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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Chapter6(Kabir's POV)

I was crying lonely sitting beside the grave of Mrs. Briganza. I saw a lady come with a bouquet of flowers and laid them upon grave.

"Mrs. Briganza would always stay in our hearts" she sighed.

I gulped my tears and asked, "How do you know her?"

"She was like my mother... I feel guilty not to be able to be here when..." she trailed off fighting a sob.

"She hasn't died of heart attack...she was murdered" I expressed my disgust.

"What?" She questioned shocked.

"Yeah...my wife killed her" I clenched my jaws and my fingers curled in a fist.

"Nisha...your wife?" she enquired.

I nodded with anger visible in my eyes.

"How could she? I refuse to believe it" she averred.

"She did it!" I shouted as water again escaped my eyes.

Divya sighed, "Can you please tell me what had happened exactly?"

"Who are you?" I asked drowned in grief.

"I'm Divya. I knew Mrs. Briganza because she was a greatest shareholder in my company and often visited NGO" she sighed.

"I am not in a position to recount" I wiped my face and got up.

"She had told me Nisha's just like her daughter. I've heard Nisha's praise from her many times" she said.

"She could never find out Nisha's true colors" I said with pain and surpassed her.

"I'm a psychiatrist if that can help" she spoke politely.

"Huh help? Victim is helped not the accused" I swiveled.

"When stream of blood floods out, when meaning of love is ripped off, when wounds burn down your spirit; nothing helps" I added overwhelmed.

"Look, I don't know in what capacity I'm telling you this but I think, Nisha isn't to be blamed for everything"

"You better keep quiet!" I shouted raising my finger.

"Listen, you are Mr. Kabir Rathore right... I just want to say that I understand your position but it isn't proved that she killed Mrs. Briganza"

She continued after a pause, "Post mortem says she died of a heart attack"

Before I could retort, my phone rang. It was call from police station and I took it quickly.

"Hello"

"You and Priyali need to cautious! Nisha has fled from jail"

"What!"

"Yes...please remain alert and be at some safe place, we will shortly provide you people security cover. And if you feel anything...any single thing, contact us the moment itself"

"Yeah"

I disconnected the call feeling worried.

"Nisha has fled from jail" I told Divya while dialing Priyali.

"What!" Divya expressed her shock.

"Hello, Priyali, look Nisha has escaped jail, we need to be alert; don't leave your home okay, I'm coming there" I talked with Priyali and hung up the call.

"I'm coming with you" Divya spoke.

"Why? Are you mad? It's dangerous..."

I added," You are no where related to this, please don't interfere"

"I'm related with this because Nisha was the one who saved my life when I was almost drowned" Divya spoke firmly.

She continued, "And I can't leave her when she didn't leave me...Nisha needs me"

"She is a criminal! Why don't you understand that?" I said irked.

"She isn't proved guilty yet!" she shouted.

I moved ahead of her angrily and she followed me. Priyali, Divya and I remained at Priyali's house with security cover by few policemen. I had introduced Priyali to Divya and vice versa. I narrated the whole incident to Divya.

A constable came inside hurriedly, "Sir! Some people had informed police that your wife was seen near this area..."

We three stood up and looked at each other in worry.

"When?" I asked.

"I don't know that. My senior ordered me to tell you"

I nodded.

"She will soon be caught" the constable added.

Three hours passed and our wait seemed endless. I got a call from police.

"Sir... reach 12 Bypass road along with others"

"I didn't get you sir. Is Nisha caught?"

After a sigh I heard him speak again, "Yeah...she is here with us but...but you reach here quickly"

Before I could speak the call was cut.

A constable came in running, "Sir we got an order to take you to 12, Bypass road...five minutes distance from here"

The girls looked at me and I told them that Nisha is with police and gestured them to come along.

We reached the mentioned place and the ground was swept away beneath my feet when policemen shifted and my eyes fell over Nisha.

My breath became shallow as my mind hinted me of the horrendous happenings. She sat in tattered clothes quiet with lowered eyes without blinking.

"We are sorry...we couldn't reach on time" the policeman told me drawing his cap off. And my face crumpled in profound heartache.

I reached her hyperventilating and placed my hand over her shoulder bending down. She slowly moved her eyes to me.

How could I let this happen to her? My heart overflowed with regret. I was the one who vowed to protect her... and I failed...Kabir terribly failed...

A teardrop broke out of my eyes as I saw her grave face. She steadily ran her hand over my cheek wiping the tear off.

The next moment my temper went its worst. I got up and shrieked holding a policeman's collar, "I'll kill them! Who are they?"

Some constables parted me and he spoke, "Sir there were two... and we shot one in the encounter while the other fell down the cliff"

I closed my eyes shut with clenched jaws and curled fists.

"We called you here since she wasn't going with the policewoman to the hospital"

I gulped hard and then went to Nisha and commanded, "Nisha, we are going to hospital"

"Ka...Kabbir, our child...our child is dead..." she stammered and I shed tears that I was trying to restrict since long.

