Res @3:50 in the morning! 🤣 late night stalking!🤣
phinally, unres!😉
ye shaayad mera first comment hain?😆😆
as you know, i am a kaanphoosed Dhampyre!😉 issliye main is baar bhi kaanphoose ho gayi😕
do you know, i read it three times to clear my confusion🤣
coming to the TS!😳
what more can i say, than Amazing, Brilliant, superb, wonderful, and NO MORE WORDS!😳😳😆
your writing is a lot, lot perfect and beautiful, and it's only my fault that i get kaanphoosed( i have a DISASTROUS HABIT, of skipping lines while i read!😆😆)
CHAPTER 1
In the starting, the way you have shown nisha and kabir's first meet was simply unexpected one, sorry but i thought that kabir was that Barista guy🤣🤣😳 but then came kabir, and nisha directly landed in his arms☺️☺️
and her conscience😆😆
and kabir's POV😆☺️☺️ and how he thinks he shouldn't have looked at her like that😆😆
and in that dark lane☺️☺️ (i don't think that needs a comment?😆😆 )
his straight forwardness, and her replies☺️☺️
and "I don't kiss strangers"😆😆
and then the introduction😲☺️☺️
and then she asking him out for a coffee, and his thoughts!😆😆
the first chapter was closed down beautifully, with the readers leaving bewildered, blushing, and smiling, and i think that's a perfect combo!😆😆
CHAPTER 2
the second chapter was a bit emotional one😳
the revelation about their break up was quite a shock!😲
and how she has been still waiting for him, still hoping that he is going to return, and blaming herself for their separation, and remembering all their moments spent together brought tears 😭😳 and that's a mark of brilliance😳 as how your writing effects your readers👏
she writing their tragic love story as a novel, was beautifully written, how she feels whenever she remembers him was heart-warming!😳❤️
"This book is my sole reason to survive" ❤️❤️
and she cooking all his favorites for dinner, and he not being there😭
"every night i wait for him, i know i sound crazy but yes m crazy for him. i still crave for him"❤️❤️
how she remembers him every time!😳
and the flashback, was extremely beautiful!😳☺️☺️
them shifting together! their moments! the kiss!☺️☺️☺️
and how she gets emotional on remembering those moments she spent with him😭
and her proudly claiming his marks on her body😳😳😳
and how she hopes to meet him at least in her dreams😳😳
and then comes Kabir!😲late night into the house!😲😲
how he acknowledges her habits😳😳
and when he remembers about the first mark he gave her, was perfectly written!😳👏
and how he urges to see her😳😳 and adores her😳😳
and the last line!😳❤️❤️
CHAPTER 3
it was quite the unexpected!😆😆😆
and a lot, lot confusing!😆😆
the release of her book, and she waiting for him to be there but he never arrives😭
she breaks down and gulps down sleeping pills to kill herself😲
the past, the revelation, the break up, her being pregnant and then losing the child, whoaa!
him being a killer😲😲
him hurting her
so many shocks in a single update!?😲😲
when did kabir die?😲😲 if he died long ago, then who was that who comes to see her 😕😲😲 his bhoot?😕😕
then nisha dies, and they again meet each other!😕😕
but, you placed everything perfect in its place!😳😳
so, beautiful it was!😳😳😳
i lub you mansi for this❤️❤️❤️
keep writing!☺️☺️
P.S. comment zyaada bada hogaya ho to sorry🤣🤣🤣 bas, clear my kaanphoosan please!🤣☢️
Edited by ..MysticAura.. - 9 years ago
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