NiBirStory:Bloodbath Chap5,6,Epi Updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone 😊, I wanted to write an OS on NiBir but I wrote thisšŸ˜†
Thanks for bearing rest of my storiesšŸ˜†šŸ˜³
First time attempt on serious stuffs, and I have read some awesome serious stories here... And they are just fabulousšŸ‘šŸ¼ ,following them...
So, mai jaanti hu utna accha to nahi hai...honestly batana bhai kesa hai or continue karu ya nahi? If yes, then iske updates dene me thoda jyada time lag jayega , confessing beforehand. And if no, please feel free to say...😊
I won't mind...ab ye mat bolna ki, how would I mind if I don't have one🤣🤣 vo school friends se bohot dino baad mili to hangoveršŸ˜† don't mind please šŸ˜†
No more bakwaas, here it goes...😃
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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Prologue


Christmas night... mere these words erupt joy in many hearts. Children wait for their Santa to secretly deliver their most awaited gifts. The lit Christmas trees shine bright in the houses. Carols are sung loud. Sweets are savoured and everyone's faces gleam in bliss.

There were two persons who stood facing each other the same night. There were sounds of bursting crackers, sparkles in the sky and merry tunes in the background. The boy smiled wide and bent in front of the girl pulling out a red rose. The girl happily took the offered rose and the boy stood up. A rocket that just shot up behind their backs expressed the shine in the sky their faces bore.

No words were spoken. The contentment on their faces could easily be measured by the smiles they exchanged. Without wasting any time the boy neared the girl and embraced her. She too hugged him tight as waters drew out of her eyes.

The vision I had began to swim in front of me as tears welled up and coursed down my cheeks. I stood faraway the duo. Everything was same five years ago... Christmas night, glowing Christmas trees, exploding crackers, a red rose, a proposal, an illuminated sky ,and two hearts in a silent promise of eternal love.

Everything was exactly same... even the guy...Kabir.

My eyes flickered open and I watched the duo walking away side-hugging each other.

Wiping tears off my face, I gazed at the sparkling sky with uneven breaths. Why I was presented the same thing before me which happened six years back... with just a change that the girl wasn't me.

Thousand feelings, questions and beliefs rummaged my mind. I started walking tightlipped not letting a word slip out. My thoughts were heavy in my head, too many of them... disconnected...floating...halting me at half way... weighing me down.

There I was crying my heart out but I could not produce a sound. I, Nisha, who people regarded as brave, noble, self-sacrificing, virtuous...was dead. I was Nisha Gangwal Rathore.

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Index

Chapter1A (Page 2)-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137323861


Chapter1B (Page 3)-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4718125&PID= 137344378&#p137344378

Chapter2 (Page 5)-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137399977

Chapter3 (Page 6)-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137400023

Chapter4 (Page 8)-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137736640

Chapter5 (Page 8)


Chapter6(Page 10)


Epilogue (Page 10) Happy Ending :)

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Thanks a lot <3 <3 :)

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tani_0209 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was a gr8 strt
N u plz continue..
I'll love to kno Wat happened in d past
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Posted: 8 years ago
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neeru interesting
confused on the present relation between nibir
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great startšŸ‘
I want its update soon and a real soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😭😭yeh kya hai...i want update sooner pls
really so interesting...šŸ‘šŸ‘i am just loving ur stories more and more😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😭😭😭
is she really dead?
i want you to continue this soon!
i loved this!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plzzz continue it ... this is so good ... but I have some doubts ... actually many šŸ˜† so plz iska part1 jldi update dedo .. phir u can take ur time😃 ... waiting🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani_0209

It was a gr8 strt

N u plz continue..
I'll love to kno Wat happened in d past


Thanks Tani😳😳
Alright will continuešŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

neeru interesting

confused on the present relation between nibir
cont soon


Thanks so much Ritika😳😳
I'll clear confusions in next update soon😃
Thanks againšŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Great startšŸ‘

I want its update soon and a real soon😊


Thanks Anmol for liking the story😳😳
I''ll try updating it real soon😃😃

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