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Chapter 2- Superb update😃
I like the fact that this chapter gives us an insight into both Kabir and Nisha's thoughts😳
That part where he talks about her blood staining his body and his soul is indicative of how deep an impact that short encounter with Nisha has made on him !
Love how u have penned down his thoughts👏👏
Love how Kabir is terrified by this Daksh's love for literature😆
Love that line about Daksh's eyes widening like saucers😆 Interesting analogy😆
For a child who has been subject to child abuse repeatedly, I like his enthusiasm😊 Interestingly I nw of this program where children subjected to abuse are encouraged to read as it helps them forget their troubles and find inspiration to fight circumstances😊
Love how he screamed in delight when he saw his story published in fav magazine😳
That part where Kabir mentions that he had to fake yawns to not listen to Shakespeare was hilarious and cute😆😆
Also loved that part where Sister Angela asks Kabir to rest and Kabir explains how he is an innocent soul with the whole world trying to gang up on him . This part was super cute and adorable😳
I like how Kabir tries to pamper Daksh by giving him a new book every few days😳
I m completely intrigued by that part where a faint whisper rings in Kabir's head and he is terrified ! I love your a brilliant technique to not reveal much about Kabir's past but still make a mention of it to keep ur readers intrigued👏👏 Somehow it leads me to conclude that incident/memory that keeps troubling Kabir is somehow associated with his mother 😆
Anyway whatever it is, I m sure we will know it soon. Tab tak ke liye my Sherlock Holmes mind will keep devising theories about Kabir's past😆
Also I love the last part of Kabir's monologue where Kabir despite being realistic and practical, still wants her to wake up and talk to him. I m referring to him as realistic cz as a doctor he knows how situations like this end up😊
I love how he imagines her sleeping in his room and it is cute and romantic to see Kabir think about Nisha in this manner😳 I just love the last line of his monologue❤️
Now coming to the second part of the chapter😊
Love Nisha's monolgue❤️
Firstly I would like to applaud u for presenting a person's thoughts who is presumed to be in coma👏👏👏
It is the first time I m reading something like this😃 Although we do see it in movies but that is mostly when a person is either proceeding to the after life or coming back to senses but not like this😉
I love how u portray Nisha as confused as to whether she is dead or alive😆 I love how she says that being in heaven is not possible for her 😆
I love how in this state also, all she is thinking about is Kabir😳 Be it his handsome features or the genuineness on his face😳 That part where she is thinking about Kabir's eye colour and is thinking which suits him better is cute and funny😳😆
Also I love how you describe her state as continuously falling asleep in a dreamless state every 5 min and being tied with invisible ropes👏👏👏 Quite interesting and creative u see😉😃 Since we really dont know what happens, good conjecture on ur part😉
Also love how she wants to wake up and feel him, see him indicating that she too is attracted to him😳
I think we can safely say ki aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai😆😆
The fact that she can feel his warmth and presence signifies that their connection is deeper than just a mere attraction and its like their souls are connected with each other
Adheer ki shaadi pakki hogai Love the way Kabir reacts😆Love the bond Adheer and Kabir share😳 Love how Adheer has sensed that Kabir is drawn to this girl😃
And that last line of the chapter was❤️ so romantic and so dreamy
Wonderful chapter mansi😃
And I m sure iss kahani mein hume Dr Mansi ke khayalon aur routine ke baare mein aur pata chalega😆😉
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