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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Read all the parts in a go in the morning. At first I had thought of reading some today and some later on but I just couldn't... every part reached my curiosity to the next level😃
It was really a Mind Blowing concept Ritika!❤️
Nailed it yaar!!! superbly written the story👏👏👏
There were so many Heart wrenching parts 😭😭
Not all love stories are happy😔
But seriously vo disorder waala in reality pricks in heart yaar😭
And when their child was introduced i had thought it's Kabir actually and not his child
But still Kabir's there at least😊
Loved it to the core!!!
You write awesome🤗

thank u so much neeru😳
this was the first serious story i wrote😆
and am i glad having all of yours support🤗
Posted: 8 years ago
Ritiiikkkaaa how r u??
Finally I read this story...
A big thankyou to u...
U know ye story mere bahut kam ayi...
Sunday ko we want on trip n I read ur story while travellinh itna lamba rastaa tha but teri story padta padta kab nikal gya pata b nai chala...
Will do the detailed comment soon 😉
This was really emotional story by d way
Posted: 8 years ago
U know wat meine Decide ki thi I will read annie ki OS or TS but that girl She didnt told me Any name of her story jo rotlu n adult na ho 😆
I asked her "koi simple sweet si happy happy wali story bata teri jo complete ho" but She said "aisa kuch yaad nai ara", and finally I end up reading this story 😃
But it was awsm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Ritiiikkkaaa how r u??

Finally I read this story...
A big thankyou to u...
U know ye story mere bahut kam ayi...
Sunday ko we want on trip n I read ur story while travellinh itna lamba rastaa tha but teri story padta padta kab nikal gya pata b nai chala...
Will do the detailed comment soon 😉
This was really emotional story by d way


I am fine Neha 😃
How's you
Really glad ki story tumhare kam aayi 😆
Waiting for your detailed comment 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

U know wat meine Decide ki thi I will read annie ki OS or TS but that girl She didnt told me Any name of her story jo rotlu n adult na ho 😆

I asked her "koi simple sweet si happy happy wali story bata teri jo complete ho" but She said "aisa kuch yaad nai ara", and finally I end up reading this story 😃
But it was awsm


Lol yr 😆
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways


I am fine Neha 😃
How's you
Really glad ki story tumhare kam aayi 😆
Waiting for your detailed comment 😉



I m also good
filhal cold n cough ne pareshan kiya hua h😆
Sunday ko hum log karjat gye the wahan pe pass me ek waterfall h jahan waterfall rappelling kari and and itna lamba walk tracking n pahad chadna pada phir waterfall me Pani ka Jo pressure sar pe aya 😆
BYGOD haal ka behaal h abi 🤣
tera detailed comment idk kab ayega!! coz I think me part 2 tak hi pada n comment kiya h and Sunday ko meine wapas prologue se read ko coz meko nai yaad thi story
pura I think 12 h na??
haan bade kaam ayi ye story mere raaste bhar!!
and you u almost made me cry at some point in this story... but raaste me roo b nai sakte!!
chal meine bahut paka diya yoga tujhe ab bye... I will try to comment n ures also jitne b hain pehle k unpe and thoda thoda ksrke pura karti hu kyunki bahut Sara h 🤣
ol bye will comment soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786



I m also good
filhal cold n cough ne pareshan kiya hua h😆
Sunday ko hum log karjat gye the wahan pe pass me ek waterfall h jahan waterfall rappelling kari and and itna lamba walk tracking n pahad chadna pada phir waterfall me Pani ka Jo pressure sar pe aya 😆
BYGOD haal ka behaal h abi 🤣
tera detailed comment idk kab ayega!! coz I think me part 2 tak hi pada n comment kiya h and Sunday ko meine wapas prologue se read ko coz meko nai yaad thi story
pura I think 12 h na??
haan bade kaam ayi ye story mere raaste bhar!!
and you u almost made me cry at some point in this story... but raaste me roo b nai sakte!!
chal meine bahut paka diya yoga tujhe ab bye... I will try to comment n ures also jitne b hain pehle k unpe and thoda thoda ksrke pura karti hu kyunki bahut Sara h 🤣
ol bye will comment soon


Take your time
Loved your experience I too wanna go tracking once 😳
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways


Take your time
Loved your experience I too wanna go tracking once 😳



mera to pehla aur last time tha may b 🤣
mere bas ka nai h ye sab!!
u know me to pahad se latak gyi thi!! I was in very had state 😵
mujhe laga tha I will die like thus only 🤣
but somehow I finished the repelling
Posted: 8 years ago
Unressed on part 6&7on page 40
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Posted: 8 years ago
I read it aging today.. and I literally cried.. omg.. hoe m I gonna sleep now and the song I was hearing was agar tum saath ho.. it made me more emotional

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