NIBIR TS - One last night (updated) last part - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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Unres finally 😆


Mansi what a mind blowing story yaar 👏

To be honest when i read part 1 i thought it will be a cute and a lovely story but after reading part-2 is shocked me nisha pain kabir missing i swear after reading this line
"I walked towards the house in midnight. The stars are lingering here and there while dark clouds still hover over the city. This is my time." i slightly thought is kabir dead kya? Because that time usually people called ghost time in movies that's why🤣 but i was correct 😎

Nibir was so much pain finally they are together 😳 and it's a happy ending for me ❤️
Nisha pov was super

Beautifully written 👏
Mansi you very well known how to give goosebumps to your reader's and you always give in your stories which i always loved it

Do write more
Thanks for pm
Again sorry for late unres

thank u sujoy 😆 sure i will keep writing 😆

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