NIBIR TS - One last night (updated) last part - Page 11

Awesome 👏 👏 👏
Very well written 😳
Loved it itna Sara❤️ 😳

Originally posted by: Ashveena.

Awesome 👏 👏 👏
Very well written 😳
Loved it itna Sara❤️ 😳

thanks aashoo.. 😃

Part 1

Superb start Mansi... 👏
The way u describe der POV's was commendable 👏
Your word selection was superb 👍🏼
The way nisha woke up n said sarcastically was written beautifully...the way u describe abt kabir throug Nisha's POV wo bhi do alag andaaz me...haaye kya bolu yr...tu hmesha apni writing skill se chauka deti h aur hmesha kuch alag likh daalti h...
Kabir's POV was also written superbly and a bit naughtily...

Loved it to the core...❤️

Part 2

OMG wo log alag ho gye... 😭
Nisha abhi bhi unki stories likh ri 😭
Her pain was described so beautifully yr 👏
And the way u describe every detail of it is fabulous...
FB scenes was written superbly 👏
M drooling over kabir's POV 👏 👏
U describe it in so detail..ki abhi bhi wo door band nhi krti...uske liye khana bna k rakhti h..stories likh ri and all...and d way he slept beside her was also written superbly...👏
Kabir became mystery for me...
Nisha ne aisa kya kia tha???

Part 3

Loved it totally❤️
Mystery is solved 😊
The way he kept black rose and went silently was written superbly 👏
And the way u describe about black rose was
Her pain 😭
Finally uski story published ho ri 😊 the way she reserved seat for him...
Omg unki 3rd anniversary and dat pendant ring...
She was pregnant 😊
But kabir kya nikla... 😭 😭
Der fight 😭
Then kabira nishu ko chhod k chala gya 😭
Coming to the present loved d way nishu describe abt love infront of RJ dat was so deep yr...loved it❤️
Kabir's pov ki wo wha baitha tha...but nisha ko jate dekha to he also get worried and den wen she gulped sleeping pills n kabir said now he had to come infront of her...was.. 😭 it really broke my heart into pieces...
Wo kabir ki spirit thi...jisko nisha ne apni yaado ki wajah se hmesha zinda rakha 😊
Loved nibir's morning scene... 😊
Finally wo sath ho gye... 😊
Mansi kya TS tha yr...aur likh... 😊

PS : i dont think ki suicide is for loosers...kabhi kabhi pain itna bad jata h ki ghut ght k jeene ki bajaye whi option nazar aata h...(its only my view no offence to anyone) n nisha was right in her decision...

i thought this story is with a simple concept after reading 1 update and by reading the last update ...tears just flowed from my eyes...i am a bit very emotional especially while reading nibir stories...this story has such a depth😭their beautiful love life has gone into a tragedy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭the last part was...speechless...just speechless i just stopped reading it twice but however completed reading it ...fantastic work dear

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Part 1

Superb start Mansi... 👏
The way u describe der POV's was commendable 👏
Your word selection was superb 👍🏼
The way nisha woke up n said sarcastically was written beautifully...the way u describe abt kabir throug Nisha's POV wo bhi do alag andaaz me...haaye kya bolu yr...tu hmesha apni writing skill se chauka deti h aur hmesha kuch alag likh daalti h...
Kabir's POV was also written superbly and a bit naughtily...

Loved it to the core...❤️

😆 😉 thank u nimzi...

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Part 2

OMG wo log alag ho gye... 😭
Nisha abhi bhi unki stories likh ri 😭
Her pain was described so beautifully yr 👏
And the way u describe every detail of it is fabulous...
FB scenes was written superbly 👏
M drooling over kabir's POV 👏 👏
U describe it in so detail..ki abhi bhi wo door band nhi krti...uske liye khana bna k rakhti h..stories likh ri and all...and d way he slept beside her was also written superbly...👏
Kabir became mystery for me...
Nisha ne aisa kya kia tha???

drooling 😆 thank u nimzi... 😳

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Part 3

Loved it totally❤️
Mystery is solved 😊
The way he kept black rose and went silently was written superbly 👏
And the way u describe about black rose was
Her pain 😭
Finally uski story published ho ri 😊 the way she reserved seat for him...
Omg unki 3rd anniversary and dat pendant ring...
She was pregnant 😊
But kabir kya nikla... 😭 😭
Der fight 😭
Then kabira nishu ko chhod k chala gya 😭
Coming to the present loved d way nishu describe abt love infront of RJ dat was so deep yr...loved it❤️
Kabir's pov ki wo wha baitha tha...but nisha ko jate dekha to he also get worried and den wen she gulped sleeping pills n kabir said now he had to come infront of her...was.. 😭 it really broke my heart into pieces...
Wo kabir ki spirit thi...jisko nisha ne apni yaado ki wajah se hmesha zinda rakha 😊
Loved nibir's morning scene... 😊
Finally wo sath ho gye... 😊
Mansi kya TS tha yr...aur likh... 😊

PS : i dont think ki suicide is for loosers...kabhi kabhi pain itna bad jata h ki ghut ght k jeene ki bajaye whi option nazar aata h...(its only my view no offence to anyone) n nisha was right in her decision...

i agree with u nimzi... sometimes it serves right... but it do depends on the psychic of everyone... what they think

Originally posted by: Niha0606

i thought this story is with a simple concept after reading 1 update and by reading the last update ...tears just flowed from my eyes...i am a bit very emotional especially while reading nibir stories...this story has such a depth😭their beautiful love life has gone into a tragedy😭the last part was...speechless...just speechless i just stopped reading it twice but however completed reading it ...fantastic work dear

thanks nihu. 😳