NIBIR TS - One last night (updated) last part - Page 8

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Fifty shades by Mansi 😆

I enjoyed reading it alot 😳

50shades... 😆 get ur head out of there bhabhi... 😉 thank u

Originally posted by: Amina...

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">O My God !!!!
It was Shocking ... I hadn't expected it at all ...!!!
I m so shocked right now

Any ways , coming to the story ... It was Mind blowing ...!!!
Really SUPERB ...!!!
An Awesome Piece of Writing ...!!!
Two people so much in Love ... that they kept loving each other throughout their life ... and even after ...!!!
It was Painful as well ... to imagine all that😭😭
But in the end there is a sense of happiness as well, that they are Together after being through so much ...!!!

But in the other sense,
In my opinion , Nisha did the right thing to try to stop him from doing evil , yet he left ...!!!
But i will never support suicide ... it can never be right ...!!!
And Kabir should have stopped ... because if a person claim to love a person , he can do anything and everything for his love ...!!!

On the whole ... it was Amazing Mansi ... !!!
I m a fan of your writing skills ... the way you express every little emotion , its Outstanding ...!!!
And with this TS , you Nailed it Dear ...!!!</font>

i know ami wat ur saying... and u r right... i too never support suicide...

Nisha here already had a tormented past where her only hope was kabir but when he turned his back towards her she lost it all... her child her love and her past came haunting her still she hanged her hope through a thin string but when it slipped, she too slipped in the pit of self loathing and agony. M not defending her but...yeah thats her thought process

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

Res @3:50 in the morning! 🤣 late night stalking!🤣

😆

Originally posted by: teju19

beautiful and emotional
update.

thank u 😳

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Superb!!!

thanks janvi 😳

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

50shades... 😆 get ur head out of there bhabhi... 😉 thank u

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Not happening, My heart belongs to Christian and Ana now❤️ 🤣

wat about someone special... baahar to nhi nikal dia 🤣

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

wat about someone special... baahar to nhi nikal dia 🤣

Ohh...my God! !!

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

Res @3:50 in the morning! 🤣 late night stalking!🤣

phinally, unres!😉

<font color="#ff0000">ye shaayad mera first comment hain?😆😆</font>

<font color="#ff0000">as you know, i am a kaanphoosed Dhampyre!😉issliye main is baar bhi kaanphoose ho gayi😕</font>

<font color="#ff0000">do you know, i read it three times to clear my confusion🤣</font>

<font color="#ff0000">coming to the TS!😳</font>

<font color="#ff0000">what more can i say, than Amazing, Brilliant, superb, wonderful, and NO MORE WORDS!😳😳😆</font>

<font color="#ff0000">your writing is a lot, lot perfect and beautiful, and it's only my fault that i get kaanphoosed( i have a DISASTROUS HABIT, of skipping lines while i read!😆😆)</font>

CHAPTER 1

In the starting, the way you have shown nisha and kabir's first meet was simply unexpected one, sorry but i thought that kabir was that Barista guy🤣🤣😳but then came kabir, and nisha directly landed in his arms☺️☺️

and her conscience😆😆

and kabir's POV😆☺️☺️and how he thinks he shouldn't have looked at her like that😆😆

and in that dark lane☺️☺️(i don't think that needs a comment?😆😆 )

his straight forwardness, and her replies☺️☺️

and "I don't kiss strangers"😆😆

and then the introduction😲☺️☺️

and then she asking him out for a coffee, and his thoughts!😆😆

the first chapter was closed down beautifully, with the readers leaving bewildered, blushing, and smiling, and i think that's a perfect combo!😆😆

CHAPTER 2

the second chapter was a bit emotional one😳

the revelation about their break up was quite a shock!😲

and how she has been still waiting for him, still hoping that he is going to return, and blaming herself for their separation, and remembering all their moments spent together brought tears😭😳and that's a mark of brilliance😳as how your writing effects your readers👏

she writing their tragic love story as a novel, was beautifully written, how she feels whenever she remembers him was heart-warming!😳❤️

"This book is my sole reason to survive"❤️❤️

and she cooking all his favorites for dinner, and he not being there😭

"every night i wait for him, i know i sound crazy but yes m crazy for him. i still crave for him"❤️❤️

how she remembers him every time!😳

and the flashback, was extremely beautiful!😳☺️☺️

them shifting together! their moments! the kiss!☺️☺️☺️

and how she gets emotional on remembering those moments she spent with him😭

and her proudly claiming his marks on her body😳😳😳

and how she hopes to meet him at least in her dreams😳😳

and then comes Kabir!😲late night into the house!😲😲

how he acknowledges her habits😳😳

and when he remembers about the first mark he gave her, was perfectly written!😳👏

and how he urges to see her😳😳and adores her😳😳

and the last line!😳❤️❤️

CHAPTER 3

it was quite the unexpected!😆😆😆

and a lot, lot confusing!😆😆

the release of her book, and she waiting for him to be there but he never arrives😭

she breaks down and gulps down sleeping pills to kill herself😲

the past, the revelation, the break up, her being pregnant and then losing the child, whoaa!

him being a killer😲😲

him hurting her

so many shocks in a single update!?😲😲

when did kabir die?😲😲if he died long ago, then who was that who comes to see her😕😲😲his bhoot?😕😕

then nisha dies, and they again meet each other!😕😕

but, you placed everything perfect in its place!😳😳

so, beautiful it was!😳😳😳

i lub you mansi for this❤️❤️❤️

keep writing!☺️☺️

P.S. comment zyaada bada hogaya ho to sorry🤣🤣🤣bas, clear my kaanphoosan please!🤣☢️

thank u pehle hi bol deti hu... ab start se start karte h... yup kabir died the same day of break up and whenever we read his POV it was his soul... after finally completing her book nisha felt her hands empty... she had nothing to call a hope... she thought it was better if it gets over because she was hurting for too long and there was no sign of his come back so she decided to kill herself... next mng though after dying she met kkabirin her house and he told her everything about his death about him being around her always...