NIBIR SS - SAATHI REY!! note on page 26 - Page 9

Originally posted by: poornima_15

superb update 😊 this was something really i cant even think of and u wrote it so well i don't have words to express all the feelings the characters have are very realistic ...
kabir and daksh bonding the craze for literature the little boy has was well described 😊
kabir's pov - amazing even after trying hard to stay away he cant ..." She looked like an angel in
this whole white hospital background. But i
dont like it... may be if in future she would be
lying like this sleeping in my room with a cute
smile on her face, i would love to see... hold on
there... what the heck i m thinking" 😆 ohh poor kabir the game his mind is playing with him 😳 kya soach raha h 😊 jo bhi soach raha h achcha h ... 😃
nisha's pov ... even in this emmense pain she is thinking abt him 😃
aag dono taaf baraabar h 😉
and not to forget the room 18M seems mysterious 😊 and there is nothing wrong in ur update its mindblowing as always 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW !!!
AWESOME STORY MANSI ...!!!
THE CONCEPT IS GREAT ...!!!
AS THIS IS ABOUT A DOCTOR , AND I LOVE THESE KIND OF STORIES ... ACTUALLY I LOVE DOCTORS ...!!!
AND AS ALWAYS , YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT VERY BEAUTIFULLY ...!!!
AND THE WAY THE STORY IS PROGRESSING , ITS BEAUTIFUL ...!!!
KABIR CARING FOR THE GIRL , BUT KEPT DENYING IT ...!!!
AND NISHA , EVEN IN A STATE OF COMA , THINKING ABOUT KABIR ONLY ... AWWEEE ITS SO CUUUTTTEEE ...!!!
AND I JUST LOVED KABIR AND DAKSH'S PART ... IT IS ONE AMAZING THING ABOUT THIS STORY ...!!!
ON THE WHOLE , LOVED IT SO SO SO SOOO MUCH ...!!!
THANKS FOR THE PM AND CONTINUE SOON PLEASE ...!!!


AND ONE THING I M UNABLE TO UNDERSTAND IS , WHY I DIDN'T READ THE CHAPTER 1 ... AS I JUST READ THE TWO CHAPTERS TOGETHER ... AND I DONT HOW IT SKIPPED FROM MY BRAIN OR HOW I DIDN'T GOT TO KNOW THAT YOU HAVE UPDATED YOUR STORY ... I M QUITE CONFUSED RIGHT KNOW ... BUT ANYWAY I M REALLY SORRY DEAR FOR NOT READING IT BEFORE ...!!!

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

my wifey is kamaal 👏
this story is really interesting and I am waiting for nisha to wake up
I love daksh he is such a cutie pie a strong yet innocent kid
NiBir don't know each other yet they falling for each other
superb
fantastic awesome
fabulous
perfectly described as you always do
interesting concept 👍🏼
continue soonish wifey
loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: anu012

Fantastic update mansi👍🏼
wow !!!! daksh write stories or love to read about literature ... lovely
beautifully described kabir daksh relation or nibir feelings to each other ... loved it ...❤️ ❤️ ❤️
cont soon

Originally posted by: vishesh_Tippani

here nothing is wrong with ur story dear...
everything is just perfectly set in place

let me start commenting on ur character sketch ...
it was fab..ALL characters were well described.
with added surprise package...🤣

coming to the prologue

that was interesting... building up more curiosity...

and lastly

About 1&2nd chap.
Story as well as Kabir&Nisha' POV were well written.
I must say I to enjoyed reading dis story.

AAG DONO TARAF BARABAR KI LAGI H ...coz.Nisha k dimag se b wo chehra ni jara na hi kabir k dimag se...
cs .m waiting kab nisha will open her eyes TO BECOME *NIBIR*

THANX DR.MANSI...
now m getting dis point y readers complaining DAT my chapters of story r TOO small 😉

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Wow wow wow mansi another amazing update

As usual beautifully written👏👏👏👏

Kabir's POV was awesome he was thinking about nisha only very nicely written and then entry of Daksh... Kabir and daksh bonding awesomely portrait😊

Then Nisha's POV another presentation of your amazing writing skills she want to wake up but can't and remembering about stranger was awesome😳

Adheer and kabir scene was very funny and nice😆

This is very mysterious and interesting update😊

Now my doubt when kabir said I miss you mom then a "you miss me too" voice come what was that???? I don't understand... Something in past ???

Originally posted by: Crazysoha

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Awesome update mansi

Beautifully written👏👏👏

Mansi loved it

Kabir adheer and anaya are childhood buddies 😳

loved the trio❤️

Adheer trying to convince kabir

their conversation was very well written👏

Adheer and anaya are so cute😳

Kabir teasing adheer😆

Adheer and anaya worried for kabir

adheer or anaya kabir k setup karna chahte ha😉

Oh no accident hogaya kis ka😲

Kabir is admiring her😳

instead of taking her to the hospital😆

Kabir and maira conversation was very well written👏👏

scenes description dialogues everything was perfect👏👏 beautifully portrayed😳

Thanks for the PM

Sorry for being late😊

Originally posted by: Niha0606

u know abb thak ka meri favourite story hai DESTINED TOGETHER but after this update i am just awww after this story

kabiraa in doctor apron

i am going to faint imagining it😳

loved loved Nisha's pov ...i think every girl will think the same after seeing kabiraa😛

daksh ...is me😆😆😆over romantic genre😆i think he will bring nibir together😉😉😉

lagtha hai nisha ka jagda hua hai apne parivaar ke saath

kabir-daksh conversation was simply cute and sweet😃

kabir's POVthe best part

P.S:Nothing is wrong with the updates dear ...i know writer's do feel bad if their is no enough recognition ...but trust me everyone love love love love love love love love love love love love love love

reading ur updates😃infact will wait for them eagerly😃but u know naa it's high time for exams and importantly entrance tests...issliye kam comments mil rahi hai ...aur forum bhi bhooth bhagla ban chuki hai...ek baar sab khatham hone dho paagal family will be back😃

just remember ur stories and updates are really amazing dil se sab bhol rahi hu😃

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Wow Amazing Update Mansi...👏👏

Daksh is so cute...his story is published in magazine...thats mean he is very much talented...😊
Kabiraa & Dakhsh's bonding is great...😃

Kabiraa is taking extra care of his mystery girl...😳...he is already thinking about Nishu so much...Nishu ko jab hosh ayega tab Kabiraa kya karega...😉

Nishu's pov was mindblowing...👏👏...u wrote it beautifully...👏👏...even in this state Nishu is thinking about Kabiraa...

Adheer is so funny...😆

Now Nishu us shifted in Dakhsh's room...😊

Very interesting update...continue soon...thanx for the pm...😊