NiBirStory:Bloodbath Chap5,6,Epi Updated - Page 6

Originally posted by: poornima_15

This one is going so good 😊... their pain and the past😭 is bit scary... but make them happy soon plzzz 😃

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Thank god..

It was soo good to kno dat kabir still loves nisha n Nt priyal

Bt I wud love to tell u dat d song HAK was jst perfect 4 d situation

I really like dat song a lot

Nw waiting 4 d dark past to unfold..

Bdw take care of urself too..N update wenevr u feel like..

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Awesome update...it was so emotional that i can't control my tears which were flowing from my eyes😭😭...and the song was the best part of it...can't wait for the next part...plzz do update soon👍🏼 ❤️❤️

Neeru loved both the chapters
It's intriguing
And I really can't wait to read more yr
Nisha is way too possessive about Kabir
She asked him to be become a clerk oh God
Have a little guess on what might have happened
Updated soon yr
Just happy to know that Kabir is still only Nisha's

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Neeru loved both the chapters
It's intriguing
And I really can't wait to read more yr
Nisha is way too possessive about Kabir
She asked him to be become a clerk oh God
Have a little guess on what might have happened
Updated soon yr
Just happy to know that Kabir is still only Nisha's

Thanks so much Ritika😳😳❤️
I would love to know your guess😊
Will update soon😃

its so intriguing..

Originally posted by: angelanju

its so intriguing..

plz update this soon...😳

nice work btw...👍🏼

can i get a pm for this?

Thanks so much dear😳😳
Yeah I would pm you too when I will update this😃
I would take sometime as my laptop is going to be shipped so...🤔
I'm updating next chapter for now😳

After a long time, I'm here updating this😊 Thankyou all😳😳 for liking this story, inspiring me to advance it 😳

My laptop will be shipped out, so mai phir gaayab rahungi for some days... Aadhi visible screen se I somehow managed whatever was possible... Isliye aadhi raat update kar rahi hu😭

Also, NiBirSS:Memorable Birthday (that is turned into an SS now😆) and NiBirSS:Let's Football pe I saw your comments, I couldn't respond there and Huge Huge Huge heartfelt thanks 🤗🤗🤗

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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Chapter4

I walked away from Kabir... this time by my own... though my heart didn't and never can.

I sat silently inside my room, hunched over. I tried to put on a brave face but the tearing at my soul was so compelling and energetic. Losing self-control, my weeps got a loud voice.

Inundated with feelings my eyes started to paint the commencing of my miserable times.

Once, my important office papers got mistakenly bound in Kabir's file. I realized it when similar kinds of his papers were found in my folder. So, it meant they got swapped. Therefore, I had reached his academy in the evening to collect it. And what I saw turned my mood off.

There was him and Priyali in a blissful embrace. I strode off the site slightly angry. I didn't talk to him the whole day. The next morning I realized I shouldn't doubt Kabir because I very well knew he loved me to the core. I thought of talking to him the very morning but when I opened my eyes, he wasn't there. I found a folded paper beside the bed notifying me that he had to go early for his academy due to some urgent work.

I sighed because he spends very little time with me and now he is busy even on Sunday. I waited for him the whole day engaging myself in some or the other way. At dusk, I finally called him because earlier he used to inform me about his timings which he now left doing. I called him almost ten times at intervals but he didn't receive any of my calls. I was worried for him and decided to go to his academy. I caught a bus at the bus stop near my residence as my scooty had been given for repair for a day.

The sky was dark owing to the clouds that hid the stars and moon. Every once in a while flashes of lightning could be seen, a few seconds later the thunders rolled in. In the bus, I constantly prayed God to keep him safe.

I reached the academy around 9 and it looked deserted. I went inside as it was open but there was no receptionist. As I heard some noise near the practice hall, I took a deep breath, gathered my thoughts and proceeded to knock the door.

"Please don't go, it's just 9 now" I heard Priyali speaking.

I stood against the closed door and didn't knock. Priyali was also a choreographer at the same academy. Both Kabir and she were superb dancers at college and when Kabir had joined this academy after graduation, he had insisted her to join too to which she had accepted.

"Yeah, that's what I'm saying it's 9 now" Kabir said.

"Come on Kabir... it's been so long when we spent a night together"

My eyes flared wide but my brain refused to sense what her words could mean.

"Priyali yaar, some other day" Kabir spoke.

"No, tonight means tonight" Priyali demanded.

