NIBIR TS - One last night (updated) last part - Page 9

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Ohh...my God! !!

I'm speechless...I never expected this to be the ending...

But anyways it was superb as always...every emotion was perfectly described...you r one of the best writer of this forum..and u always become successful in making me speechless wid yor work...

thank u ananya 😃

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Duniya yahan ki vahan ho jaye, MishRi/NiBir ko mere dil se koi nahi nikal sakta ☺️

😳 correctoo

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

thank u pehle hi bol deti hu... ab start se start karte h... yup kabir died the same day of break up and whenever we read his POV it was his soul... after finally completing her book nisha felt her hands empty... she had nothing to call a hope... she thought it was better if it gets over because she was hurting for too long and there was no sign of his come back so she decided to kill herself... next mng though after dying she met kkabirin her house and he told her everything about his death about him being around her always...

What do I say..? 😕 I love every story you write. You simply yet fabulously describe and express each emotion👏. Kabir was dead and all this while he was the soul being there with her that took the story to a different level.👍🏼 Really well expressed the condition and each emotion of nisha let it be anywhere. Every night he comes to stay with her.😳 She was expecting him to come there whn her book was published. So much of suspence was revealed in this part 😕. There is so much to talk about each and every part it was that awesome. Last scene gave a sign of peace.

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

What do I say..?😕 I love every story you write. You simply yet fabulously describe and express each emotion👏. Kabir was dead and all this while he was the soul being there with her that took the story to a different level.👍🏼 Really well expressed the condition and each emotion of nisha let it be anywhere. Every night he comes to stay with her.😳 She was expecting him to come there whn her book was published. So much of suspence was revealed in this part😕. There is so much to talk about each and every part it was that awesome. Last scene gave a sign of peace.

Very beautiful TS😳

Thank you soo much for such wonderful n beautiful stories😃😊

thank u 🤗

Res
Unres finally 😆


Mansi what a mind blowing story yaar 👏

To be honest when i read part 1 i thought it will be a cute and a lovely story but after reading part-2 is shocked me nisha pain kabir missing i swear after reading this line "I walked towards the house in midnight. The stars are lingering here and there while dark clouds still hover over the city. This is my time." i slightly thought is kabir dead kya? Because that time usually people called ghost time in movies that's why🤣 but i was correct 😎

Nibir was so much pain finally they are together 😳 and it's a happy ending for me ❤️
Nisha pov was super

Beautifully written 👏
Mansi you very well known how to give goosebumps to your reader's and you always give in your stories which i always loved it

Do write more
Thanks for pm
Again sorry for late unres

Originally posted by: Anmol333

This story had started very simply two people meet and attracted toward each other and where it ended up.. Ohh my god !!!! I never ever imagined that it will be like this... Fantastic...👏

The past was amazingly written so lovely and sad also..👏

At starting kabir said we will meet soon I thought he will come to venue.. But after reading last scene I got shock seriously shock as I never imagine that kabir had died long before and it was his soul..

Best ending you have given to this story finally they meet..

tthakq 😆 😃

Awesome work Mansi😊 ... it was something different... the way it started and the way it ended both were differently amazing👏... just can't write more ... hope u understand😊

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Awesome work Mansi😊 ... itwas something different... the way it started and the way it ended both were differently amazing👏... just can't write more ... hope u understand😊

thank u poornima... 😃