NiBir Story-My Hell My Heaven epilogue up - Page 26

Originally posted by: Niha0606

"Nisha open the door... Nisha what happened yesterday, why is everything out of place... Nisha plz Nisha plz come out Nisha... u r alright na,...the entire cookery is on the floor in the hall... Nisha plz come out Nisha... I am dying Nisha plz... I need to know." I heard his voice and even his sobs but I just could not bring myself to face him. The voice and banging stopped for a min or so and then I heard his most broken voice "Nisha u r alright na" I controlled my cries and somehow managed to reply him "kabir.. I..I am fine, I..need some time plz" "ya I realise I have done something nasty last night" came his reply and I only broke into more tears. "...
Brought tears in my eyes tooo
I became sooo emotional...

Originally posted by: Niha0606

And yes this is my favorite among ur stories ritu
Just amazing

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

ahh...i hate this Arjun!
But you've managed to make me love kabir more!
What Nisha went through was really painful!
You've written everything brilliantly!
Do update soon!

Originally posted by: neha_zamia500

Last part made me cry.. I m so exited now.. ajeeb lagta hai yaar when I try to avoid something but later on i get that. Nice one

All I have to do is wait. 😆

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Superb update ritz.. poor nisha 😭... update this soon ... what will happen next 😔 ...

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Okay... I am actually speechless.. I don't know what to say...

You actually brought out some real terror here...

Commendable writing 👏

I could feel Nisha's and Kabir's emotions perfectly... Arjun is such an animal... 🐷

Okay... I think that pig was unnecessary... but it was thr only animal I found in the emoticon gallery :P

Anyways, continue soon... and thanks for the PM 😳

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Superb episode...

Please update it soon...

Eager to know more..u have made it more interesting...

Thanks for di pm...😊

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome Ritu👍🏼
NiBir😭

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Ritu😭...u made me cry😭
I'm speechless😭
Arjun😡...idiot jerk bloody MCP kahinka😡
Poor Nishu😭
Kabiraa😭...I hope vo khudko hurt na kare😭
Ritu please update soon😭

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Bole to ek dum jakas wala update...

Superb!!!!

Plzz update soon... can't wait for the next part