"But I haven't told Nisha about"

Priyali cut him in, "So what? You didn't even tell her about nightouts during college days"

I was taken aback at her words. I could not bear any more stings. I ran outside not caring about the heavy rain. The icy wind was blowing the rain straight into my face. I walked on the road drenched, drenched in sorrow, drenched in pain. Who sees the storm before the clouds appear? And even I didn't...a storm that shook my soul.

My gaze was into the far distance. The raindrops lashed my skin but this physical pain was necessary to divert my mind from the mental one...Unfortunately, this concept didn't work for me. I still remained crestfallen whirling in tornado of thoughts of my throttled dreams.

I had recounted him my dreaded past as a child even when I never wanted to remember it...not a bit of it...because Dadi had told me that relationship never strengthen when the foundation is weak. But what did he do? Was he least bothered about our relation? Wasn't his love true? Or has he found his true love as Priyali? Was he cheating on me?

My heart was still not convinced what my brain thought. I wanted to confirm and hence I spied the next day for the very first time.

"You're my only love"

Those were Kabir's words to Priyali that broke me down. I saw him smiling to Priyali who hugged him tight after it. This was result of my snoop. If I had been a second late, I wouldn't have witnessed my devastation. Kabir who had brought the wave of happiness in my life, splashed hard the current of gloom.

Thereafter, I used to remain upset whenever he came home. I never gave any account of it as I still waited for him to reveal his affair himself. I was confused how he acted with me. Though he hardly used to express his love, he did show his care for me. Every time I felt he would leave me, he was there standing by me.

And a day, Mrs. Sharma and I conversed.

"Oh look Meera, Nisha didi came, look..." Mrs. Sharma indicated Meera to look at me.

Mrs. Sharma stood at the porch holding Meera and I had just stepped out of the house.

I mildly smiled at the duo and waved my hand.

"Nisha come here" Mrs. Sharma urged.

I went to her and cuddled Meera, "Hello Meera"

Meera hid herself in Mrs. Sharma's embrace.

"Nisha nowadays I find you sad, is there any problem? You can share" she said politely.

I sighed looking down, "There comes a difference in love before and after marriage"

"Definitely there comes a difference... A child intensifies it"

I looked at her and she smiled wide.

I understood what my next step should be. I found it the only way to get Kabir back...my Kabir back. Yeah...he was the only man in my life from whom I had received love and I can't let him go so easily. Once our child breathes he won't think about going to Priyali ever.

"Kabir you love me right?" I asked with wet eyelids.

"Of course Nisha...why are you asking such a question?" Kabir inquired busy with his phone.

Another lie pinched my heart but I didn't show it on my face.

"Because...you never show it like you used to do it earlier" I stated.

He flung his eyes to me on my statement.

"Nisha you're crying? What happened Nisha...Is everything okay?" he panicked.

I looked down as he kept his phone away and cupped my face, "NIsha...Nisha look here"

I drew my eyes to him.

"Listen Nisha...I love you so much...You're not only my wife but my life too" he spoke worried.

I forced my lips to curve up, "Is that true?"

"You want any proof?" he sighed.

I nodded and he chuckled.

"So Mrs. Nisha Gangwal Rathore what proof do you need?" he smirked as he encircled his arms around my neck.

"Erm...a kiss would do" I chirped.

"Wow! I never thought you would be this straight" he giggled.

"Then you haven't understood your wife completely until now Mr. Rathore" I winked.

He took my sentence candidly oblivious to its deep meaning.

He many a times used to see me upset when he reached home. Earlier, he used to try cheering me up talking about the day, his students and their practice, asking about my job and other normal talks. Once he asked directly to me the cause of my grief. I didn't tell him the actual reason behind it and he got it that I was reluctant. He started sleeping with embracing me as he didn't want to compel me to speak about it. He already knew about my suffering as a child. I had told him after his proposal. So, he must have taken that as the basis of my sadness. But he didn't question me when there was a sudden change of my mood... when I suddenly asked him for a kiss... instead he poured all his love to erase grief out of my life. But he hardly knew that the grief had already transformed into something else...

People make love because they love each other...we made love shackled by my obsession... obsession of him...my fear...fear to lose him... my desire to make him mine... just mine... forever. He didn't say a word but abrupt variation in my behavior towards him must have hinted him somewhere.

