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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Amina...
Tooo Shocking ...!!!
Arjun is such a... 😡😡😡
Poor Kabir 😭😭😭
Felt sooo bad for Nisha 😭😭😭
What will Kabir do now
Please continue soon ...!!!

thanks amina😃

will update soon

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321
Nice update...
Felt sad for nisha ...bechara kabir😭
Pls do continue soon 😊

thanks yaar😃

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Awsome update
poor nisha ... feel bad for nisha or kabir
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome update
poor nisha ... feel bad for nisha or kabir
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

thanks anu😃

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: Niha0606
Mujhe update chahiye

Mujhe bhi mujhe bhi 😃

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Niha0606
Mujhe update chahiye

kal milegi abhi tak nhi likha

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Mujhe bhi mujhe bhi 😃

kal😉

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Soha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Heart wrenching..very well written update 😭👏
Poor nibir 😭
Gadhe Arjun ko nikalo 🤔
Update soon please

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Crazysoha
Heart wrenching..very well written update 😭👏
Poor nibir 😭
Gadhe Arjun ko nikalo 🤔
Update soon please

thanks sohu😃

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Sorry for the super late comment

Chap 5:

Very nice chapter ritika!

Finally it happened! 😔

I knew all along that this would happen but still couldn't bring myself to accept it! Poor Nisha!

The differences you've shown between Kabir and his alter ego Arjun is really good!

And that comparison you have done with Nisha's bangles is wonderfull! 👍🏼

Kabir hurting himself for what he has done in a subconscious state is so sad to read! 😔

Chap 6:

Such a heartbreaking chapter it was!!

How excited was Nisha to celebrate their anniversary but what did it end up in!!

From Arjun's MCP behaviour to Nisha going through all the pain and finally breaking down in the washroom was wonderfully written!

But, here i feel more for Kabir than Nisha! Poor guy is so helpless and doesn't even have control of the pain he is inflicting on the person whom he loves so much! 😒

Kabir's shock and horror after realising that he forced her was brilliantly written!

What is he going to do to himself now?!!

Do continue soon please and thanks for pm 😊