Divya came and took Nisha.

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"Nisha wanted to kill Priyali but she didn't. Even Mrs. Briganza died of heart attack. And about the men whose dead bodies were found in your house are identified as drug dealers and Nisha's statement about them trying to force her is correct and so, she shooting them to save herself is taken into account by the law" My lawyer told me.

He continued, "Your ex-wife has been proved innocent in the district court"

I displayed a half-smile.

I had taken divorce with Nisha in a family court as soon as she was jailed after Mrs. Briganza's death.

Two years hence, she got justice by the law, freed from all the blames... And I drowned in it.

Priyali said to the lawyer, "Thank you"

He acknowledged and left.

"Divya wants to meet us. She wants to talk about Nisha" Priyali spoke.

I nodded and Divya came in.

"Kabir, Nisha would be in my NGO for psychotherapy"

"I...I don't know what to say"

"I want you to stay away from her"

"What?" I asked dazed.

"Don't take it wrong Kabir, I already told Priyali that she should keep away and... and I also want same from you"

"But why? She needs me... I already did a crime not able to protect her... I can't let her suffer more...No!"

"She doesn't need you"

"Priyali I'm going" I blasted and got up.

"If you go to her now, you will prove her that she needs you...that she can't overcome herself"

I ceased listening to her.

"So what do you want?"

"Just that ...until she gets quite alright don't meet her"

"How are you so sure that if I didn't meet her she will overcome by herself?"

"I'm a psychiatrist Kabir, I've handled many cases. Moreover, I would myself call you if I felt that it is required. But for now, please understand"

Priyali interrupted "Kabir please...at least for Nisha"

I gave in.

Three long years passed... without Nisha in my life. I used to talk to Divya regarding Nisha every day. And when she told me about her ameliorating condition, I somehow felt relieved. And a day before Christmas, Divya called me and Priyali. She asked us to portray as a couple in front of Nisha. I was reluctant earlier but agreed after she told me that this was required.

Divya explained that if Nisha doesn't see me move on in front of her, she would dwell in her past.

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Epilogue also Updated :)
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Epilogue (Back to Present time)


Kabir's POV

Priyali gripped my shoulder bending beside me.

"I can't..." I sobbed.

"She will be fine" she tightened her grip consoling me.

I wiped my face and asserted, "I don't know anything now...I'm going to her...I...I can't see her like this anymore"

"No Kabir, we will have to wait" Priyali spoke concerned.

"Priyali is right" I heard Divya approaching us.

Priyali stood up and I looked away.

"Look Kabir, you have waited for three long years, I'm just asking you to wait sometime more...till the evening" Divya spoke sympathetically.

"Just till the evening?" I asked with a ray of hope.

"Yeah" Divya smiled.

Priyali's face lit up, "Means Nisha...Nisha is totally fine now?"

Divya sighed, "I can't say that but whatever I heard right now confirms it well"

"I didn't get you" I stated as I got up.

"Think about it" Divya urged.

I still bore a confused look so she continued," I knew somewhere in my heart that she has recovered satisfactorily with her treatment. So, I just wanted to confirm and her words are enough..."

"You're only mine! Only mine!"

"You... Pri... Priyali... Co... Congratulations"

Her words echoed in my ears and my lips curved up a little.

Divya explicated, "She wasn't furious at Priyali when she saw you too at Christmas... and now she has accepted you two as a pair... she is perfectly fine now"

Priyali hugged Divya, "Thank you so much"

"Don't thank me...Thank God" Divya smiled.

"You aren't less than a Godmother" I spoke.

Divya neared me, "Kabir, look I didn't do any miracle out here. If someone has to be given credit other than God then, it's Nisha herself... after enduring so much, she never let her mettle shed"

Divya continued holding Priyali's and my hand, "She is lucky to have a friend like Priyali who didn't left her after she tried to kill her and a lover who will never leave her"

We both nodded emotionally.

She smiled wide and left our hands, "But still I wasn't able to erase her guilt regarding Mrs. Briganza... I hope when you talk to her in the evening she would feel better"

"Do I tell her all the truth?"

"You needn't...Priyali will do it now... you just have to meet her in the evening"

"What I? But how will I?" Priyali spoke hesitantly.

"You will Priyali...You will"

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Priyali's pov

I saw Nisha, sitting hunched over and crying.

"Nisha" I spoke with a faint voice standing at the entrance of her room.

She looked up to me and wiped her face. I went inside and sat beside her.

"I want to tell you something" I said.

She took my hand in hers and uttered emotionally, "Slap me"

"No Nisha..."

"Do it!"

I sighed, "Nisha, Kabir and I-"

She cut me in with a low voice looking down,"I won't come in between"

"Kabir and I are only friends" I asserted.

She took a deep breath and looked at me, "Priyali, I don't know whether to believe you or not... but I want to apologize that I tried to... I know I don't deserve any apology but... I'm sorry..." she mumbled with moist eyes.