I had thought the news of our child would bring us closer but it didn't. Rather Kabir started to come home late night even if he had gone early to his academy. He named it overtime which I refused to believe.

Three weeks passed, and my sorrow slowly transformed in rage.

We had many heated arguments regarding Priyali and his relation. Every time it ended on the note of I not caring about my child and making him/her suffer.

Child is a symbol of love but our child was symbol of my weakness. And weakness has to die...

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Precap- When the dark past turns red...Blood red

Bullet shots...history repeats...dripping blood...shrieks...loss of lives...crime...

And The past gets bathed in blood...Bloodbath...

Awesome update...👏

Hey first don't kill me for doing this🤣 I'm going to update after a long time so thought to wrap up😃 so meri typing skills bhi super sharp ho gayi and i went on typing till the completion...posting all😳
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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Chapter5 (Priyali's POV)

"You're my only love"

And I switched off the sound system. This song I had suggested Kabir for a dance show by the students in a ceremony. He had straightforwardly denied as the students were already told that they would be performing on a bollywood song and had already completed half of it.

I was angry on Kabir since he had taunted me of being whimsical. Yeah, I know that I'm a bit impulsive but we are choreographers... we shouldn't be restricted in a certain dance zone. Always going in for a bollywood song doesn't make sense.

So, I felt very bad when he spoke such a thing to me. I knew him since college days, of course we are colleagues now but we are very good friends first. We have spent amazing time during college...I can still remember that we were mad for dance...so crazy that we used to practise it all night. I was really grateful to God that I found him in my life, who possessed the same passion for dance that matched mine. There was a dance competition that had a cash reward of 5 lakh Rupees and to win it we went for several night outs... Yeah, actually during the day, we couldn't get time since it was made mandatory for students to attend classes and during the evening, Mr. Kabir used to be busy with my friend Nisha...Yeah Kabir is married to her now and the credit goes to me too because I played the cupid between the two being their common friend. So, we only used to get nights for our dance practice. Since there were some trouble elements too in our college, who can cross any limit in order that they only win, so we had decided not to reveal to anyone that we too were participating and practicing hard.

I had tried convincing him yesterday that this song can be prepared so easily. It was just 9 o'clock and we could do it like we had done during college. But he was adamant, not listening to me. I had again requested him but he started giving excuses that he hadn't told Nisha about it.

But today surprisingly he came and declared that he had changed the song. I asked him the name of the song and he smilingly told "You're my only love". I hugged him tight that finally my wish got fulfilled.

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"Hello...Hello...Priyali..." I heard Nisha in a crying voice over my phone.

"Nisha are you okay? What happened?" I asked concerned.

"Priyali..." Nisha sniveled.

"Nisha calm down, where are you? And what happened? Where is dadi?"

I was really worried as Nisha was pregnant and Kabir was out of station with the students for a dance contest. I checked the time and concluded that Kabir wouldn't have reached his home as he was supposed to return today but there was still an hour or so.

Also, Kabir had told me about the tension build up in their relationship and that she was misunderstanding about me and him. He didn't tell me about it himself. Once I had caught him crying in an isolated corner during a break at the practice and I persuaded him to voice out his matter of grief as I hadn't seen him so unhappy before. He used to remain frustrated, angry over students, and deeply sad from some days and he unwillingly spoke about the matter. He told me that he would soon sort things out but due to a contest he had to go out of city.

So, I didn't expect a call from Nisha but as I heard her crying I got really anxious if she was okay.

"Daa...Daadi... haa..heart attack"

Her words brought a shock to me.

"Nisha...Nisha look, don't worry...I'm coming, where are you?" I assured her still hearing her sobs.

"H...ho...home" she faltered.

"I'm coming okay, nothing will happen to her...she'll be fine"

I disconnected the call and rushed to reach her house.

As I opened the main gate to get in, I got startled by some booms and pops. At first it seemed to me that some crackers were burst. Then noise of shattering glasses and shrieks following it, proved my comprehension wrong. I stood motionless in confusion, anticipation and worry.

Then, I heard Nisha's scream and raced to my utmost speed opening the door loud. I couldn't let anything happen to her at any cost.

I swallowed hard as I saw shattered glass pieces scattered over the floor...some bore red driblets. There were some dead bodies lying on the floor haphazardly... ruthlessly harmed.

As I loosened my pupils' diameter, I saw Dadi and Nisha standing at some distance looking at me... with a pistol caught between them half covered by hands of both. Dadi? Then why did Nisha said about heart attack?

