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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Res
Finally unres 😃
Superb update ritika 👏
Poor nibir 😭
Arjun 😡 seriously iska toh ghajini se bura hai 😆
Felt bad for kabir
Kabir gone 😕 where?
Next part padtha hu abhi 😉 😆

Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Superb update yaar superb 👏 👏

Ek dum shocking tha...

Poor nisha 😭

I too feel bad for kabir also 😭

Or bhi interesting ho gaya hai do continue soon please...!!!!

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Niharika

@Niha0606

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Ritu it's all ur fault abbb mujhe next update jaldi mathlab bahuth jaldi chahiye I can't wait ...
Last scenes just brought tears in my eyes...
Poor kabira ...it was not his mistake ...but it was his mistake. ...I am crying ...@ritu stop me ...

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Niharika

@Niha0606

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

"Nisha open the door... Nisha what happened yesterday, why is everything out of place... Nisha plz Nisha plz come out Nisha... u r alright na,...the entire cookery is on the floor in the hall... Nisha plz come out Nisha... I am dying Nisha plz... I need to know." I heard his voice and even his sobs but I just could not bring myself to face him. The voice and banging stopped for a min or so and then I heard his most broken voice "Nisha u r alright na" I controlled my cries and somehow managed to reply him "kabir.. I..I am fine, I..need some time plz" "ya I realise I have done something nasty last night" came his reply and I only broke into more tears. "...
Brought tears in my eyes tooo
I became sooo emotional...

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Niharika

@Niha0606

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

And yes this is my favorite among ur stories ritu
Just amazing

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

ahh...i hate this Arjun!
But you've managed to make me love kabir more!
What Nisha went through was really painful!
You've written everything brilliantly!
Do update soon!

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neha_zamia500

@neha_zamia500

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Last part made me cry.. I m so exited now.. ajeeb lagta hai yaar when I try to avoid something but later on i get that. Nice one

All I have to do is wait. 😆

Edited by neha_zamia500 - 9 years ago