"Nisha, I forgive you"

And tears dropped down out of her eyes. I wiped her face.

"Nisha stop crying alright... I'm here to tell you all the truth... and no more tears"

I told her everything thereafter and we shared a hug after years just like earlier times. I informed her that Kabir would meet her in the evening.

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Nisha's pov

At dusk, I was standing in the garden not able to believe what destiny has carved in my hands...I know I have overcome my struggle and Divya is that Angel of my life sent by Dadi with God who was there beside me when none was... I still miss Dadi and whatever I went through, like a bird caged in the fury of tornado, I still feel the penance isn't enough...

I just read the letter handed over me to Divya. It was from Dadi who had written it six years ago. She had said she had forgiven me. I was in tears that she had written it three years ago what would be my current necessity to breath in this world. She was, is and always be my Godmother.

I never had imagined that I would meet my life ever back the old way...my life...Kabir.

*Music*

"Nisha..." I heard Kabir's soft voice.

Aaoge jab tum o saajana

I swiveled and saw him standing few feet away. All was still. All but my own heart -- I could hear it beat.

Aaoge jab tum o saajana

Red, pink, orange, yellow, blue, white, green... all flowers sprinkled their colors on the grey canvas of my life.

Angana phool khilenge

Light pierced the dark...The sky grumbled after the lightning and the heavens opened into a heavy downpour. Never had it rained so heavily in winters.

Barsega saawan

Barsega saawan jhoom jhoom ke

I saw him stride towards me and my legs couldn't delay. With utmost contentment on our faces we ran to each other and stopped facing each other. I hugged him with water on verge of my eyes. He hugged me back with shallow breaths.

Do dil aise milenge

Aaoge jab tum o saajana

Angana phool khilenge

Kabir broke the hug and cupped my face while I was crying with a smile. His eyes were moist still he wiped the tears off my face that had merged with the raindrops. It was our eyes that conversed.

Naina tere kajraare hai

Naino pe hum dil haare hai

Anjaane hi tere naino ne

Waade kiye kayi saare hai

"I'm sorry..." We spoke simultaneously and ruefully smiled at the unison with our eyes welled up.

"Will you marry me again?" I questioned in a low voice apprehensive of his reaction.

Saanson ki lay

Madham chalein

Tose gaye Barasega saawan

He quickly nodded with emotions clearly visible on his face and within a split second pulled me a squeezing hug. I smiled wide drenched...with my untamed mind tranquilized and my rummaging heartbeats soothed...

Barasega saawan jhoom jhoomke

Do dil aise milenge

Aaoge jab tum ho saajana

Angana phool khilenge

We remained so overwhelmed until he broke the embrace taking my hand in his "I love you Nisha...like you do"

Chanda ko taaku raaton mein

Hai zindagi tere haanthon mein

Palkon pe jhilmil taarein hain

Aana bhari barsaaton mein

With the sparkles of rain over our eyelashes, I spoke "Your love is pure Kabir and mine..." I trailed off lowering my head burdened with guilt.

"and yours...transformed into a pure one" he stated.

I drew my eyes slowly at him as those words of his...liberated my inner self from this guilt...the caged bird set off to fly...again.

Sapnon ka jahaan

Hoga khila khila

Barasega saawan

Barasega saawan jhoom jhoomke

"I promise Kabir, my love would stay even when the world stops turning" I promised folding my fingers tightly in his hands.

Do dil aise milenge

He gave a reassuring smile securing our hands, "Today I...too promise Nisha, I'll be there always...no matter what"

Angana phool khilenge

Angana phool khilenge

We embraced again for eternity...

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"Though no one can go back and make a brand new start, anyone can start from now and make a brand new ending"

-Carl Bard

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*COMPLETE* 🤗

Thanks a lot lot and lot! :) :)


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tis is just so beautiful😊all the updates made me cry😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
u penned down so beautifully nibirfan(what sshould i call u😆) ...no words yaar simply amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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#76
Superb updates 👏
All POVs were too good.. 👏
This story was really very different, interesting from starting to end 😊
I really love whole story but it had many bad part or where I feel really bad for nibir, especially when nibir baby die 😭
You're concept of this story was awesome 👏
Last quote 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Niha0606

tis is just so beautiful😊all the updates made me cry😭

u penned down so beautifully nibirfan(what sshould i call u😆) ...no words yaar simply amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing 👏


Heartfelt Thanks Niha❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Glad you liked it😳
Call me Neeru only😆😆
<3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Thanks soo much again 🤗 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Thankyou Niha for clapping 😆😳
And sorry if I made you cry🤔
Lovely thanks ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Baba re

Nisha
Poor kabir 😭
This is so horrible past omg 😳


Hmm err yeah actually I had said it's a bit serious story
sorry if I didn't wrote upto expectations🤔
Thanks so much Anmol🤗

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