, it was not only Viraj who saw Kabir but also Kabir saw him.

*FB*

Kabir was in his room crying his pain out. No one was there at home. They went to a temple. Kabir made an excuse and stayed at home because it had been days since he had cried his heart out.

Jane kyun, har lamha hai tham gaya
Jaane kyun, khoon zara jam gaya
Jaane kyun, aankhen namm si hui
Jaane kyun, manzilein kho gayi aur so gayi

He had to be strong for his family but only he knew that he was dying every day without her. He went to the cupboard and took out that album which was kept in his locker hidden from everyone because it had all the griefs and sorrows with it wrapped in a polybag.

Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
Bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki hain barsatein
Ab main jaanu kyun

He went near the window and opened it. The first picture itself gave him pain. It was of his and Nisha's wedding. The happiness in their eyes was enough to tell that they would have a happy life not without obstacles but without the pain from each other. The promises they made were different.

Tujh bin jaane kyun
Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
Bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki barsatein
Ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun

But little did they know that none of the promises either of the wedding or their own ones could be fulfilled in the future after 3 years of their marriage. He flipped the page and saw the picture from the first phera. They made a promise to each other that they won't lie to each other no matter what the life has in its treasure.

Jaane kyun, har lamha hai tham gaya

The second promise was that they would stay with each other even if the truth hurts.

Jaane kyun, khoon zara jam gaya

The third promise was that if they feel anything wrong they would confront the other since PROMISE 1 won't let them lie but they would never let misunderstandings grow between each other.

Jaane kyun, aankhen namm si hui

The fourth promise was that whenever they had to choose between the two families they would choose each other.

[ Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein

The fifth promise was that they would stay calm in every situation holding each other's hand gripped tight.

bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein

The sixth promise was that they would be friends first and later the soul mates.

Bin baarish ki barsaatein

The seventh and the last promise was taken from Kabir to Nisha that whenever his wicked and naughty mind would work she won't change the plan but this was broken on the very first day by Nisha because she was in a fun mood to tease her husband though the very next day she got her punishment.

ab main jaanu kyun

Kabir giggled remembering all those moments of theirs..

Tujh bin jaane kyun ] (x2 times)

Nisha also took a last promise from Kabir and Kabir had to reluctantly agree because that was what their deal said. The promise was that if he had to choose between his mother and her any unfortunate day he would choose his mother. Kabir had an argument with her on this but Nisha shut him up with her promise rather kasam. This sweet memory of hers just made him remember of her love and affection not just for him but also for his family.

Bas khushi ki talaash mein main toh yunhi chalta raha
Jaane na dheere dheere yun chalte chalte yeh main kahan aa gaya

He put the album down and saw the moon. They had some connection with the moons and the stars. Whenever he would look at the moon it would just soothe his pain. This was the nothing none except Nisha and his mother could do.

Dekhenge mera rasta gham bhi kahin yeh socha na tha
Maine inn raaston se mazaak me raasta poocha na tha

"I still love you Nisha!" he said to himself. "But I can't forgive you now." The rage overtook his sad smile. "Now some angry words, a kiss and some romantic moments can't soothe my pain." He had tears in his eyes. "You have broken me Nisha." He threw her photo that he had in his hand. It was like the 100th time he was doing so taking a pledge of never making a place for her photo or her anywhere. But his heart knew that tomorrow there will be a new frame on the side table of his lonely room with the same photo of hers.

[ Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein

He sat on the bed and cried.

Bin baarish ki barsatein
ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun ] (x2 times)

He just cried. Saying nothing, feeling nothing because he knew that as soon as the family was back home he would have to put up his mask back. the happy mask!

Just then he heard a tad bit of noise. He turned and looked at the door but none was there. He went and looked in the corridor. Though he couldn't see Viraj but he saw his shadow beside the staircase. He understood that Viraj was here but left because he had nothing to say.

*FB ENDS*

Ka- Answer me Viraj! (angry)

Viraj was numb. He did not know how to respond.

Vi- (stammering) Are... Are you... Are you in London?

PRECAP- KABIR's DANCING TADKA, AND NIBIR KA SABKE LIYE (we readers & even me, as a writer 😆) HAPPY WALA JHATKA

Chapter 7

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Very nice parts 👍🏼
Start was good with opposite talent got nibir.. I thought that nisha team will get kabir's academy but it will have to different..😉
First FB was cute aww nisha being pregnant then 😳
Kj scene were cute 😳
Then breakfast scene 🤣
Nisha's monologue was too good 🤣 🤣
Samosa 🤣 🤣 🤣
Kabir being angry on viraj

Now pikachu I just can't wait more.. Please reveal fast as you can what happened in nibir's past ?? Why everything is destroyed ?😔

One thing I noticed nisha asked kabir to chose between her and his mother he will always chose his mother only.. Is this related to their past ?? 🤔
Try to update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Wow yaar you're presenting an amazing picture👏👏
It's getting more and more interesting with each update 😃
Everyone shocked Andrew Laura rocked🤣
Ghoom phir ke again together outside the rooms & Unison was fun🤣
Loved Kj with his mamu 😳😳
FB se I can somewhere subtly predict what has led to all this 😭😭

When you wrote about Nisha and Samosa, I hadn't thought she would just be portraying such behaviour in front of him and longing for samosa from inside 🤣🤣
Kabir ki baato se laga tha she has indeed changed 😆

Lakshya song is no doubt wonderful and the scene you described along was really good👏

The eyelock when you wrote I could actually understand the eyes would have transpired many feelings😳

I also like the two thinking of the other teams when the twist gets announced

Kabir's confrontation with Viraj
Kabir ne dhoondha Nisha ko hmm
Kabir's FB was touching 😭

Eagerly waiting for the Dancing tadka
And and and a happy jhatka as well😉😊
Liked all the chapters 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Awesome
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Wow...supperrr say bhi bada wala uppaaarrr
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Too much of tashan n all..!!
But I like it..
Happy cz dy agreed on helping each other widout much nok jok..
N yh Kj z d cutest part..
M enjoying d way d story z unfolding
Wanna kno Wat ll happen nxt Vry soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Im loving the progress of the story
Now with Kabir we r also eager to knw y Viraj kept this secret frm him...
Update soon😊

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