NiBirStory:Bloodbath Chap5,6,Epi Updated - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Superb updates 👏

All POVs were too good.. 👏
This story was really very different, interesting from starting to end 😊
I really love whole story but it had many bad part or where I feel really bad for nibir, especially when nibir baby die 😭
You're concept of this story was awesome 👏
Last quote 👏 👏 👏



Thanks sooo much Anmol🤗🤗
I'm really sorry it had more sad parts
That's y I updated Memorable B'day also so that there isn't any gloom😃
Thanks so much yaar really I feel grateful😳
Big Thanks❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It means a looot for me <3 <3
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Unressed for part 5 on page 9😊
Part 6 and the epilogue 👏 again superb job ...
All the povs were perfect specifically priyali's side happy that they are together in the end 😃 completed the story in one go ... 😆 superb 👏 ayese hi updates dete raho 😊
Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Hey hi neeru
I was getting bored laying in ky bed
Kitne saare dino se bedrest me hi hu me 😵
To aj finally I logged in to IF
Ye story top pe dikhi on forum 😆
to Sochi padlu
Its name sounds so spooky 😲
I thought koi horror story h kya? 🤔
& prologue p padke laga b k nisha ka bhoot h 😲
But part 1 padne k baad pata chala in was wrong 🤣
Ab lagta to hai horror h but suspense to hai !!
Nisha ne aisa kya crime kiya h?? Daadi ko heart attack bcoz of her 😲
And kabir moved on??
Impossible!!
I have read the parts and some comments on them and agey padne se pehle I have concluded something!! 😆
Wo ladki jisko kabir ne follower diya h WO nibir Ki beti b to ho sakti h 😉
I don't know if I m ri8 or wrong but kabir moved on kargaya ye baat kuch hazam nai hui isliye I came to this conclusion 😆
going to read further now!!
The story is really interesting!!
I wanna know akhir aisa hua kya Jo nibir alag ho gye? 🤔
Posted: 8 years ago
#84
hey wait... did I saw .. u updated epi? means epilogue 😲
Posted: 8 years ago
#85
OK m going to read all the parts now!!
kal batati hu kaisi lagti story 😃
OK goodnight!!
so many PMS I have just saw them!! and I think u have commented something on my story also? will check it tomorrow
k byee
Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Part 2

OK my guess was totally wrong!! 🤔
And It seems...
Ye kuch ur hi kahani h
Priyali? Ye naam kisi aur k Naam Ki yaad dilara h 😆
Ye priyali h kon?
Kabir ne nisha ko police k hawale kardiya?
First I thought usne kisi ka murder kardiya hoga shayad USS priyal oops I mean priyali 🤣
But wo zinda h 🤔
Kabir ne shadi b karli? 😲
Wats going on? Mere kuch nai samajra
I m totally confused now!! Shocked confused angry sad mad so many emotions r coming in my mind together
I Need some time ... Will read it later now!! K bye
Posted: 8 years ago
#87
K m back..
Re reading the chapter...
Neeru I m telling u...
This is something which I have never read before 😲
I m feeling Kuch misunderstanding hori h !! But precap? Nisha kuch karne wali h ab kya?
But kya? Aur aisa kya kiya hoga k kabir ne khud usko arrest karwaya? 😲
Edited by ___Neha___ - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Part3

No wait...
Kabir... He still loves her !!
But why did he sent her to police then??
Yar Teri har update mujhe Ayr confuse karri h
OK so let b happy with this now that he loves her still!! 😳
bcoz ye story serious h to pata nai agey konse jatke lagne wale hain?
that song is painful ... hamari adhuri kahani... 😭
isliye I m taking one more break ... before reading ahead
plzz don't mind neeru
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Rula diya yaar...😭😭
cant have words to express it...
it was so emotional and heart touching..
the thriller which u have put in between was fab..
👏👏
Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Ok m back again..
On part 3..
So its now kabir's POV
He imagined nishu smiling but she wasn't there
And kabir ? He is also in same pain as nisha and WO proposal? And y did they came to adopt a child?
And Divya? Wat was she saying? 3 years wait kiya thoda aur Karo? Means?
This story is so much suspense yar
And u tell you one thing neeru
Koi b story ho .. But usko sunane ka tarika always makes it more interesting and hats off to u!!
Ye story Jo jaise tu dheere dheere reveal kar ri h and its just exceptional and extra ordinary 👏

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