NiBirStory:Bloodbath Chap5,6,Epi Updated - Page 10

Oh to where was I?
I guess still part 3 😆
Divya? Is a psychiatrist? 😲
Is Nisha having mental issues? 🤔
Usko police hi le gyi thi ya mental asylum wale?
OK m reading more..
This is so stupid of me.. Har line padke alag alag reactions aa re h and I m writing abt each 😆
let me read ahead now

Heart attack!? Ya murder? Y kabir saying like that abt nisha? Itna hate? 😲
Chalo finally that dark past in next update? I think
Ab bas... I won't comment abt a single part in so many subparts 😆
eksath hi likhungi part4 ka pura review ...

So its nisha's pov again...
Last part padke laga tha k priyali n kabir k beech kuch nai h but again this?
Night outs?? 😲
U r my only love ?
Iss sab ka kya matlab h??
Nisha wasn't wrong at her place... I feel...
Kabir ko bolna chaiye usko sabkuch Jo b baat ho!!
Hmmm nishu Ki pregnancy b kuch kaam nai ayi and kabir pehle se zyada late ane laga!!
I wish nisha ko directly puchlena chiye tha yar WO sab baaton ka matlab!!
Precap... 😲

Oh teri... 😲
Dance practice??
I hate u Priyali for this!! Aiise koi bolta h kya? Dance practice k bare that "we didn't spent a night together" ?? 🤣
Koi sunega to kya sochega 🤣
Saari galati iss priyali Ki hi h 😡
And "u r my only love" was a song?? 😲
Itni badi misunderstanding
Poor nishu!! Usne kya kya soch liya yar
Wait... Wat? She planned to murder priyali? 😲
Umm murder bahut zyada hogya yar
But it isn't her fault!! Jaise uska past raha uske baad kabir k liye she was possessive and priyali Ki unintentionally create Ki hui misunderstanding ne uss possessiveness ko obsessiveness me convert kardiya 😵
Dadi died 😭
But kabir ko nisha police hawale ni karna chaiye tha
He knows abt her past and how much she have suffered in childhood !!
Whatever happened was unfortunate 😔
U made me cry yar 😭
waise to mein fictions me nai roti hu jaldi but
I m actually crying now writing all this!!!

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res for next part😊

Unres 😊

First of all 👏

Superbly penned down 😃 but her past was really painful 😭😭 the emotions also well written 😊

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Unressed for part 5 on page 9😊

Part 6 and the epilogue 👏 again superb job ...

All the povs were perfect specifically priyali's side happy that they are together in the end 😃 completed the story in one go ... 😆 superb 👏 ayese hi updates dete raho 😊

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Rula diya yaar...😭😭

cant have words to express it...

it was so emotional and heart touching..

the thriller which u have put in between was fab..

👏👏

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

Hey hi neeru
I was getting bored laying in ky bed
Kitne saare dino se bedrest me hi hu me 😵
To aj finally I logged in to IF
Ye story top pe dikhi on forum 😆
to Sochi padlu
Its name sounds so spooky 😲
I thought koi horror story h kya? 🤔
& prologue p padke laga b k nisha ka bhoot h 😲
But part 1 padne k baad pata chala in was wrong 🤣
Ab lagta to hai horror h but suspense to hai !!
Nisha ne aisa kya crime kiya h?? Daadi ko heart attack bcoz of her 😲
And kabir moved on??
Impossible!!
I have read the parts and some comments on them and agey padne se pehle I have concluded something!! 😆
Wo ladki jisko kabir ne follower diya h WO nibir Ki beti b to ho sakti h 😉
I don't know if I m ri8 or wrong but kabir moved on kargaya ye baat kuch hazam nai hui isliye I came to this conclusion 😆
going to read further now!!
The story is really interesting!!
I wanna know akhir aisa hua kya Jo nibir alag ho gye? 🤔

part 6
kabir's POV
u again told whole scene in kabir view 😲
wow 👏
neeru u r becoming great writer day by day 😆
Nisha wasn't to be blamed alone .. I agree with divya!! kabir ka b fault h and what happened with nisha? 😲
I didn't understand it!! and wat lawyer said? kiski dead bodies??
nai samja 🤔
nibir ka baby died 😭
divya asked him to stay away and pretend to be with priyali 😲
OK to WO proposal nisha ko dikhane k liye hi tha 😃
epilogue next??

epilogue

oh yes nisha thik ho gyi
uska obsession is cured now 😃
priyali told nishu all truth
finally nibir mile 😳
lovely story 😊
great thriller
make a Bollywood movie on this yar 😉 😆