I got immobile unable to believe what my eyes saw next. An ugly tussle for gun started between the two. Blood seemed to fill the atmosphere... every point of my vision witnessed blood. Dadi's saree too remained painted red and lots of crimson smudges on Nisha's clothes. Bruises were evident on Dadi's face that trickled some blood.

"Run Priyali!" Dadi shouted falling on the floor as Nisha snatched the gun and pushed Dadi away.

I shuddered as Nisha looked at me with anger swirling like a red tide within her.

"No..." I said in a frail voice negating as a fear gripped my heart.

"I won't let anyone separate me and Kabir!" she spoke as she swiftly pulled up the pistol targeted at me.

"Aaah!" Dadi groaned on the floor bringing her hands to her chest.

My eyes flared wide as Nisha started to press the trigger.

"Run!" I again heard Dadi's feeble voice who moaned in pain again.

I snapped shut my eyes with a tear trailing down...may be this was my end...

"Argh!" I heard Nisha and opened my eyes to find her pressing the trigger many times. It meant that the pistol was short of bullets. She threw the gun on Dadi who lay sweating badly groaning. Thereafter, she started scanning the ground to find a gun in haste and directed her legs towards one.

Taking the advantage I gently stepped back twice and ran out of the house. Perspiring and scared, I bumped into Kabir who made me straight.

"Nisha; Pistol; Dadi" I could only blurt this out as I was frightened out of my wits.

Then Kabir looked at my back and I followed his gaze. It was Nisha who stood with a gun pointing at us. Flabbergasted, I started to drag Kabir outside clutching his arm but he stopped me, still looking at Nisha expressionless.

"We need to run" I shook Kabir sobbing.

He took a long breath. Confused I turned back and found Nisha gheraoed by many policemen. Two were pointing their guns at Nisha's head.

"Put your gun down!" A policeman warned Nisha.

She still kept it straight at us with clenched jaws.

"Put it down! Or I will shoot!" Another shouted.

I felt Kabir's arm quiver and looked at him. He breathed heavily with widened eyes.

I turned my eyes again towards Nisha. The gun was snatched away from her.

"Take her...I don't want to see her ever" Kabir spoke sternly.

"No Kabir! You can't do this to me! Kabir!" Nisha shouted as two women surrounded her.

"Thank you officer" he said sadly to a policeman as he shook hands with him.

"I'll not let anybody separate us! I swear I'll not let such a person live! You get that!" Nisha yelled facing us whilst being dragged bound by the women.

She yelped again, "Kabir!"

Kabir stood beside me with stooped head as Nisha was now at his back.

"You're only mine! Only mine!" She shrieked at top of her voice and I saw tears escape her eyes.

Nisha was forcefully pushed inside the police jeep and the jeep left.

I wiped my face, "Kabir, Kabir dadi-"

His knees slammed the floor.

"Kabir..." I tried to support him as his shoulders began to slant as he closed his eyes whimpering.

"Kabir, dadi is inside, we need to take her to hospital" I spoke hastily.

He negated vigorously crying, "We have lost her!"

I was taken aback at his words.

"No Kabir! Dadi-"

He cut me in yelling, "She passed away!"

I gulped not able to understand why he was saying so and marched inside leaving him. I quickly reached Dadi who lay in silence. My hands trembled as I checked her nerve.

I clamped my hand on my mouth in shock. My eyes brimmed with tears again. I rushed to Kabir. He was slamming the ground with his fist weakly mumbling something.

I hugged him shivering who didn't respond but cried more.

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After the funeral, I asked Kabir gathering courage, "You had brought police?"

He nodded blankly.

I thought not to say anything more as his condition was already worse.

"Dadi had called me... I could hear her talk with stuttered breaths" he spoke feebly.

"She called you?"

"She told me to bring police along...that Nisha plans to kill you... She said that she has overheard Nisha threatening some men to murder them"

He continued looking down in a trembling voice, "And...and she said that...she..."

He trailed off holding his head shutting his eyes.

"What?" I inquired softly.

"She will die out of heart attack till I reach there... that her chest was paining hard...She told me that if she didn't call out my name when I be there then I should assume that..." he sobbed.

I sighed as I got the answer to how he had said about Dadi being passed away.

He wiped his faced and uttered, "I want to be alone for sometime please"

I nodded and left the place.

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Chapter 6 also updated :)